Naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynast chapter 6 a unbreakable will

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chapter 1:
chapter 2:
chapter 3:
chapter 3 part 2:
chapter 3 part 3:
chapter 4 part 1:
chapter 4 part 2:
chapter 5:
chapter 6:

now
chapter 6 part 2 a unbreakable will ( i know in the previous ch it was a fight for freedom but i think this fits it better)

naruto walks through the hall ways inside fukushima's house, he rounds the room to where hinata's room is. to his confusion she is not there.

regaining his cool
naruto knowing her * he whispers*

he exits the room to see three kunai coming at him. he smiles

naruto water style: water wall

a small goush of water stops the kunais in their tracks

??? hmph welcome back naruto

the voice steps into the light its sasuke with his ems activated. he looks to been training as he is sweating.

sasuke well are you going to say at least say hi to me sakura. Or even garra the new leader of the free shinobi alliance

naruto walks toward sasuke

naruto sure * in a silent tone*

sasuke leads him to her bedroom. as he opens the door sakura launches at him.

sakura great ne... na naruto * in shocked tone*

she whispers somthing in sasuke ear and he smiles

sasuke O! i see are you sure we should tell him
sakura yes!

he walks back to naruto

sasuke naruto hinata as been taking to be trained by fukusaku. A week ago i don't know for what though. But she has not returned yet

naruto remembers his times with and a great worry approaches his face

naruto o crap

he goes into senin mode and scans the mountain's village he sees a chakara simular to his senin mode near the old training grounds

naruto im sorry i must go

he runs out through the hall and out a window

garra SASUKE! GET UP NOW OUTTER PRIMETER UNDER ATTACK! GET EVERYONE UP NOW! ITS NOT DAMIYO LOYALIST

* at the old training grounds*

hinata HALT WHO GOES THERE

naruto steps around in senin mode

naruto hinata *in a tender voice*

he begins to walk toward her

hinata na naru NARUTO! * shes screams*

she runs to him and she flings her self on him and kisses him the cheek

hinata i missed you so much *she whispers*

naruto holds her in an embrace tears form in his eyes

naruto i did too

she breaks naruto grip and stand still with her eyes closed

naruto what are you doi....

he stares in awe as hinata eyes goes to that of his senin's. around her eyes the trade mark rings of red form she's now a sage

hinata well what do you think
naruto i think you look

BOOM!!! a massive explosion forms. naruto scans the area of the explosion to see fellow ninja fight 5 unkown assailants.

naruto no how did they know. lord ashi said he would try to make sure they would not find out.

he transforms into his bijuu mode lv 2

hinata im coming with you

naruto snaps back around to face her

naruto these people hinata are my teachers and as their student im forced to confront and stop them. if you get involved they will kill you

hinatas steps toward naruto

hinata but i can't just leave you out there

naruto looks at her into her eyes he walks to her.

naruto hinata

he holds her in an embrace and kisses her passionatly

naruto forgive me but i won't let you die for me please don't follow me

she looks at him.

hinata please come back safe *she whispers*

she turns back to her base form and watches naruto run off to the direction of the explosion.

* on the battle field*

sasuke huh huh.... not bad

he looks right at uzugaki and gonzo

sakura Sasuke im backing you up

she darts to sasuke's side

sasuke fine *he whispers*

suddenly kikyo and ashi appears

kikyo were is uzumaki naruto

gonzo gets behind her and ashi along with uzugaki

garra give that up if you looking for him you have go through us
amaroshi look i don't know if he's told you anything but if you insist. as my right as head divine i now consider your lifes forfeit

he motion gonzo and uzugaki to get back on sasuke. and motions kikyo and ashi to get on garra. he activates his dojutsu the funaki and sees sakura

amaroshi SPARE THE GIRL!

sasuke looks over to her wondering why

sakura cowards

he looks back at her

amaroshi if you insist.

gonzo charges at sasuke while uzugaki charges a lightning attack

gonzo earth style: heavy weighted punch

rocks fuse to his hands as he charges sasuke at break neck speeds

sasuke SASUNOO

an oranage version of sasuke's old sasunoo forms.

sasuke fire *he whispers*

the arrow from the sasunoo covered in amatarasu flames heads right at gonzo

gonzo NOW

he goes underground before the arrows hit

uzugaki grand lightning style: shock ball

the ball forms in uzugaki's hands and is launched at sasuke's sasunoo

sasuke hmph

he is hit with it and disappears

uzugaki ha to easa....

bam a kick from sasuke sends him flying. now in ems sasuke looks upon his enemies

sasuke guess i was going to have to use this some time

his eyes grows extra tomeo and a new ring forms around the eternal magenkyo sharigan

sasuke now im giving you an option. 1 you tell your master to back down off sakura or 2 ill kill were you stand. because i have achieved what many uchiha that the ems strived for THE DIVINE MANGENKYO SHARINGAN!

sasuke forms 3 shadow clones and amatarusu flames spourt around them

sasuke clocks ticking

gonzo comes up under the ground behind sasuke. but is met with a foot to the face. that sends him flyin

uzugaki im going to....

bam one of sasuke's clones slams him to the ground

sasuke going to do what

he looks around garra has been knocked unconsious from a light from ashi

amaroshi look boy you move she dies. i wish not for that to happen and that defies my oath

sasuke deactivates the dms and drops to his knees

amaroshi good boy NOW!

kikyo turns and launches water tendrils at sasuke. sasuke braces him self for death

sakura SASUKE!!!!

she struggles to get out of amaroshi's grasp. the tendrils stop a few inchs from sasuke chest. a naruto clone axe kicks kikyo sending her flying.

naruto LET HER GO! I DON'T CARE IF YOU ARE DIVINES I WILL NOT STAND FOR THIS

naruto come out of the trees with 5 more bijuu shadow clones at his back

amaroshi what do you mean traitor you sold us out to spys looking for power

naruto looks confused

ashi he saided him self before he put me through a wall your going to get payback for that

gonzo charges right at garra

hinata IM BACKING YOU UP!

she comes down in senin mode and slams gonzo into the ground and hits all his chakara points twice

hinata one down

all them look in shock as uzugaki shots off a lightning bolt at hinata. naruto gets there in time and deflects it

naruto i told you to stay put *he yells*
hinata NO! im not hangining back anymore let you do all the work. im going to help weither you like it or not

the rest of the divines wait for amaroshi's judgement

amaroshi you may kill her but capture naruto alive

sasuke looks in shock as sakura is toss on the ground clenching her stomach

naruto the hell ill let you kill her

kikyo looks stunned she knows that attidude the aggresive protective attidude then she wonders

kikyo my lord i don't think he was here to give intell i think may be here for

amaroshi you dare doubt ashi judgement

she looks back at him and ashi

kikyo YES I DO!

she is hit by a blast wave from ashi and knocks her out cold

naruto here they come hinata

he sends 2 clones from him to hinata

naruto clone we'll protect her

naruto and hinata charge at uzugaki

sasuke sakura are you ok

he looks at her with his dms he sees two chakara signatures one hers the other inside her very weak

sakura do you hate me *she says in a weak voice*

sasuke no i don't. NARUTO IM GETTING SAKURA OUT OF HERE!

naruto looks back at them barely blocking a kick from ashi

naruto GO!

naruto chages a rasangan sending ashi flying into a tree

hinata sage art: nature fist

she uses her byakugan in conjuction with senin mode and delives a serious of huge punches at uzugaki. but he disappears and lightning over comes her body

hinata AHHHHH!

she collaspes with uzugaki about to deliver the final blow a clone makes a sucide block and is cut in half and disperses.

naruto damn their just to strong together i need to take uzugaki now

he charges at uzugaki and grabs him.

naruto lightning style: lightning rod

lightning hits naruto and he knocks uzugaki out cold. but he goes back to his base form

hinata im sorry naruto kun

he looks her in the eye

naruto don't be

amaroshi and ashi look at them him ready to die for her. her ready to die for him.

amaroshi are you sure he was here to sell us out

ashi looks at him

ashi * damn looks liked hes gotta die*

amaroshi walks to hinata and naruto

amaroshi come with me now
naruto go to hell
amaroshi did you betray us
naruto no

he looks in naruto eyes he hands naruto the scroll

naruto why did you give me this

ashi charges at amaroshi a black claw grows from his hand. they cut right into amaroshi stomach. amaroshi turns his head around to face his killer

amaroshi i knew it

naruto look stun as amaroshi collaspes

naruto WHY!

ashi turns his eye into the demagan

ashi for lord yamamotto

end ch6p2 part 3 comes out tommrow along with the new series mass effect before it began a prolouge to the series of games and novels
 
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srry its long but ch6 is at its climax next is part 3 unleashed will be released at 10:00pm tommrow and at 7 catch the release of mass effect before it began now im asking for help give me feed back who ever views this so i can improve

i know its long im srry bout that
 
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Wow, is Naruto and Hinata were married in this story? And the enemy girl is named Kikyo, I'm imagining Kikyo in Inu yasha her looks is good for a villain.
Need to read the older chapters to catch up :ghehe:
great, + Rep
 

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Wow, is Naruto and Hinata were married in this story? And the enemy girl is named Kikyo, I'm imagining Kikyo in Inu yasha her looks is good for a villain.
Need to read the older chapters to catch up :ghehe:
great, + Rep
im srry there not married but look on the flip side the future is uncertain
 
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