Naruto: Regashī | Chapter 8: Team Shikamaru's power

[Danielgf04]

It was nice to see that Asuma wielded his father’s weapon as well as his jutsu ^^ Wow, finally these enemies are actually more capable. Asuma displayed an epic scene of his worthiness. Nice insight into Shika/Asuma’s past event I liked Shikamaru’s king reference ^^ Much to my surprise, I actually liked the combo jutsu between Shika/Temari. These ninja use such a powerful release such as the dark released and yet completely fail to succeed in their attempt. The ending to this chapter was very surprising. For the leader of these dark release users to be a juvenile in my opinion, must mean that he is very powerful. And he also has an army as his command to boot. I thought this was by far your best chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed the action sequences!

That king

The leader of the platoon is a kid, that was always planned to be my best cliffhanger in the first 10 chapters XD And to give you hints on how strong he is, I made Naruto sense his terrifying chakra and claim that he could sense his strength from his chakra xp

The leader of the dark release users will also be revealed to be in full control of his Dark Release as he has thaught his subordinates some techs, like the two ninjas that attacked Naruto's team.

Thanks bro! XP I really aprecciate your feedback as it is very pleasant to read and since you go trough every part of a chapter! I must thank you for this and I would love if you kept reading my FF and posting your comments as well! =D=D

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

That king

The leader of the platoon is a kid, that was always planned to be my best cliffhanger in the first 10 chapters XD And to give you hints on how strong he is, I made Naruto sense his terrifying chakra and claim that he could sense his strength from his chakra xp

The leader of the dark release users will also be revealed to be in full control of his Dark Release as he has thaught his subordinates some techs, like the two ninjas that attacked Naruto's team.

Thanks bro! XP I really aprecciate your feedback as it is very pleasant to read and since you go trough every part of a chapter! I must thank you for this and I would love if you kept reading my FF and posting your comments as well! =D=D

lol at the king reference XD

Nice to know that you had the youthful leader decided earlier on-I too have thought up things from future chapters myself ^^ Oh, I suppose Naruto’s sensing the young leader’s chakra must have been overlooked unfortunately but thanks for informing me of that.

I definitely look forward to see how this leader progresses and it was my pleasure. You never had to ask as I would of course continuing reading And thank you for the compliments ^^