Naruto: Regashī | Chapter 2: Students
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I see Akemi has not only picked up on her father’s trademark catch phrase but ever so slightly changed it and made it her own lol I liked that Kotetsu/Izumo made an appearance and so the reasoning behind Naruto/Akemi’s departure has been revealed. So it appears as though Naruto spreading the words of Jiraiya’s book led the ninja world to peace. I liked that Tsunade was also featured and her grumpy persona still in check perhaps even more elevated with age XD The brief character development was a nice touch. Of course leave it to Naruto to not only persuade Tsunade into allowing him to become the sensei of his daughter and her two friends but to adapt Kakashi’s bell test lol I wonder which team mate will be victorious. Again, it was a nice read 
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Hahah, it's not exactly her own catch phrase since it originally was Kushina's XDI see Akemi has not only picked up on her father’s trademark catch phrase but ever so slightly changed it and made it her own lol I liked that Kotetsu/Izumo made an appearance and so the reasoning behind Naruto/Akemi’s departure has been revealed. So it appears as though Naruto spreading the words of Jiraiya’s book led the ninja world to peace. I liked that Tsunade was also featured and her grumpy persona still in check perhaps even more elevated with age XD The brief character development was a nice touch. Of course leave it to Naruto to not only persuade Tsunade into allowing him to become the sensei of his daughter and her two friends but to adapt Kakashi’s bell test lol I wonder which team mate will be victorious. Again, it was a nice read
Glad you like these first chapters as they were my shortest ones and I have to admit they have a slow pace XD
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Oh, then I stand corrected-I have a very bad memory so I unfortunately would not have remembered Kushina saying that but thanks for the heads up. Yes, these two chapters were slow and short but I think you did a great job as writing fanfictions aren’t easy.