Naruto: NG Chapter 5: Onward to the Land of Iron, Mission 1!(re-edited)

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Now with the test complete and the start of a new day, team 4 is being a signed a mission outside the leaf! But Akuto doesn't seem to be satisfied with the mission they are assigned.....

Akuto: What!? A delivery mission! Come on, you have to give us a mission with more action than that! I'd rather do a protection mission than this one! At least you get some action.....

Hokage: That will be enough of your childish whinning! You will take this mission or you won't get one at all!

Akuto: *sigh* Fine...

Naruto: (Just like I was when I was a genin!)

Miaha: So where are we heading?

Sakumo: The Land of Iron...

Hokage: Correct, and all you have to do is pick up a special package and bring it to the Kazekage!

Naruto: Yes My Lady! I will meet you guys at the gates.

Miaha: Yes sensi!

The three leave the room and Naruto and the Hokage begin to discuss the mission.

Hokage: You need to be careful over.

Naruto: Why?

Hokage: There are some missing ninja over in that area who would love to kill leaf ninja!?

Naruto: Well don't you think this is a little difficult for their first mission?

Hokage: As long as they have you watching over them, your team should be fine. You are dismissed!

Akuto: I finally get to leave the village with a ninja headband...this is so exciting!

Miaha: Yes this will be the most fun I've had in a while.

Sakumo: Don't forget we are on a mission so don't get side tracked!?

*puff* Naruto: Hey guys!

Akuto: Sensi you could have been late!?

Sakumo: Shut up and lets go!

Miaha: Yah sensi shall we go?

Naruto: Alright, but we have to discuss a few things on the way there.

Unison: Alright!

They leave the Leaf Village behind jumping over branches and moving fast to their destination.

Miaha: This is going to be great! I'll think of it like a business trip with little work and a lot of fun...

Naruto: Not everything will go according to plan so always be aware of that!

Sakumo: Maybe not, but if you abide by the strict rules and complete the mission flawlessly then everything will go your own way!

Naruto: Sometimes you can do everything the right way and still fail...

Akuto: Stop trying to act tough, Sakumo!?

Sakumo: Shut up, you idiot! You have no say in what I do!

Naruto: That's the smell of rivarlry, Miaha.

Sakumo: Hmmph..

Akuto: It sure is but I am way better than Sakumo....

Sakumo: No I don't have anything close to a rival, they would slow me down just like my teammates!

Akuto: Whaaa!? Slow you down!

Miaha: You are the only one with issues with our team and there is no reason for them!

Naruto: Rivals are people you compete with to test one's strength and ability....also having teammates by your side whom you trust will aid you in becoming stronger and smarter!

Sakumo: I don't have either because I don't need them! All they do is get in the way!

Akuto: You are the one who charges at his oppnent without thinking and that is getting in the way to me!

Naruto: Exactly...also not believeing in ones team will result in a bigger mess. You Will be going down a path of self-destruction.

Sakumo: ....

Naruto: Well it looks like we are here!

Guards: State your business here!

Naruto: We are from the Hidden Leaf Village and we were sent on a mission to retrieve a package from Nera Fugami.

Guard: Nera! Do you have the package for these leaf ninja?

Nera: Yes let them in!

Guard: Open the gates!

The big gates open and there is a woman standing in the entrance....

Nera: Hi, I am Nera Fugami.

Naruto: I am Naruto Uzumaki and this is my team...Miaha Archimy, Akuto Saratobi, and Sakumo Hatake.

Nera: Were you the Naruto that helped us all those years ago in the Forest of Illusions?

Naruto: Yes, I remember well.

AKuto: It is a bit small isn't it.

Miaha: Oops, I dropped it!

Man: Let me help you with that!

Miaha: THank you......uhhhhh....can I have your name?

Man: AAAhhhhh yes I am Akan Fugami.

Nera: Ohh yes he is my son, he is probably the strongest in the Land of Iron.

AKuto: He isn't now that I am here!

Akan: You sure are cocky!

Akuto: Whaaa!?

Sakumo: I bet I am stronger!

Akan: I would sure like to see someone stronger than I am, I am the strongest in the Land of Iron! By the way you look way stronger than he does!

Akuto: How does he look stronger than me!?

Sakumo: Hmmphh...see everyone knows it Akuto.

Akan: I can tell in his eyes!

Akuto: Wha? Then what do I look like?

Akan: A weak child! hahaha

Akuto: I bet I could beat both you and Sakumo by myself!

Sakumo: One of these days I will come back and we will fight...

Akan: It might be sooner than you think...

Naruto: We should get going it was nice meeting you but its getting late and we haven't checked in to the Inn yet...but we might go eat afterwards if you would like to join us?

Nera: Sorry I have Guard duty next...but Akan might..

Akan: No I have plans with Sensi.

Naruto: Well I guess we will see you next time we come.

Nera: I hope everything goes well!

Akan: Have a safe trip and Sakumo I will be waiting!

Akuto: Hey what about me?

Akan: Shut up loser!

Miaha: Everyone picks on Akuto...hehehe

Naruto: That looked like a rivalry....hehehe

Sakumo:hhmmpphh

Akuto: That kid was a jerk...

Naruto: You always get on the wrong foot with people.

Miaha: That is something you need to work on..hehehe

Akuto: Whatever...

At the Inn....

Innkeeper: You guys are in checked in so you can come and go as you please.

Naruto: Alright lets go eat!

Akuto: Yahhh!!

Sakumo: I am not very hungry so I think I am gonna stay here.

Naruto: ALright then, you are missing a freebe though.

Sakumo: I don't care!

Naruto: Then while we are gone you will keep an eye on the package, alright?

Sakumo: ALright...

Sakumo alone with the package as the sun sets and the rest of the team is at a far away diner...

Naruto: Well what do you guys think of Sakumo?

Akuto: Selfish and not a team player, a big idiot and show off, weak, gets in the way and doesn't trust us!

Naruto: Well you seem to have a direct answer to my question. What about you?

Miaha: I think he thinks he has to do everything by himself and that we can't keep up with him so he doesn't trust us.

Naruto: I guess I will tell you guys that his father was my team leader when I was on team 7

Akuto: What!? You knew his father?

Miaha: Very interesting!

Naruto: His father was nothing like Sakumo is actually, he is the opposite of Sakumo. Sakumo doesn't have parents so he really doesn't know any better. Trust me I would know!

Miaha: What happened to him?

Naruto: He died trying to win the war against Madara!?

Miaha: How tragic, I wonder how Sakumo feels about this?

Naruto: He doesn't know anything about his father and don't tell him what I said either!

Meanwhile....

Sakumo: (I wonder what is in this package?)

As Sakumo begins to open it a big explosion occurs in his room taking out half of the Inn!?

Sakumo: What the hell is this?

Man: Well now this is where it is!

The man on the roof that is still in tact draws his sword!

Sakumo: So you want a fight?

Man: Actually I want your package!

Sakumo: Why? What do you need it for?

Man: None of your business I guess you are going to have to die!?

A man destroys the Inn and tells Sakumo to hand over the package or he is going to kill him!? But what will Sakumo do? Will the rest of the team come to help him? Find out Next time!

Next time: Sakumo takes action!
 
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