Naruto My Style : PROLOGUE

[Kagutsuchi]

Naruto My Style: Prologue

As ninja world got advanced. People were desperately trying to become as powerful as they can, while they were at it many war’s started. Each wanted to rule over another. Like all other nation’s in Fire country konoha the hidden leaf village wanted to become strong but they had their internal problems of clans. Nara clan, Uchiha clan, Senju clan and Hyuuga clan wanted to lead konoha konoha, due to the fact other minor clans supported senju’s more due to the reason harishima senju could control tailed beast’s and was a wood user. A unique technique by which he build most part of konoha.​

Mean while in UCHIHA CLAN:

~Madara was addressing his fellow clanmen~

Madara: I will make this crystal clear. Uchiha’s are superior to Senju’s and I will lead konoha and become hokage.


~ Crowd cheered and rawred aggressively ~

Madara: Only Senju’s is our competitors other clans doesn’t hav any significance to me.


In NARA CLAN:


SHIKARI ( a woman ) : We are going to participate for the elections and will lead Konoha with our own way.

~ Crowed clapped their hands ~

SUDDENLY EVERYTHING STOPPED AS HARISHIMA SENJU ENTERNED WITH HIS LITTLE BROTHER.

~ deadly silence made the tension more tensed ~

SHIKARI: Hari—Harishima wha—what are u doing here ?

HARISHIMA : Can I hav a word SHIKARI ?

SHIKARI: Sure .. what is it ?

HARISHIMA: THE UCHIHA’s hav started a rebellion and are going to start a civil war.

~PEOPLE START MURMURING~

SHIKARI: R u sure about this ? becoz the source u mention is not reliable to me .

HARISHIMA: I trust that person with my life.

~ That’s all I wanted to hear from u – replied SHIKARI ~

~BOTH THE LEADER MOVE TOWARDS THE MAIN STAGE AND ONCE AGAIN A DEADLY SILENCE TURNS THE AIR THICK~

NEXT CHAPTER: THE DECISION ​

this is my first try plzz comment and suggest ..

 

[Axle]

good, can't wait till the next one

 

[Kagutsuchi]

@ NARAKU : thanks alot !!

 

[~Missy~]

nice start ^^ but it's kinda short
keep up

 

[Kagutsuchi]

thanks .. yeah i know its short coz its a start and a prologue .. if i get a good response atleast 8 comments then i will continue ..

 

[Faceless]

Not bad, Ali. But I expected more from you. The plot is great for now, let's hope you can make it better in the future. Good Job

 

[rahul]

really good man you are so good at writing keep it coming i will be waiting for your next chapter

 

[Kagutsuchi]

O_O .. wow ..

@ NATSU: thanks and i will try to fullfil ur expectations

@ RAHUL: ur words are gold .. ur fanfic is great compared to mine !!

 

[Alucard]

Short but good

 

[bitlimuse]

yea i agree wit them its nice and short... *thumbs up*

 

[Naruto..]

story is interesting up till now and its a bit short but none the less good job.^^

 

[Kagutsuchi]

thanks alcurd ..

i was not thinking u guyz will like it .. others will be a little long

@ bitlimuse: thanks

@ naruto.. : thanks to u !!

 

[Akiza]

nice job ali

 

[Kagutsuchi]

thanks rebbeca

 

[Yüme1]

a little short, but it was great .
want to see the next one.

 

[Kagutsuchi]

thanks .. and i am working on ti .. but wont post today ..

 

[Baldur]

:O i like it ^^ and im credited for my fanfics so well i give it a 9/10 keep it up

 

[Kagutsuchi]

thanks !!

 

[RokuNR]

Not bad, but really short. You need to make the plot of each chapter more detailed so it feels longer. And a few grammar mistakes (>_>) but just so people don't notice this later, it's "Hashirama".

 

[Kaze..]

Great Job!!!