Paranensis
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like i posted before why don't you try to wright a story that matches this maybe you will get alot of fans that love your writing ... wich i doubt since if i must BELIEVE YOU you would only wright a story with no ending only about a boy that has a dream to become hokage and thats it ... in case you haven't noticed the boy's dream is still standing only alot of more troubles encountered him during he's life's run through the animé and ends being the savior wich in my opinion naruto has bin called that many times and for my toughts being called " the savior " is the same for me being hokage at the end same goes for minato and all the previous hokages they all have 1 thing in common giving their lives to save many others thats why they became hokage in the first place because each hokage had a special power/ more powers that would make the difference between the people not being hokage but they have one thing in common they never would do anything special to bring their own people into danger ( naruto wouldn't that also ) the fact is you called kishi's writing nothing special you can be right at some point but i wanna hear you say that again after i dunno you have written over a 606 pages ??? then you can tell someone's writing is bad only when you did it yourself if you never have written 1 paper let alone the animation in your story + he developes episodes to watch . he does not do it alone but he is still the director aswell in how the episode should happen ( my friend i bet you haven't done any of those things and underestimate writing/animation way to far most people don't even have the slightest idea in how much time a steady story needs ( no animations yet) and for the animations well believe it or not for the characters to match each time in lines is work on its own . then you didn't had a battle yet with action ( do something for me ) draw stickfigures on several papers to make it walk + jump but it has to fit the walk line and the time when your stickfigure hits the ground ( timing and spacing ) you easely loose 1 week only on stickfigure animations if you do it correctly to make a perfect jump over obstacles or so and when you done that try making an animation of it ( rendering takes serious massive time ) once your finished think again about kishi maybe then you know what respect means . this goes for all the people who are planning to flame on kishi once again ( be ashamed that you rate each chapter ) rate the story when its told . PARANENSIS OUT ! here is a little fan made animation with allot of flaws innit but its still fun to watchi find it odd that it took kakashi about 15 years to use the ms, i mean it wasnt like the uchiha were wiped out yet and he couldnt go and ask for help, there would be heaps of books and everything and legends about it, not to mention his teacher is the 4th hokage! but 15 years? cmon regardless of whether he is a uchiha or not, i dont think it would be so long. and where is the spiral zetsu now? what did obito do with it?
And i really feel like seeing your crush die isnt a good enough reason to enslave the entire world, did he have no family memebers? friends? only kakashi and rin? the whole uchiha clan and konaha didnt matter any more?
And how did the zetsu know that those were his two team mates? they had never met before, numerous people could have that name!
i know people will complain when i say this but it really is lazy writing but truth be told, im sick of the war so i dont care that its just a rush quick fix ending, lets go back to the actual show about Naruto trying to become hokage. Anyone remember that one?
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you will see if you watch this fan made animation that the character lines how they are drawn not always match wich can be a frustrating sight for the eye not for me since i respect everyone who is willing to try to make animation and my regards to this fan made episode to those people who made it . but when you watch it you will feel something is not entirely right wich the drawn characters . then pay attention to how they animated the battles innit when the characters are moving you notice even then that something isn't entirely in place .
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