[Predictions] Naruto Manga 680 Prediction "Family Dispute" [by Waindo]

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So, I lied about my prediction writing apstinence.

Enjoy the read.



*Earth is shaking.
Typhoons, thunderstorms and tsunamis are shown all over Narutoverse, wind blasts from Kaguya's energy aura are ripping everything on their shockwave path, entirety of Team 7 is blown literally miles away, Sasuke tries to engage his susanno before crashing but it disperses upon activation*

Sasuke: What the hell!? I can't mold chakra

*Naruto is shown in the background in total base mode, SM eye outline mark and his BSM pupils are gone, he is evidently pissed off.*

*Kaguya appears above them within moments*

Kaguya: There, there children. Your chakra points are sealed off.

*She smiles towards Naruto and Sasuke noding to each one respectively*

Kaguya: Ashura, Indra...Or should I say, Hagoromo, Hamura...Your fa....

*She get's interrupted by a raging Naruto*

Naruto: Army!? Nursery!? What are u babbling about you old hag. I am going to....

*He gets interrupted by Kaguya, who is pointing her finger upwards, towards the bloody red moon. The simple movement of her hand produced a wind blast that propelled Team 7 few hundred meters back*

Kaguya: You see, when I first came to pick the fruit, Hagoromo and Hamura were in my womb. I was left here for the sole purpose of making your planet into our nursery. As a Princess it was my obligation. Homewer, I ate the forbidden fruit in a desire to fasten the process, only to get outwitted by my own blood. And now, after all these centuries my Prince is coming home.

*Bijuu's subconcious realm is shown, Naruto and Sasuke surrounded by 9 bijuus, The room is shown rapidly increasing in size with a large tomoe materialising behind every bijuu. After each tomoe materialisation a dark toned voice is heard: Naraka path.....Asura path....Preta path...*

*Naruto and Sasuke are confusingly observing, realizing that the voice they are hearing is not Hagoromo nor the bijuus.

A man emerges behind Kurama and slowly walks in to the inner circle. He is shown in his 30-s, with long red hair and snowy - white eyes, revealing a byakugan. It unusually has pupils, sized like regular pupils they are dark blue and have an Uzumaki swirl pattern. His cloak is simmilar to Hagoromo's only showing the magatamas on different places.*

*As he approaches the duo further both Naruto and Sasuke start violently glowing in their respective chakra colours, Sasuke's right eye is shown evolving into a tomoed rinnegan, close up of his back shows 9 magatama forming on his back, obviously providing him with senjutsu aswell, while another panel is showing a close up of Naruto's eyes, it's cross pupils remained the same, but the iris is no longer red/orange but white with veins bulging up around them.*

*Hamura is shown from behind his back, he runs towards the duo with a wide grin on his face, grabbing Naruto's and Sasuke's dominant hands. Suddenly we see hologram-like images of Hagoromo, Hamura, Ashura and Indra, blinking, overlapping and slowly sinking in Naruto and Sasuke.*

*Defeaning Juubi - like roars are heard, a huge twice as sized Juubi is hurling from the sky towards Kaguya. She lifts both of her hands in the air, her hair extends upwards grabbing hold of the Juubi, pounding it feet down near her, leaving a significant crater. The beast is black rather than white, it pounds his ten tails on the ground, almost instantly taking a human form afterwards.*

*A tall man is shown, his long white hair is grabbing hold of Kaguya's hair, his horns are double the size of Kaguya's, his cloak is also filled with magatamas.
As his and Kaguya's lips are nearing eachothers their violent aura's come to a complete stand-still, producing disturbing moments of silence, but also providing Team 7 with a breather.*

Naruto: Now!

Sasuke: Hmph.

Kaguya: As one...

?: ....at last.

*Split panel is showing a bright explosion on one side, and a handshake on the other.*

*Two last one-page panels are following.*

*Huge grey/black juubi is shown on the first page*

*Naruto and Sasuke are seen infront of the Juubi on the second page, in stances simmilar to Hagoromo's and Hamura's. Both of them in rikudo mode cloaks, Naruto's cloak is now a bit longer but still unzipped, it's chakra is now more condensed, shining brightly white.

Sasuke's cloak is the same as Madara's only in reversed colours, magatama's are white and the cloak is dark purple. Both of them are holding the completed staffs and the halo of gudoudama's is seen around each.*

Juubi: Roooaaaaaaar!

End.
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SO6P+byakugan hybrid Naruto/SO6P+double tomoed rinnegans Sasuke in the blue corner vs the ultimate, completed and concious Juubi in the red corner.

Prediction is done, request is met,
I say, how much more awesome can Waindo get?
 
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What threw me off were your extremely wordy descriptions without breaking it into smaller paragraphs or sections and most of all , your sentences are extremely wordy .

The content is decent but it does not seem well written , in my opinion.
 
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How did their chakra points get sealed off?

They seemed to be underground at the end of the last chapter

I also can't tell you how confused i got towards the ending

Finally giving Naruto a doujutsu just seems out of place IMO

Overall, it was rather average, hope you don't take this the wrong way
 
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Good Effort. :D but, i still think this is supposed to be more of a comic type thing, meaning more emphasis are put on the dialogues, rather then the narrator explaining whats going on with the character, however, seeing as you've put a lot of effort into this, Good Read =D
 

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@SAGE OF THE ELEMENTS
Well, that's my writing style, can't help it.

@JokeCapone
Thx mate!

@Firelite

Ofc. I'm not taking it the wrong way, you didn't like it and that's it. She sealed their chakra points couse she posseses a god tier byakugan, which is most certainly not sealed/restricted.

@TLL
Glad you enjoyed mate!

@ugh
Eh, as I already wrote it's my writing style. Anyways, I appreciate you liked it.
 

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@Six paths of logic.
Thx.

@Dragon
Glad you liked it mate. Your theory gave me 1 or 2 ideas. I think it's fine given the fact I just wrote this in 10 minutes in one breath.

:win:
 

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I did not really get much of this prediction. You made no mention of the lava from the last chapter nor did you mention the rest of team 7. Furthermore I don't get the stuff about the multiple juubis appearing randomly or the guy saying the names of the 6 paths. Also, Kaguya's prince?
 

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Cool prediction buddy :)

And written in only 10 minutes too!
Thx buddeh!

I had to do it in 10 mins it was a bet....


I did not really get much of this prediction. You made no mention of the lava from the last chapter nor did you mention the rest of team 7. Furthermore I don't get the stuff about the multiple juubis appearing randomly or the guy saying the names of the 6 paths. Also, Kaguya's prince?
Party pooper.:stfu:

The Prince would be the other half of the Juubi, aka it's Yang. I wrote it in 10 mins and you can't convince me that it isn't awesome.
 
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