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Here is My first pridiction:

Chapter starts with Kage Meeting:

So Wat do u all think it should be fine with u :Mifune
All kages are just quarreling with each other on what they will do and who will be the head of this alliance.
Raikage: I dont agree with u mifune we don't actually know how strong is he now he was capable some time ago but now look at him she is just a piece of trash and he is not evan the hokage yet .
Mizukage: so who is the hokage then?
Kazekage: I heard the rumors of their land destruction and i think they still have to vote of the Jonins.
Tchukage: I dont want to but i am agree with this cocky brat( gaara stares at him)
Mifune: so then who else would be i know he is not completely well but dont underestimate him (but all kages are not agreed)
So wat do u guys say
Raikage: If it has to be some one form konoha then there is another one i think Too and he is quite capable and famous now
Gaara :(thinks of Naruto) now that u mentioned yes there is one i can think of and it is naruto the savior of their village.
Danzo: Impossible he is not up to the job i mean he is hjust a kid and i will not allowed to do that and top of that he cant take care of Madara he is not capable!!!

Scene To Naruto

Yamato: senpai look at there (he points towards naruto)
Kakashi: (naruto is sitting on a tree looking into sky) naruto come down we have to talk
Naruto : kakashi sensei i am going to try again and if he is not going to listen!!
Kakashi: dont evan think of that naruto
Naruto : Dont worry kakashi sensie i m not going to use any violance i kno wat it will do (kakashi is reliefed)
Kakshi : Then wat are u planning to do?
Naruto Smiles

Scene to Sakura

Sai :so wat are u going to do sakura?
Shizune: I knew that from the begening sakura master tsunade told me and u are his only weaknes after sasuke
Sakura: ( Remember of naruto when he praised her in tree climbing training and the times he haas been taking her punches with smiles and saved her life while putting his life on the line )
she drops on her knees and start crying again
Sai : sakura there is no time.........
saakura : then stops crying and get determined and says : alrite sai take katsuyu to naruto and she will give naruto my message i cant leave here nad i thik u know y

Scene to Kages

Raikage : dont u worry i am not going to appoint that whinny brat ( every one is in suspicious mood)
Kazekage: wat do u mean by that ?
Raikage : ahh so u seem to be attached to him but he is a whinny brat bcz he bow don befora me (every one is shocked) and had begged for his friends life.
Danzo :wat have u met him where ?
Raikage : On my way here.Nay way he is not the one i m interested in but the one WHO WAS WITH HIM
Danzo : WHAT he was with some one who ? (With anger)
Raikage : Yes he was with some one and i am pointing him to be the head of this alliance bcz he is a respected and honored ninja and a strong one too...
Tsuchikage: Then go ahead tell us who was he ?
Raikage : You all know him the Copy Ninja of konoha the HATAKAE KAKASHi .
Tsuchikage : what the son of the white Fang ? AHhh come to think of him i guess u made a nice choice what do u all think
(Danzo is furious with anger)
All kages are little calm now and are really considering him as their best option
Danzo: What are u mad he cant be now that u mention it he is going to be punished for disobeying the Hokages direct order along with that Nini_tails

Scene to Sasuke:

jugo:sasuke i think this is the perfect hide out.So how long are we going to wait here?
Sasuke : just wait untill this meeting is finished then we will attack them bcz after that they will get relaxed and the security will came back to normal.
Zetsu : i dont think we can wait that long we have to strike during meeting
karin : are u mad strinking in just like that are u trying to kill us?
Sasuke : I beleive that there is something u want to tell us then now is the time......

ENds

SO GUYS HOW DO U THINK THIS IS MY FIRST THIS WEEK
Do tell and Rasen and Dreamy and narutsharingan i have added u as my friends:D:D :hug::hug:



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if the fox goes away it doesnt kill the story(my opinion).
1) the fox will just leave naruto it doesnt mean leaving the story.
2) the story begins with the fox doesnt mean it have to end with fox battle/ the fox was control. so the person that control it should be more dangerous
3) the story is about naruto not the fox
if bijju are gone jinchuuriki will die ................stated by chiyo ba sama
 

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Here is My first pridiction:

Chapter starts with Kage Meeting:

So Wat do u all think it should be fine with u :Mifune
All kages are just quarreling with each other on what they will do and who will be the head of this alliance.
Raikage: I dont agree with u mifune we don't actually know how strong is he now he was capable some time ago but now look at him she is just a piece of trash and he is not evan the hokage yet .
Mizukage: so who is the hokage then?
Kazekage: I heard the rumors of their land destruction and i think they still have to vote of the Jonins.
Tchukage: I dont want to but i am agree with this cocky brat( gaara stares at him)
Mifune: so then who else would be i know he is not completely well but dont underestimate him (but all kages are not agreed)
So wat do u guys say
Raikage: If it has to be some one form konoha then there is another one i think Too and he is quite capable and famous now
Gaara :(thinks of Naruto) now that u mentioned yes there is one i can think of and it is naruto the savior of their village.
Danzo: Impossible he is not up to the job i mean he is hjust a kid and i will not allowed to do that and top of that he cant take care of Madara he is not capable!!!

Scene To Naruto

Yamato: senpai look at there (he points towards naruto)
Kakashi: (naruto is sitting on a tree looking into sky) naruto come down we have to talk
Naruto : kakashi sensei i am going to try again and if he is not going to listen!!
Kakashi: dont evan think of that naruto
Naruto : Dont worry kakashi sensie i m not going to use any violance i kno wat it will do (kakashi is reliefed)
Kakshi : Then wat are u planning to do?
Naruto Smiles

Scene to Sakura

Sai :so wat are u going to do sakura?
Shizune: I knew that from the begening sakura master tsunade told me and u are his only weaknes after sasuke
Sakura: ( Remember of naruto when he praised her in tree climbing training and the times he haas been taking her punches with smiles and saved her life while putting his life on the line )
she drops on her knees and start crying again
Sai : sakura there is no time.........
saakura : then stops crying and get determined and says : alrite sai take katsuyu to naruto and she will give naruto my message i cant leave here nad i thik u know y

Scene to Kages

Raikage : dont u worry i am not going to appoint that whinny brat ( every one is in suspicious mood)
Kazekage: wat do u mean by that ?
Raikage : ahh so u seem to be attached to him but he is a whinny brat bcz he bow don befora me (every one is shocked) and had begged for his friends life.
Danzo :wat have u met him where ?
Raikage : On my way here.Nay way he is not the one i m interested in but the one WHO WAS WITH HIM
Danzo : WHAT he was with some one who ? (With anger)
Raikage : Yes he was with some one and i am pointing him to be the head of this alliance bcz he is a respected and honored ninja and a strong one too...
Tsuchikage: Then go ahead tell us who was he ?
Raikage : You all know him the Copy Ninja of konoha the HATAKAE KAKASHi .
Tsuchikage : what the son of the white Fang ? AHhh come to think of him i guess u made a nice choice what do u all think
(Danzo is furious with anger)
All kages are little calm now and are really considering him as their best option
Danzo: What are u mad he cant be now that u mention it he is going to be punished for disobeying the Hokages direct order along with that Nini_tails

Scene to Sasuke:

jugo:sasuke i think this is the perfect hide out.So how long are we going to wait here?
Sasuke : just wait untill this meeting is finished then we will attack them bcz after that they will get relaxed and the security will came back to normal.
Zetsu : i dont think we can wait that long we have to strike during meeting
karin : are u mad strinking in just like that are u trying to kill us?
Sasuke : I beleive that there is something u want to tell us then now is the time......

ENds

SO GUYS HOW DO U THINK THIS IS MY FIRST THIS WEEK
Do tell and Rasen and Dreamy and narutsharingan i have added u as my friends:D:D :hug::hug:



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your prediction are always good sometimes I wish you were writing the story keep up the good work :)
 

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Here is My first pridiction:

Chapter starts with Kage Meeting:

So Wat do u all think it should be fine with u :Mifune
All kages are just quarreling with each other on what they will do and who will be the head of this alliance.
Raikage: I dont agree with u mifune we don't actually know how strong is he now he was capable some time ago but now look at him she is just a piece of trash and he is not evan the hokage yet .
Mizukage: so who is the hokage then?
Kazekage: I heard the rumors of their land destruction and i think they still have to vote of the Jonins.
Tchukage: I dont want to but i am agree with this cocky brat( gaara stares at him)
Mifune: so then who else would be i know he is not completely well but dont underestimate him (but all kages are not agreed)
So wat do u guys say
Raikage: If it has to be some one form konoha then there is another one i think Too and he is quite capable and famous now
Gaara :(thinks of Naruto) now that u mentioned yes there is one i can think of and it is naruto the savior of their village.
Danzo: Impossible he is not up to the job i mean he is hjust a kid and i will not allowed to do that and top of that he cant take care of Madara he is not capable!!!

Scene To Naruto

Yamato: senpai look at there (he points towards naruto)
Kakashi: (naruto is sitting on a tree looking into sky) naruto come down we have to talk
Naruto : kakashi sensei i am going to try again and if he is not going to listen!!
Kakashi: dont evan think of that naruto
Naruto : Dont worry kakashi sensie i m not going to use any violance i kno wat it will do (kakashi is reliefed)
Kakshi : Then wat are u planning to do?
Naruto Smiles

Scene to Sakura

Sai :so wat are u going to do sakura?
Shizune: I knew that from the begening sakura master tsunade told me and u are his only weaknes after sasuke
Sakura: ( Remember of naruto when he praised her in tree climbing training and the times he haas been taking her punches with smiles and saved her life while putting his life on the line )
she drops on her knees and start crying again
Sai : sakura there is no time.........
saakura : then stops crying and get determined and says : alrite sai take katsuyu to naruto and she will give naruto my message i cant leave here nad i thik u know y

Scene to Kages

Raikage : dont u worry i am not going to appoint that whinny brat ( every one is in suspicious mood)
Kazekage: wat do u mean by that ?
Raikage : ahh so u seem to be attached to him but he is a whinny brat bcz he bow don befora me (every one is shocked) and had begged for his friends life.
Danzo :wat have u met him where ?
Raikage : On my way here.Nay way he is not the one i m interested in but the one WHO WAS WITH HIM
Danzo : WHAT he was with some one who ? (With anger)
Raikage : Yes he was with some one and i am pointing him to be the head of this alliance bcz he is a respected and honored ninja and a strong one too...
Tsuchikage: Then go ahead tell us who was he ?
Raikage : You all know him the Copy Ninja of konoha the HATAKAE KAKASHi .
Tsuchikage : what the son of the white Fang ? AHhh come to think of him i guess u made a nice choice what do u all think
(Danzo is furious with anger)
All kages are little calm now and are really considering him as their best option
Danzo: What are u mad he cant be now that u mention it he is going to be punished for disobeying the Hokages direct order along with that Nini_tails

Scene to Sasuke:

jugo:sasuke i think this is the perfect hide out.So how long are we going to wait here?
Sasuke : just wait untill this meeting is finished then we will attack them bcz after that they will get relaxed and the security will came back to normal.
Zetsu : i dont think we can wait that long we have to strike during meeting
karin : are u mad strinking in just like that are u trying to kill us?
Sasuke : I beleive that there is something u want to tell us then now is the time......

ENds

SO GUYS HOW DO U THINK THIS IS MY FIRST THIS WEEK
Do tell and Rasen and Dreamy and narutsharingan i have added u as my friends:D:D :hug::hug:



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GREAT JOB keep it up id give u a rep but it wont let me rep you twice
 

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Here is My first pridiction:

Chapter starts with Kage Meeting:

So Wat do u all think it should be fine with u :Mifune
All kages are just quarreling with each other on what they will do and who will be the head of this alliance.
Raikage: I dont agree with u mifune we don't actually know how strong is he now he was capable some time ago but now look at him she is just a piece of trash and he is not evan the hokage yet .
Mizukage: so who is the hokage then?
Kazekage: I heard the rumors of their land destruction and i think they still have to vote of the Jonins.
Tchukage: I dont want to but i am agree with this cocky brat( gaara stares at him)
Mifune: so then who else would be i know he is not completely well but dont underestimate him (but all kages are not agreed)
So wat do u guys say
Raikage: If it has to be some one form konoha then there is another one i think Too and he is quite capable and famous now
Gaara :(thinks of Naruto) now that u mentioned yes there is one i can think of and it is naruto the savior of their village.
Danzo: Impossible he is not up to the job i mean he is hjust a kid and i will not allowed to do that and top of that he cant take care of Madara he is not capable!!!

Scene To Naruto

Yamato: senpai look at there (he points towards naruto)
Kakashi: (naruto is sitting on a tree looking into sky) naruto come down we have to talk
Naruto : kakashi sensei i am going to try again and if he is not going to listen!!
Kakashi: dont evan think of that naruto
Naruto : Dont worry kakashi sensie i m not going to use any violance i kno wat it will do (kakashi is reliefed)
Kakshi : Then wat are u planning to do?
Naruto Smiles

Scene to Sakura

Sai :so wat are u going to do sakura?
Shizune: I knew that from the begening sakura master tsunade told me and u are his only weaknes after sasuke
Sakura: ( Remember of naruto when he praised her in tree climbing training and the times he haas been taking her punches with smiles and saved her life while putting his life on the line )
she drops on her knees and start crying again
Sai : sakura there is no time.........
saakura : then stops crying and get determined and says : alrite sai take katsuyu to naruto and she will give naruto my message i cant leave here nad i thik u know y

Scene to Kages

Raikage : dont u worry i am not going to appoint that whinny brat ( every one is in suspicious mood)
Kazekage: wat do u mean by that ?
Raikage : ahh so u seem to be attached to him but he is a whinny brat bcz he bow don befora me (every one is shocked) and had begged for his friends life.
Danzo :wat have u met him where ?
Raikage : On my way here.Nay way he is not the one i m interested in but the one WHO WAS WITH HIM
Danzo : WHAT he was with some one who ? (With anger)
Raikage : Yes he was with some one and i am pointing him to be the head of this alliance bcz he is a respected and honored ninja and a strong one too...
Tsuchikage: Then go ahead tell us who was he ?
Raikage : You all know him the Copy Ninja of konoha the HATAKAE KAKASHi .
Tsuchikage : what the son of the white Fang ? AHhh come to think of him i guess u made a nice choice what do u all think
(Danzo is furious with anger)
All kages are little calm now and are really considering him as their best option
Danzo: What are u mad he cant be now that u mention it he is going to be punished for disobeying the Hokages direct order along with that Nini_tails

Scene to Sasuke:

jugo:sasuke i think this is the perfect hide out.So how long are we going to wait here?
Sasuke : just wait untill this meeting is finished then we will attack them bcz after that they will get relaxed and the security will came back to normal.
Zetsu : i dont think we can wait that long we have to strike during meeting
karin : are u mad strinking in just like that are u trying to kill us?
Sasuke : I beleive that there is something u want to tell us then now is the time......

ENds

SO GUYS HOW DO U THINK THIS IS MY FIRST THIS WEEK
Do tell and Rasen and Dreamy and narutsharingan i have added u as my friends:D:D :hug::hug:



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Yo everyone.



Here is my weekly prediction.




459: I will help him..........




Raikage:Thought: Scumbag.. you paid mifune off!!!

Raikage: No.........!

Gaara:.......

Mizukage: Hokage..... I can't allow this..

Tsuchikage: Mifune, what are you saying!!!!


Danzou: Wait my fellow Kages!!~#

Mifune smiles.


Danzou: Raikage. How many akatsuki members have your village ever fought..


Raikage: Well actually..


Danzou:-- and Defeated.


Raikage:*Grunts*

Danzou: Mizukage, Kaze, Tsuchi?

All are silent.

Tsuchikage: What are you trying to say?!!!!

Danzou: Their faux leader Pain, and members Sasori of the Sand, Kazuzu of the Waterfall, Hidan of the Hotsprings... were all defeated by my village, Konan of the Rain was also convinced to leave Akatsuki... my village did this..


Raikage: It was also your village who formed half the village.. and the bastard who started it was your founding father... and as for Sasu..


Mifune:silence!!!!

Danzou: We are dealing with Sasuke, and as for his case, he defeated 3 akatsuki members....


Raikage: This is Ridicu.

Mifune:!!!!!

Raikage: You picking a fight???

Gaara: Please... may I ask which member of your village defeated the majority of members......Hokage?


Danzou:.....We-

Gaara: Naruto, I beleive.........


Danzou: Are you suggesting..

Raikage: It is out of the Question........ and I dont beleive he defeated Nagato at all.....

Danzou: I beleive Konoha should have rights over this situation.!!!

Raikage: What about Rain..... you say konan has left Akatsuki, she must be in-command.. I say a neutral country takes control..


Danzou: All right.....but Konan is not trustworthy what about Iron?

Everyone looks at Mifune.

Gaara:but,

Tsuchikage: Be quiet...

Mizukage: He is right.

Danzou: So?

Tsuchikage:Fine..

Mizukage: ALright...

Raikage:Huh.... I guess.

Gaara:........


Mifune: then it is settled.. Iron will lead the rebellion!!!


Danzou Smirks....


Scene Switch.



Sakura: You're Right......... Naruto I am so sorry...


Sai: Now it is our turn.... we can still track the Land of Iron...



Sakura smiles. she remembers th oath.


Sakura: Now it is my turn Naruto!!!!!!!!



Scene to Sasuke.



Zetsu: They are leaving... time to strike...



Last Page......



Mifune: Alright Danzou....... Madara will be pleased..


Danzou: I will take care of Madara.. he is just a distraction.... He thinks he can control me like a puppet.... It will be you and I laughing in the End my friend.......... Once I have his eternal Mangekyou..... not even the brat could Stop me......


Next Time: Sasuke Attacks!!!



Enjoy.


Feedback please.


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Yo everyone.



Here is my weekly prediction.




459: I will help him..........




Raikage:Thought: Scumbag.. you paid mifune off!!!

Raikage: No.........!

Gaara:.......

Mizukage: Hokage..... I can't allow this..

Tsuchikage: Mifune, what are you saying!!!!


Danzou: Wait my fellow Kages!!~#

Mifune smiles.


Danzou: Raikage. How many akatsuki members have your village ever fought..


Raikage: Well actually..


Danzou:-- and Defeated.


Raikage:*Grunts*

Danzou: Mizukage, Kaze, Tsuchi?

All are silent.

Tsuchikage: What are you trying to say?!!!!

Danzou: Their faux leader Pain, and members Sasori of the Sand, Kazuzu of the Waterfall, Hidan of the Hotsprings... were all defeated by my village, Konan of the Rain was also convinced to leave Akatsuki... my village did this..


Raikage: It was also your village who formed half the village.. and the bastard who started it was your founding father... and as for Sasu..


Mifune:silence!!!!

Danzou: We are dealing with Sasuke, and as for his case, he defeated 3 akatsuki members....


Raikage: This is Ridicu.

Mifune:!!!!!

Raikage: You picking a fight???

Gaara: Please... may I ask which member of your village defeated the majority of members......Hokage?


Danzou:.....We-

Gaara: Naruto, I beleive.........


Danzou: Are you suggesting..

Raikage: It is out of the Question........ and I dont beleive he defeated Nagato at all.....

Danzou: I beleive Konoha should have rights over this situation.!!!

Raikage: What about Rain..... you say konan has left Akatsuki, she must be in-command.. I say a neutral country takes control..


Danzou: All right.....but Konan is not trustworthy what about Iron?

Everyone looks at Mifune.

Gaara:but,

Tsuchikage: Be quiet...

Mizukage: He is right.

Danzou: So?

Tsuchikage:Fine..

Mizukage: ALright...

Raikage:Huh.... I guess.

Gaara:........


Mifune: then it is settled.. Iron will lead the rebellion!!!


Danzou Smirks....


Scene Switch.



Sakura: You're Right......... Naruto I am so sorry...


Sai: Now it is our turn.... we can still track the Land of Iron...



Sakura smiles. she remembers th oath.


Sakura: Now it is my turn Naruto!!!!!!!!



Scene to Sasuke.



Zetsu: They are leaving... time to strike...



Last Page......



Mifune: Alright Danzou....... Madara will be pleased..


Danzou: I will take care of Madara.. he is just a distraction.... He thinks he can control me like a puppet.... It will be you and I laughing in the End my friend.......... Once I have his eternal Mangekyou..... not even the brat could Stop me......


Next Time: Sasuke Attacks!!!



Enjoy.


Feedback please.


Peace Out:D
Nice one but went too quickly man felt like it was running
SOrry No hard feelings.In the End nice points.

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Yo everyone.



Here is my weekly prediction.




459: I will help him..........




Raikage:Thought: Scumbag.. you paid mifune off!!!

Raikage: No.........!

Gaara:.......

Mizukage: Hokage..... I can't allow this..

Tsuchikage: Mifune, what are you saying!!!!


Danzou: Wait my fellow Kages!!~#

Mifune smiles.


Danzou: Raikage. How many akatsuki members have your village ever fought..


Raikage: Well actually..


Danzou:-- and Defeated.


Raikage:*Grunts*

Danzou: Mizukage, Kaze, Tsuchi?

All are silent.

Tsuchikage: What are you trying to say?!!!!

Danzou: Their faux leader Pain, and members Sasori of the Sand, Kazuzu of the Waterfall, Hidan of the Hotsprings... were all defeated by my village, Konan of the Rain was also convinced to leave Akatsuki... my village did this..


Raikage: It was also your village who formed half the village.. and the bastard who started it was your founding father... and as for Sasu..


Mifune:silence!!!!

Danzou: We are dealing with Sasuke, and as for his case, he defeated 3 akatsuki members....


Raikage: This is Ridicu.

Mifune:!!!!!

Raikage: You picking a fight???

Gaara: Please... may I ask which member of your village defeated the majority of members......Hokage?


Danzou:.....We-

Gaara: Naruto, I beleive.........


Danzou: Are you suggesting..

Raikage: It is out of the Question........ and I dont beleive he defeated Nagato at all.....

Danzou: I beleive Konoha should have rights over this situation.!!!

Raikage: What about Rain..... you say konan has left Akatsuki, she must be in-command.. I say a neutral country takes control..


Danzou: All right.....but Konan is not trustworthy what about Iron?

Everyone looks at Mifune.

Gaara:but,

Tsuchikage: Be quiet...

Mizukage: He is right.

Danzou: So?

Tsuchikage:Fine..

Mizukage: ALright...

Raikage:Huh.... I guess.

Gaara:........


Mifune: then it is settled.. Iron will lead the rebellion!!!


Danzou Smirks....


Scene Switch.



Sakura: You're Right......... Naruto I am so sorry...


Sai: Now it is our turn.... we can still track the Land of Iron...



Sakura smiles. she remembers th oath.


Sakura: Now it is my turn Naruto!!!!!!!!



Scene to Sasuke.



Zetsu: They are leaving... time to strike...



Last Page......



Mifune: Alright Danzou....... Madara will be pleased..


Danzou: I will take care of Madara.. he is just a distraction.... He thinks he can control me like a puppet.... It will be you and I laughing in the End my friend.......... Once I have his eternal Mangekyou..... not even the brat could Stop me......


Next Time: Sasuke Attacks!!!



Enjoy.


Feedback please.


Peace Out:D
good job
 

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I think that in the next chapter that the raikage and Earth kage will disagree and then then a fight will almost break out again and then a intruder will come...that will be the and of the chapter..not showing who is the intruder
 

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really nice chap..so long since my last post... busy..
i don't know if someone said that already.. if yeah.. sorry but here is my doubt/opinion..
i think.. that Kirigakure Kage (like the hokage of kirigakure... ^^') i think he is madara..cause of the face... and.. that would explain... when into the begining most suspect that madara was Danzou.. but.. he was going to the Kage meeting... representing kirigakure... as a neutral point.. that's why he put all the lights into konoha and said that stuff about akatsuki leader... ;D
but that's just a though... ;D correct me if i'm wrong.. and peace man.. ;DD hihihi
 

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I think that in the next chapter that the raikage and Earth kage will disagree and then then a fight will almost break out again and then a intruder will come...that will be the and of the chapter..not showing who is the intruder
i like that prediction, builds up a lot of suspense....... mind actually writing it out?
 

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All the kages looks shocked and staring to hokage...
Raikage: What the hell are you talking about?! Hokage leading the alliance?!
If this going happen kumo will not join this alliance!
Kazekage: Sand will not join as well.
Tsuchikage: I will not join as well.
Mizukage: ....
Mifune: So offer someone else... None of your villages have jinchiriki's...
The only one who still have it is hokage, the nine-tailed fox, he should be
the leader of this alliance.
Hokage: Thank you.
Kazekage: Why can't we just find another skilled ninja from hidden leaf?
I can even offer Uzumaki Naruto, the nine-tails.
Hokage: What?! I will not allow this!
Raikage: What? Do you even think what are you offering to us? Hes such loser... I met him before the meeting of five kages... I will not allow this... He was crying for a criminal, Uchiha Sasuke... He said that Uchiha brat his friend and he wount let him be killed...

Suigetsu: Sasuke, it seems that Naruto is really worried about you... What happened?
Karin, Jugo and Zetsu looks interested.
Sasuke: Long story... So he's still want to bring me back...

Hokage: What?! You met him?!
Raikage: Yes...
Kazekage: Sasuke huh? I know him as well... It seems you don't know anything
about Naruto...He is still like before... Naruto is appearance of Hatake Kakashi and the Sannin Jirajya... He know his ninja way and he's never go back on his words... And don't believe that he's still going to bring Sasuke... He's doing this about 3-4 years... That brat saved my life, when akatsuki was after me, and stoped from ramping near konoha 4 years ago...
Kages looks shocked...
Raikage: That brat... It seems that i was wrong about him...
Tsuchikage: I like to met him... Mabye even allow him to be leader of this alliance.
Mizukage: I like him too.
Tsuchikage: Why isn't he hokage? I think he would be better then this one... Is he powerful?
Kazekage: The rumors reached me, that he even beated Pein, the rinnengan's user! And he bacame a sage like Jiraya! He must be really powerful!
Kages: What!?
Raikage: And he was begging me...
Kazekage: So why we don't offer him this?!
Kages: Okey!
Hokage: No way! I won't allow this! He destroyed the village while he was fighting Pein!
Pein and Naruto both was Jirayas teachings! They destoyed Konoha! We can't allow this brat to be leader! In that battle Naruto even reached 8 tails! But Minato, the 4th hokage stoped him from 9th! The seal isn't restored yet! Village woundn't be destroyed if the 5th wouldn't be so weak! And i wount be as weak as she!
Kages: Wha!? He met the 4th!?
Hokage: Yes... Not much known about Shiki Fujin technique... He must have been put some of his energy in Naruto while he was sealing the Kiubi... The forth said that he realised that 16 years ago, the one who was behind Kiubi's attack was fromer leader of akatsuki, and Uchiha clan...
Kages looks shocked...
Raikage: The Yellow Flash...
Mizukage: I can't believe that Madara is still alive...
Raikage: Anyway, even i want that Naruto become the leader of alliance! Cloud is joining!
Kazekage: Sand will join to!
Mizukage: We join as well!
Tsuchikage: Same here!
Hokage: ...

Zetsu: This is bad! This is really bad that they know about Madara!

Samurai suddenly appears close to mifune and says something in his ear.

Mifune: Uzumaki Naruto is here and he want to speak with you all!
Raikage: Let him in!
Kazekage: Smiles and thinks: Long time no see, Naruto.
Mizukage: I want to see him...
Hokage: What!?
Karin, Jugo, Suigetsu and Zetsu is shocked.
Zetsu: This is going to be interesting!
Karin: I can feel incradible amount of chakra!

Doors is about to open.

Jugo, Zetsu, Suigetsu, Sasuke, Karin facing to doors.
Sasuke: Naruto, how much have you grow up?

Naruto, Kakashi and Yamato enters the room.
All the kages and mifune is staring at him.
Mizukage: So this is Naruto.
Tsuchikage: Looks like we will have a good leader. Thinks: I can feel his incadible chakra...

Naruto looks at Hokage, then to Raikage and Garra: Kages, i came here to ask a favor! I want that you stop! Uchiha Sasuke's execution!
Raikage: So you are still about that?... I guess I have no choice... But if he's make a single mistake he will be killed!
Mifune: Anyway, kages chosed you as a leader of alliance, Naruto! Kages voted, vote was accepted you win 1 agains 4! You will lead the the alliance agains akatsuki!

Karin, Jugo, Suigetsu and Zetsu looking to Sasuke.
Sasuke: I can't believe this...

Naruto: I will accept this, but there is one reason.
Raikage: What? What is it?
Kages, Sasukes team and Kakashi with Yamato looks interested.
Naruto: I want, that you will not allow this old man to be Hokage! And wait till
one of the three sannin's Tsunade will recover!
Hokage: What!?
Everyone looks surpised.
Raikage thinks: This kid... I was really wrong about him...
Tsuchikage thinks: I see peace in this cursed world!
Mizukage thinks: He's really going to be a good leader.
Kakashi and Yamato thinks: Naruto...
Kazekage: I'll do my best!
Other kages: We too!
Danzo looks angry and says: How could you accept Tsunades weakings!? He was the worthest hokage! You don't know her!
Raikage: Danzo, you will be dismised as hokage when we all ask the fire lord!
We can't trust guy like you! And say! Where have you been during akatsuki's attack!?
Danzo: This is not your bissniss!
Other kages thinks we will do as Raikage said.
Kakashi and Yamato thinks: Good job Naruto!

Sasuke's team surpised.
Sasuke says: Thanks Naruto, you made me a easier way.

Naruto: Now i can explain you what is akatsuki plans! I can tell you all the truth because, Pein give all the information to me!
Kages looks shocked and interested.
Raikage: Begin, Leader Naruto!
Naruto smiles.
Naruto: Akatsuki is organization, who in start was gathering information about all the hosts. As you all know, all the hosts exept me is captured. I beated one of the strongest in akatsuki. The one is who we need to kill, the former of uchiha clan and former of akatsuki is... Uchiha Madara! Akatsuki is planing to capture all the hosts because, they want to to build a weapon. The weapon that is still not completed, they extract the Bijju power, almost all the hosts power is extracted only, 8 and 9 tails isn't yet.
Raikage: What!? What do you mean!? My brother was captured long ago!
Naruto: It may be, but extracting takes long times, more powerful bijju you extract, more time
it takes. The 7 hosts power was used to destroy Konoha! And it happened instantly, it even
havent took 10 secounds when Konoha was blown away!
Kages, Sasuke's team, spectators and Kakashi with Yamato looks shocked.
Naruto: When akatsuki finish to build this weapon, they cound destroy entire land instatly, just like konoha was destroyed! Thanks to Jiraya, Pein was his teaching, i was able to change Pein, and he revived all the villagers, and with that jutsu he used to revive villagers, he died saying: Naruto, i believe in you, that you beake the curse!
Everyone looks shocked.
Naruto: So kages, i want only one wish to ask, could you all train me, and don't let the akatsuki leader get the nine-tails!? I want to took control of the fox because he took much pain to me....
Everyone looks shocked.
Raikage: You got it, but... Raikage is almost crying. Please, help me to get back my brother!
Naruto: I'll do it, because im host too, and ill do my best to save him!
Raikage: Thanks, Naruto!
Tsuchikage: I'll train you Naruto.
Mizukage: Me too!
Kazekage: There is nothing i can train you Naruto, you are to far from my level. Kazekage smiles.
Danzo is mad and attacking Naruto with Genjutsu. Showing everyone his sharingan.
Everyone is shocked and standing from table, to attack him.
Danzo: Now Naruto, you will die!
Naruto in sage mode: No Danzo... you will die!
Danzo: How did you resisted it my genjutsu?!
Danzo is runing from the room, Naruto following him.
Everyone is following them.
Sasuke is going after them too.
Naruto knock Danzo to the ground. Then...
Naruto: Kage bunshin no Jutsu!
Knocking him down to the floor again.
Naruto: Rasen-shuriken!
Everyone is watching.
Naruto threw it, two kage bunshi's got Danzo's legs and he can't move.
Danzo is cuted in two pieces.
Everyone is shocked.
Raikage: Naruto, i think none of us, have anything to teach you...
I think you are even stronger then we all... And you must be... The 6th Hokage!
Naruto smiles and says: I can't accept it.
Everyone: Why?
Naruto: There is 5th hokage. Naruto smiles.
Everyone is shocked, and smiling.
Naruto: Sasuke, will you had back with me to Konoha? He smiles again.
Raikage: You!
Raikage cought Sasuke and is about to hit him.
Raikage: Tell where is my brother!
Sasuke: There is no reason to hide it from you, even those who is with me can say, that eight-tails got away!
Raikage: What!? Don't **** my mind!
Sasuke: He ran away even when i put on him "Amaterasu"...
Raikage: What are you saying? Is that true?
Sasuke: This is truth, he ran away when we cut his one tail during the battle. He leaved all his chakra in there, the one we bring to Madara was fake. I thought he had returned to you?
Raikage: So he ran away from village as he was dreaming...
Naruto: We must find him right away!
Everyone is suprised.
Sasuke: Naruto, i'm returning back to the village.

Zetsu, Karin, Jugo and Suigetsu with smiles, vanishes.

Naruto smiles, and almost crying. He ran to sasuke and huged him.
Naruto: Thanks Sasuke, i finaly made my promise!
Everyone is smiling and going back to the conference room. Sasuke stays with Kakashi and Yamato. Kakashi and Sasuke with smiles, talking.

Zetsu said everything to Madara.

Madara: Damn it! That brat! Naruto!

Conference is about to end.

Sakura and Sai suddenly appears.
Mifune: Naruto, you are realy going to be a good leader, i like your plan. I hope it will success, and lead the peace to the world!
Sakura suprised, looks to Naruto, and Naruto to her.
Naruto: What are you doing here, Sakura?
Sakura: Naruto, sorry for causing so much problem to you, im giving you freedom from that promise. And i want to say, you can't love me, the one who you need to love is Hinata...
Naruto remembers how Hinata was saying: Because i... Love you...
Sakura: I was doing nothing but causing trouble to you... Forgive me Naruto...
Everyone surpised.
Sasuke watching this all.
Naruto: Sakura, i think i can't be helped... I love Hinata... I allways loved her too... But for my life i think there can't be no love... And one more thing... Its already to late. Naruto smiling. I made you a promise and completed it.
Sakura: What?
Naruto: Look tho the one who is laughting with Kakashi and Yamato.
Sakura suprised, and shocked, and started to cry...
Sakura: Thank you, Naruto.
Naruto smailing and says: Freedom...
Naruto: Sakura, go up there to Kakashi, Yamato and Sasuke. I've got some job here.
Conference ended up well.

After 3 weeks.

Tsunade: Sakura, what happened? Trying to get up.
Sakura: Tsunade!
Tsunade: Where is Pein and Naruto? They are still fighting?
Sakura: Naruto beaten Pein before 3 weeks.
Tsunade: What? Trying to get up again, but falls.
Sakura: Don't push your self too much. You were in coma.
Tsunade: ...
Sakura: I've got some news to you, Sakura smiling.
Tsunade: ?
Sakura: Danzo was the 6th hokage.
Tsunade: What?!
Naruto enters with Hinata.
Naruto: But now im the 6th Hokage! Naruto smailing.
Tsunade smailing says: So what happened?
Naruto: You were dismised as Hokage...
Tsunade: ...
Naruto: Don't worry Granny... There was conference between five kages. I interrupetd it. And Danzo gone mad on me, because everyone started to hate him and made to like me, Danzo attacked me, and i got to kill him. In that conference, we made an alliace and i became their leader. After that I became a hokage! And made that you still be the 5th hokage! Tsunade: Thank you, Naruto, you did well. Tsunade smiling.
Sasuke enters and comes to Sakura huging her.
Naruto: By the way! Sasuke is back!
Everyone smiling.
Hinata: Naruto, don't you think this is time for us?
Naruto: Oh, yeah, sorry Hinata, lets go. Kissing her.
Tsunade smiling.
Sasuke: Naruto, don't you think we need to train, to complete that plan?
Naruto: Don't you think we are strong enought to beat Madara? You are even saying that when you finaly got the last sharingan secret. I think you alone would kill him, and i don't want to see fox again...
Sasuke: You think i can beat him by myselft? How far have you get at Naruto? Do i stand a chance on you? Oh, by the way, how about the controling fox?
Naruto: Ech loser, you wount stand a chane against me. Naruto laughting. Joking Sasuke, remember we are rivals. Naruto smailing. I finally found the way how to control the fox, all thanks to Itachi and Killerbee.
Sasuke: What? What do you mean? You met Itachi? Then you must be more powerful then Madara, if you took control of fox...
Naruto: I met him before, i spoke with him, and said how do i care about you, he give me the power to control the fox.
Sasuke: Itachi...
Naruto:...
Naurto: Okey, Hinata lets go, sorry for made you wait.
Hinata: It's no problem Naruto-kun, lets go. Hinata smailing.
Tsunade thinks: What the hell happened then i was in coma?...

This is the end of my predicions ;Dp Hope you like it ;)

Pls coment it ;p
 
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