naruto1246
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My first story that took me five minutes to make, so if it sucks... who gives a shit now to the story tell me whats wrong and ill correct as much as i can in my next story i made this to be a test of what i should do in stories + it was for fun. you know that car fax commercial with that wierd looking fox, yea that thing freaks me out. warning theres cussing
Naruto was looking at some cars when a car sales man comes up saying "hello sir I see your looking at this van", naruto just keeps looking at the car like a total badass and says "yea so how much for it".
"200,000 dollars", the sales men said. Naruto just looks at him while thinking "hmm bullshit"
"Show me the car fax" said someone behind naruto. "Yea show me the car fax", naruto said. "ahh it has great seats and stuff said"' the guy trying and failing to get naruto to forget about the car fax. "Show me the car fax" naruto said, a little annoyed. "Car fax can save you thousands of dollars when buying a car" (i dont know what the freakin thing said) explained the person/thing behind naruto.
"Fine sir I'll show you the car fax" said the sales men finally giving in. after everything was said and done naruto went to look behind him to thank the guy that helped him" hey thanks for the hel... aaa where did he go?" he said scratching his head "down here" said something that looked like a
cg fox.
Naruto just looks at it for a few minutes and then yells "HOLY SHIT WHAT THE **** ARE YOU" "I'm a... he didn't get a chance to finish as naruto kicked him through a wall. 'w why did you do that' he said weakly as naruto started to make a rasengan in his hand "because your freaking me the **** out!" with that said naruto slammed the rasengan into the foxes got and sent it flying through the walls of the building and getting covered in debris. Assuming it was dead, naruto left in his new van never noticing the CG hand that punched its way out of the ruble; after it pulled itself out of the ruble its eyes shown red from anger "yes drive away and never know that I am coming for you"
This is my first story The car fox will be in other stories of mine just becuase
this is the thing im talking about
if the story sucks here watch this to help you forget your unhappyness
hmm i wonder if ill get in trouble for this
Naruto was looking at some cars when a car sales man comes up saying "hello sir I see your looking at this van", naruto just keeps looking at the car like a total badass and says "yea so how much for it".
"200,000 dollars", the sales men said. Naruto just looks at him while thinking "hmm bullshit"
"Show me the car fax" said someone behind naruto. "Yea show me the car fax", naruto said. "ahh it has great seats and stuff said"' the guy trying and failing to get naruto to forget about the car fax. "Show me the car fax" naruto said, a little annoyed. "Car fax can save you thousands of dollars when buying a car" (i dont know what the freakin thing said) explained the person/thing behind naruto.
"Fine sir I'll show you the car fax" said the sales men finally giving in. after everything was said and done naruto went to look behind him to thank the guy that helped him" hey thanks for the hel... aaa where did he go?" he said scratching his head "down here" said something that looked like a
cg fox.
Naruto just looks at it for a few minutes and then yells "HOLY SHIT WHAT THE **** ARE YOU" "I'm a... he didn't get a chance to finish as naruto kicked him through a wall. 'w why did you do that' he said weakly as naruto started to make a rasengan in his hand "because your freaking me the **** out!" with that said naruto slammed the rasengan into the foxes got and sent it flying through the walls of the building and getting covered in debris. Assuming it was dead, naruto left in his new van never noticing the CG hand that punched its way out of the ruble; after it pulled itself out of the ruble its eyes shown red from anger "yes drive away and never know that I am coming for you"
This is my first story The car fox will be in other stories of mine just becuase
this is the thing im talking about
if the story sucks here watch this to help you forget your unhappyness
hmm i wonder if ill get in trouble for this
