Naruto: Forever skies of Tomorrow's Yesterday

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~ This story begins 300 years after the events of Naruto Shippuden........The 5 Great Nations have separated after 250 years of peace and have been at war for 50 years. All clans have been restored, all nations at war with one-another, but there is one small location where a group of top shinobi from every nation has been gathered for private training to stop this war before all lives are lost.......but first.....a look back into a few of the characters...... ~

-~ 25 Years Ago a young man....awakens a power that has not been seen in 275 years in his legendary clan ~-

???: *panting heavily* Damn have we lost them yet!?

???: *panting while leaning against a tree* I have no idea Zen, they have been chasing us since the Suna and Konoha borders.......I know we shouldn't use our Mangekyou Sharingan's but we don't have much of a choice left

Suna Jounin 1: Where are those damn Uchiha's at!!

Suna Jounin 2: If you would learn to shut your damn mouth maybe they wouldn't have spotted us and ran you f*ckin dumbass!

Zenryoku: *Remaining deathly quite and still up in the trees watching the Suna Jounin's, he lifts his hand for his brother to see and confirms they should use their Mangekyou Sharingans*

Zenryoku and his brother both activate their Mangekyou Sharingan's and jump down towards the Suna Jounins'. Zen upon falling places one of the Suna Jounin's in Tsukuyomi while his brother lands ontop of the same shinobi crushing his spine. The two Uchiha brothers both without mercy obliterate the other Suna jounin while he is shocked.....while checking the two for any sort of tracer placed on them they both sense the power of a Bijuu near by and they stand back to back and see a young boy walking towards them from the direction of Suna........

Zen: Hey kid! Are you stupid get out of here! Its far too dangerous for you to be out here!

Young Boy: *looks at Zen while he is telling him to get out of there due to the danger*.......You have no idea........*the boy then closes his eyes as he starts to take form of the One Tailed Shukaku*

Zen's Brother: F*CK!! That brat is Suna's Jinchuuriki! And he can already summon it at will!?

The two Uchiha's brass themselves for an attack from the Shukaku but while focusing all their attention at the Shukaku itself a hidden Suna shinobi launches himself out of the forest stabbing Zen's brother in the rib cage. Zen's brother falls to a knee as Zen slams an explosive tag onto the shinobis face as he attempts to run away. Before Zen can pull his arm back the explosive tag detonates blowing the head off of the shinboi but also blowing off Zen's right arm.....

Zen: GAHHHH!!!!!!! SON OF A B*TCH!!!!!!!!!!

Zen's Brother: ZEN!!!! *pants heavily as blood starts to run from one side of his mouth due to the massive wound* Are....you.......alright!?

Zen: Don't worry about me!!! We have bigger problems yet.........your wounded gravely......and we still have this beast to de.......

Before Zen could finish what he was saying the Shukaku blasted at him with a huge blast of Sand....before the sand could hit Zen his brother rammed into Zen knocking him out of the way as he got blasted threw several trees. When the sand and dust cloud thinned Zen didn't see the Shukaku or the young boy anywhere and barely stood as he tried to run to where his brothers body was laying.....his brother laying ontop of a tree trunk with one of his legs and left arm mangled beyond repair....he was barely breathing....

Zen: BROTHER!!!! *as he rushed to his brother he fell to the ground holding the the stump of his right arm that was still bleeding...he continued to stand and went to his brothers side* Hold on.......I will use my Sharingan's ability to teleport us back to Konoha!!!

Zen's Brother: *coughs up blood and looks into Zen's eyes with one eye shut and the other half open he grabs Zen's flak jacket* It's.....no use......you and I both know......I won't make it back......but please.....for me take my right arm......and continue your fight!....*as he said his final words he let go of Zen's jacket and his arm fell to the side*

When Zen's brother died, Zen shouted out with pure rage. He grabbed onto his brother with his left arm and threw his body over his left shoulder and teleported them both back to the medic ward of Konoha.......the medic shinobi rushed to Zen and his brother...and upon Zen telling them what happened and what his brother said they transplanted his brothers right arm to where Zen's use to be.....

A few months later they had a burial service and upon Zen's request they allowed him to see his deceased brother once more....but when he saw that his brothers eyes have been taken out he demanded to know why and the head medic shinobi calmly looked into his eyes and said....

Head Medic Mugiwara: By rule of the Hokage....any Uchiha that has a brother, and both have obtained a Mangekyou Sharingan should one fall in combat that Uchiha's eyes must be taken........

Zen: The HELL DO YOU MEAN! They MUST be TAKEN!!!! FOR WHAT CAUSE!!!!!!

Mugiwara: Zenryoku Uchiha! I know full well you know of your clans past and what a member did with his brothers eyes and what he tried to do to the Shinobi world 275 years ago!

Enraged with what was done to his brothers body Zen punched Mugiwara as hard as he possibly could making Mugiwara crash to the ground, and Zen teleported out of the area to the top of Kage Mountain......

Mugiwara: *wipes the blood off his mouth and spits he gets aid to stand from others and says to himself* This isn't good.......

Days later the Medic office is broken into and Zen's brothers eyes are gone with a note left behind......

"For Desecrating my brothers body the way you have done I shall bring vengeance to this world that has never before been seen!"

Mugiwara:.......I knew he was going to do something......but I didn't think he would have done it this quick and as destructive as this.......

-~ Elsewhere in a far off village bordering Konohagakure and Amegakure a gang is attacking and killing everyone in sight ~-

Gang Boss: YAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! This is pathetic!!!! I thought you said this place had better defense and weapons than this you bastard!!!!!

Gang underling: I..I...I'm sorry Hells........I *gets his head cut off by Hells*

Hells: NOW! Anyone else wanna lie to my face!?!

a mysterious man kills Hell's second in command (poor bastard didn't even get a line :p) then goes to run at Hells with his sword barely above his right shoulder but is suddenly tackled by two of the gang members and starts to get beat to the ground.....as a bloody mess he is dragged to Hells and Hells then laughed....

Hells: HAHAHAHA The f*ck you think you would have done to me ya shit head! Ya you killed my number two....but that's all he was...was a number 2 not number 1!!! *Hells then kicked the man in the face while laughing and suddenly gets hit in the back of the head with a rock*.........OWWWW!!!! THE F*CK!!!!!! *sees a young boy nervously standing there shaking as if he was on a fault line* You little bastard who the hell do you think you are!

Little Boy: G....Get away from my father you swine!!!!!!!

Boy's Father: NO!!! Zanji I told you to stay in the house with your mother and baby brother!!!!

Hells:Father?.......son?.....Zanji? Wait this little piece of shit brat is your kid!? Oh boy this will be fun!!! *he then turns to the father and slams his head into the ground laughing manically he then goes to turn his head back to Zanji and gets hit in the eye with a rock* GAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!! DAMN IT!!!!!! ROCK IN THE EYE!!!!!!! DAMN IT!!! ROCK IN EYE!!!!!!!!!!! GAHHH!!!!! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU GUYS DOIN GO GET THAT LITTLE F*CKER!!!!!!!! .....GOD DAMN IT!!!! ROCK IN THE F*CKING EYE!!!!!!!!!

Gang Members: Sir Yes Sir!!! *as the go to get Zanji the one gets cut in half by Hells*

Hells: *with one eye shut with blood running down his face* NEXT TIME GET THE BASTARD AFTER THE FIRST ROCK!!!!!! NOT THE SECOND ROCK!!!!!!!!

The other gang members run towards Zanji and while running at him Zanji runs at them and running slides under one gang member and punches him in the crotch causing him to fall to the ground....but ends up getting kicked in the face to the ground by another gang member...they then grab his arms and when the one gang member goes to grab Zanji's legs he gets hit in the nuts again by Zanji kicking him this time.....

Gang Member: GAHHHH *falls to his knees holding his crotch and says with a high pitched voice* You little bastard......we are SO going to kill you!!!!!! *he then punches Zanji knocking him out and they drag him to Hells*

Zanji is then tied against a post in his front yard where Hells and the other gang members go into his house and drag the rest of his family to the yard and when Zanji regains consciousness he witnesses Hells standing over his brother with his giant broad sword hoovering over his brother......

Hells: *with his eye bandaged* Ah so the little trouble maker is awake huh!? Well then I was just gonna do this while you were out of it and then wake you up to see the horror then kill you....I guess this is better if done like this.......*slams his sword threw Zanji's brother killing him on impact and then goes over to his father who is being hung in a tree by his arms*....Now for your pesky father who killed my number 2.......speaking of number two's I will have to do that here in a bit.....anyways *without warning or hesitation he cuts his father in half*......Now for the ***** who gave birth to a naughty trouble maker such as yourself.......*walks over to Zanji's mother and rips her skirt off*.....Enjoy the show kid cuz this will be your last anyways.......

Zanji kicks and shouts at Hells as he begins to rape Zanji's mother infront of him and the gang member who was hit in the nuts twice by Zanji walks over to him......

Gang Member: Shut the f*ck up!!! *kicks Zanji in the nuts as hard as he possibly can while Zanji is on the ground and when Hells is about to finish with Zanji's mother he shouts at the gang member and when he abruptly turns around he accidentally kicks dirt into Hells' good eye*

Hells: *Jumps off of Zanji's mother shouting and cussing* GOD F*CKING DAMN IT!!!! MY GOOD EYE!?!?!?!?! YOU F*CKING IDIOT *blasts the gang member in the chest with a False Darkness technique and destroys him and the top of the post Zanji is tied too...he then goes and smacks Zanji in the face to wake him up from the kick* Wake up you little bastard I don't want you to miss your mothers dea.......

Zanji: *interrupting Hells he shouts and blasts everything that was around him in the opposite direction....causing the last guard to get impaled by a piece of debris from the now destroyed house and Hells buried under a few rocks......but his family members were already dead leaving him in the center of a 100 foot clearing*......what........did I just do.........

Hells: *gets up from under the rocks coughing up blood with his bandaged eye bleeding profusely* The f*ck did you just do kid.......*looks over at Zanji and sees his eyes have changed* !? The HELL!? Wht are you!? That's no Sharingan or Byakugan!.........*remembers from his brief history lesson before killing his teacher and going rouge of the third Doujutsu*....No.....fine then I will take it for myself!....

Hells grabs a piece of the house that was broken off from Zanji's eruption and walks over to him and goes to impale Zanji but then Zanji looks up at Hells just before he is about to impaling him causing him to stop and the piece of the house that he was holding gets shot threw his heart and Zanji gets stands and due to the post being completely destroyed walks to Hells' body as it falls to the ground.....

Zanji: Filth such as you who only terrorizes others shall never again kill.......

-~ To be Continued ~-
 

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O_O This is rather graphic xd
Grimm raping your mother and all. I like the idea, though. Reveal the darker nature of a world filled with hatred and war.
 

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Nice chap :) I will look forward to see how the story would turn out :D
Q:Can I be ???? or Little boy? :pwease:
lol xD i may introduce you as a character xd but these first couple of chapters are prequels to the main story :p
O_O This is rather graphic xd
Grimm raping your mother and all. I like the idea, though. Reveal the darker nature of a world filled with hatred and war.
>_> Hey I thought I did Hells proud there xd you know he woulda done that xd

o_o I will in the next chapter :p (hence where your character will be appearing along with other characters)
 

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very graphic,but its awesome :p

Though you do need to work on the grammar more.Dont use *input* to describe a certain action, use a sentence before the conversation to do that.Also when you are writing a sentence that is not part of a certain characters dialogue,dont use slang like "cussing", use the proper way of writing it. (like cursing)

Hope that would help ^^
 
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