Itachi9695
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let me start by saying that not all characters are naruto characters just some of them. Yes Itachi will b in this i wouldn't b much of an Itachi fan if he wasn't now would i? of course naruto is "goku" sakura is "chi-chi" and sasuke is "piccolo" most enemies will stay the same unless i come up w/ some characters to fill their places you'll see who the others r later, in the story. btw text with asteriks(*) is a thought and parenthesis are actions or setting changes.
here's the story
(a "comet" passes by in the sky and crashes in a field. it turns out to be a space pod and Raditz steps out)
Raditz: Where is that idiot Kakarot? He should've been done exterminating all life on this planet by now. What's taking him so long? (checks scouter) Hmm...there's a high power level around here, THAT WAY! (starts flying toward the power level) I'm coming for you Kakarot!
(at a high rock)
Sasuke(Piccolo): (senses Raditz) *HUh? What is this emmense power? Is it Goku? No, it's too evil. So then who?*
Raditz: (Lands in front of Piccolo) Hmm...You're definitely not who I'm looking for.
Sasuke: Who are you?
Raditz: I am Raditz and I'm looking for a man named Kakarot. I can see that you're not him.
Sasuke: Well, you're right, I'm Sasuke Uchiha and I'll stop you're quest here and now. (performs Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu then smirks, thinking Raditz is just ash now, but instead sees him standing right where he was before, unharmed and he suddenly looks shocked.) What the? I know my attack hit!
Raditz: Well, you did singe one one my leg hairs, but now I'll show you a real attack, it's called the Double Sunday. (starts floating into the air and raises his hands, but his scouter beeps) Hmm? What's this? Another power level? There. Sorry fire-breather, but I'm going to have to leave now. (flys off toward power level) This time, it's got to be him.
(At Jiraiya's(Roshi's) house)
Naruto(Goku): It's been a while since I've seen you all. Say, umm...where's Neji?
Tenten(Bulma): Don't know and don't care.
Naruto: Had another arguement? (Suddenly senses Raditz) What the? Is it Sasuke? This power is huge!
Jiraiya(Roshi): Yeah I sense it too, but I don't think it's Sasuke.
Kiba(Krillin): I agree.
Raditz: (lands in front of the house and looks at Naruto) Ah, Kakarot, just the person I'm looking for.
Naruto: Umm...I think you've mistaken me for someone else, I don't know a Kakarot.
Raditz: I know it's you Kakarot.
Naruto: Who are you?
Raditz: (smirks) I am Raditz...your older brother.
To be continued.
Plz read and respond and give me advice on what characters should be whom, it would be greatly appreciated.
here's the story
(a "comet" passes by in the sky and crashes in a field. it turns out to be a space pod and Raditz steps out)
Raditz: Where is that idiot Kakarot? He should've been done exterminating all life on this planet by now. What's taking him so long? (checks scouter) Hmm...there's a high power level around here, THAT WAY! (starts flying toward the power level) I'm coming for you Kakarot!
(at a high rock)
Sasuke(Piccolo): (senses Raditz) *HUh? What is this emmense power? Is it Goku? No, it's too evil. So then who?*
Raditz: (Lands in front of Piccolo) Hmm...You're definitely not who I'm looking for.
Sasuke: Who are you?
Raditz: I am Raditz and I'm looking for a man named Kakarot. I can see that you're not him.
Sasuke: Well, you're right, I'm Sasuke Uchiha and I'll stop you're quest here and now. (performs Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu then smirks, thinking Raditz is just ash now, but instead sees him standing right where he was before, unharmed and he suddenly looks shocked.) What the? I know my attack hit!
Raditz: Well, you did singe one one my leg hairs, but now I'll show you a real attack, it's called the Double Sunday. (starts floating into the air and raises his hands, but his scouter beeps) Hmm? What's this? Another power level? There. Sorry fire-breather, but I'm going to have to leave now. (flys off toward power level) This time, it's got to be him.
(At Jiraiya's(Roshi's) house)
Naruto(Goku): It's been a while since I've seen you all. Say, umm...where's Neji?
Tenten(Bulma): Don't know and don't care.
Naruto: Had another arguement? (Suddenly senses Raditz) What the? Is it Sasuke? This power is huge!
Jiraiya(Roshi): Yeah I sense it too, but I don't think it's Sasuke.
Kiba(Krillin): I agree.
Raditz: (lands in front of the house and looks at Naruto) Ah, Kakarot, just the person I'm looking for.
Naruto: Umm...I think you've mistaken me for someone else, I don't know a Kakarot.
Raditz: I know it's you Kakarot.
Naruto: Who are you?
Raditz: (smirks) I am Raditz...your older brother.
To be continued.
Plz read and respond and give me advice on what characters should be whom, it would be greatly appreciated.
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