Madara arrives
( He comes for his other rinnegan , naruto and sasuke in peril , all hopes lost , who can stop this man , who have sage's power )
BZobito : i'm sorry ! madara-sama !! these two was hard to handle .
Madara : ( looks at minato and kakashi ) Yondaime hokage and obito's friend .
( scene changes to Guy , Lee and Tenten )
Tenten : are you okay ? Lee , guy sensei .
Guy : Ugh . who might have thrown this ?
Lee : i wonder , where sakura-san went ?
Tenten : let's take tools with us to where kakashi-sensei is then -
Guy : yes , let's go lee , tenten , let's show the power of youth .
( back to arrival of madara )
Kakashi : This is bad , we can't fight both of them at once .
Gaara : not him too .
Minato : !?
Kakashi : Now what's we gonna do sensei .
Sakura : That's madara uhiha , ( looks at obito ) he have become just like him .
Minato : ( looking at naruto and clinches his fist with a rising anger ) I'm sorry my son , i couldn't keep my promise to your mother ( stands up ) but you gonna pay madara !!!
Madara : ( gives a stare at minato ) you might be known as konaha's yellow flash but you're nothing compared to me .
BZobito : you won against obito but madara-sama not in his level .
Sakura : ( looks at angry minato then at naruto ) naruto !?
Minato : ( turns an look at sakura ) we will find a way to save naruto , i promise his mother , i won't broke it .
Kakashi : you have to take care of him . sakura !!
Sakura : but i'm running out of chakra ( tears shining in her eyes ) i can't keep him alive for long .
Minato : ( get down on his knee and extend his hand towords sakura ) give me your hand .
Sakura : !!?
( sakura extend her right hand towords him , minato holds sakura's hand and their hands begins glow )
Minato : i will restore your chakra .
( minato begins tranfering chakra )
Sakura : ( thinks ) my chakra is returning , this fast ( looks at naruto then at minato ) your father is really amazing naruto .
Minato : now take care of him for me okay .
Sakura : ( nods ) yeah....
Madara : okay then let's have some fun , i have test my power too .
BZobito : with ninetails , i can help too .
Madara : Ninetails ?
BZobito : you only have the yang half and i have the yin half .
Madara : i see , i will take the other rinnegan eye then .
( Sands comes between Madara and BZobito )
Gaara : no ! you won't .
Madara : brat ! you survived last time but this time , i will kill you , bansho -
( Stops and looks at red bubbles begins to appear on BZobito )
BZobito : ( thinks ) beast is going out of control .
( inside the mind )
Yin kurama : you think you have me , i will tear you apart .
( attacks BZobito )
Bzobito : i will have to defeat you then -
( scene changes to orichimaru and others )
Karin : we have to reach sasuke fast .
Juugo : ( begins to transform and in his rough voice ) we have to hurry .
Suigetsu : all getting serious , well i can't stay behind ( speeds up )
Orichimaru : ( gains speed ) she is becoming more stronger .
( scene changes to mystrious person )
....... : i will save you as a debt .
Tobirama : tell me !! who the hell are you ?
( his face can be seen through sand but not clear )
....... : does it matter , if i can save him .
Tobirama : then you have to hurry , i can barely sense him .
( scene change back to where madara is , BZobito has transformed in to 6 tails and creating tail beast ball )
Madara : well then one eye is enough to defeat you two and you kazekage brat .
Kakashi : !!?
Minato : I will take on madara , ( thinks ) he's powerful but i will keep my promise to kushina , even if i'm gone , must save naruto .
( right as they start to charge ahead , suddenly a beast ball get shoot and explosion cn be seen far away )
( gaara covers minato and kakashi with sand )
Minato : !?
Kakashi : !?
Gaara : did he attack us ?
Madara : ( in threatening voice ) black zetsu , what are you doing ?
( BZobito roars and transform in to 7 tails )
Madara : Nine tails , this will be interesting ( thinks ) I can test my power more now ( laughs )
Out of control
BZobito is going out of control or is it kurama taking over him .
The End .
Hope you guys enjoy it
( He comes for his other rinnegan , naruto and sasuke in peril , all hopes lost , who can stop this man , who have sage's power )
BZobito : i'm sorry ! madara-sama !! these two was hard to handle .
Madara : ( looks at minato and kakashi ) Yondaime hokage and obito's friend .
( scene changes to Guy , Lee and Tenten )
Tenten : are you okay ? Lee , guy sensei .
Guy : Ugh . who might have thrown this ?
Lee : i wonder , where sakura-san went ?
Tenten : let's take tools with us to where kakashi-sensei is then -
Guy : yes , let's go lee , tenten , let's show the power of youth .
( back to arrival of madara )
Kakashi : This is bad , we can't fight both of them at once .
Gaara : not him too .
Minato : !?
Kakashi : Now what's we gonna do sensei .
Sakura : That's madara uhiha , ( looks at obito ) he have become just like him .
Minato : ( looking at naruto and clinches his fist with a rising anger ) I'm sorry my son , i couldn't keep my promise to your mother ( stands up ) but you gonna pay madara !!!
Madara : ( gives a stare at minato ) you might be known as konaha's yellow flash but you're nothing compared to me .
BZobito : you won against obito but madara-sama not in his level .
Sakura : ( looks at angry minato then at naruto ) naruto !?
Minato : ( turns an look at sakura ) we will find a way to save naruto , i promise his mother , i won't broke it .
Kakashi : you have to take care of him . sakura !!
Sakura : but i'm running out of chakra ( tears shining in her eyes ) i can't keep him alive for long .
Minato : ( get down on his knee and extend his hand towords sakura ) give me your hand .
Sakura : !!?
( sakura extend her right hand towords him , minato holds sakura's hand and their hands begins glow )
Minato : i will restore your chakra .
( minato begins tranfering chakra )
Sakura : ( thinks ) my chakra is returning , this fast ( looks at naruto then at minato ) your father is really amazing naruto .
Minato : now take care of him for me okay .
Sakura : ( nods ) yeah....
Madara : okay then let's have some fun , i have test my power too .
BZobito : with ninetails , i can help too .
Madara : Ninetails ?
BZobito : you only have the yang half and i have the yin half .
Madara : i see , i will take the other rinnegan eye then .
( Sands comes between Madara and BZobito )
Gaara : no ! you won't .
Madara : brat ! you survived last time but this time , i will kill you , bansho -
( Stops and looks at red bubbles begins to appear on BZobito )
BZobito : ( thinks ) beast is going out of control .
( inside the mind )
Yin kurama : you think you have me , i will tear you apart .
( attacks BZobito )
Bzobito : i will have to defeat you then -
( scene changes to orichimaru and others )
Karin : we have to reach sasuke fast .
Juugo : ( begins to transform and in his rough voice ) we have to hurry .
Suigetsu : all getting serious , well i can't stay behind ( speeds up )
Orichimaru : ( gains speed ) she is becoming more stronger .
( scene changes to mystrious person )
....... : i will save you as a debt .
Tobirama : tell me !! who the hell are you ?
( his face can be seen through sand but not clear )
....... : does it matter , if i can save him .
Tobirama : then you have to hurry , i can barely sense him .
( scene change back to where madara is , BZobito has transformed in to 6 tails and creating tail beast ball )
Madara : well then one eye is enough to defeat you two and you kazekage brat .
Kakashi : !!?
Minato : I will take on madara , ( thinks ) he's powerful but i will keep my promise to kushina , even if i'm gone , must save naruto .
( right as they start to charge ahead , suddenly a beast ball get shoot and explosion cn be seen far away )
( gaara covers minato and kakashi with sand )
Minato : !?
Kakashi : !?
Gaara : did he attack us ?
Madara : ( in threatening voice ) black zetsu , what are you doing ?
( BZobito roars and transform in to 7 tails )
Madara : Nine tails , this will be interesting ( thinks ) I can test my power more now ( laughs )
Out of control
BZobito is going out of control or is it kurama taking over him .
The End .
Hope you guys enjoy it
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