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Great job Shodaime

Manga huh!?, great art work huh!?

I think I know the person for the job :D

oh and I cant wait for the next chapter
 

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Chapter Ten: Enter Zanji Uchiha


BIBI and Zonder continued to make their way down that underground hall lighted only by the lantern BIBI carried with her, the hall seemed to go on forever as they had been walking for a good while.

“Zonder we are nearly there, soon you’ll meet the crew who will be escorting you through the South on your mission, we were lucky to get them for you” BIBI said.

“What do you mean ‘we’ BIBI?” Zonder asked but before he could get an answer BIBI had stopped, in front of them now was a split path.

“Hmmm I think its right we go, yes that is it right. Right is right and left leads to death. I believe that was the old rhyme to figuring out this path.” BIBI said looking pleased with herself.

Zonder simply looked at him with slight confusion on his face and kept following him, he glanced down the path to the left and could not help but wonder what was down there but for now it would have to wait. After another long stretch of walking BIBI stopped once again and turned to Zonder.

“We are here” she said looking cheerful

“Huh? The path still goes on though, I see no end in sight yet sir” Zonder said while looking around.

“Okay then Zon, lead the way” BIBI said.

Zonder looked at BIBI and decided to keep going on ahead only to slam face first into what appeared to be nothing and fall back.

“What the f*ck was that!?” yelled Zonder.

“A wall” BIBI said shortly. “Well an invisible wall to be correct, what appears to be more of the hall is actually just an illusion”

Zonder stood up and gave her a dirty look as BIBI simply smiled back. BIBI waved her hands in a circular motion and a door with two handles appeared. BIBI grabbed both handles and began to pull, this was the first time Zonder had seen BIBI have to use what seemed to be force on anything. A few seconds later the handles popped out and the door spun around as it ascended upwards opening up a new path covered in stone.

“Been awhile since I had to do that, seems I have a bit of rust on me” BIBI said as she walked through. Zonder followed and noticed a bright light just a bit ahead, as he passed through it he found himself in a forest surrounded by trees.

“Where are we” Zonder said looking puzzled

“We are now on the outskirts on the Eastern lands Zon, no longer anywhere near the Kingdom, that cave we just came from was our exit. I realize that it may not have seemed like it but we were walking for nearly a two days.” BIBI said as she took in the fresh air.

Zonder went to speak but before he could a loud explosion behind them captured their attention.

“HELL YEAH NOW THAT’S AN ATTACK!” Yelled a loud and manly voice from just beyond the trees.

“Ah, that’ll be them, come Zon” BIBI said as she walked towards the explosion. Zonder followed behind him with care, ready to draw his blade at a moments notice.

“Hey, hey there fellows, me and Zonder are here” BIBI said as they both made their way to a clearing out of the trees. Zonder looked at the people he saw in the clearing, it appeared to be a group of oddly dressed rebels all wearing black head bands.”

“Yo BIBI bout time you got here” Said the tallest and most built in the group.

He stood over 7 feet tall wearing a tight white shirt with no sleeves, loose black pants, torn shoes, a black head band and an eye patch on his left eye.

“Glad to see you and your team found the place alright Zanji Uchiha” BIBI said as they shook hands.

“Well you know we don’t travel anywhere without our star navigator here” Zanji Uchiha said slapping the ass of a girl directly to his left.

“Damnit Zanji's stop doing that, I can hardly sit down these days” Said a short slim girl with dark hair, she was the cleanest in the group and wore a long pink out fit with pink gloves and of course a black head band.

“Miss BlondieGirl, pleasure to see you again” BIBI said taking her hand and kissing it.

“Don’t be pulling that sh*t BIBI, that ass is mine” A short haired boy in green shorts and top said. He too had black head band and smiled while a few of his teeth were silver, in his hand was a broken firework which Zonder figured to be the cause the earlier explosion..

“Shut the f**k up Shodaime, the only ass you get is from the whores” BlondieGirl said tossing a rock at his head. It missed and hit the head of someone sleeping in front of a tree just behind him. The man did not awake from the hit but was dressed in an armor chest guard, black pants with what appeared to be the skinned body of a dead wolf around them.

“Oops, sorry Pride” BlondieGirl said shyly but he just kept on sleeping.

“How about you both shut the hell up before I kill you, you’re being rude to our guest” Zanji Uchiha said looking back at them. His stare was hard and the sick smile he had on along with his size gave the impression he was not the one to f**k with.

He turned back and stared at Zonder who had not spoken yet.

“Is this the cream puff we are baby sitting?” He said looking Zonder up and down. Zonder looked back at him and began to take a few steps toward him not breaking eye contact.

“Haha yes, I suppose he is but cream puff hardly suits someone of Zons power, keep in mind his lack of knowledge on the area is the only reason you guys are here” BIBI said happily.

“Yeah whatever but looks like he has a staring problem, you know boy were I am from that means your looking to prove something, so what is it, you wanna have a little fighting session with me, I promise not to kill ya?” Zanji Uchiha said looking excited.

“I respect the time and effort you are taking out of your lives to help me on this mission but keep in mind I did not ask for your help, also a rogue rebel like you could never stand up to an S Admin soldier such as myself.” Zonder said turning his back to him and walking off.

“Sounds like you’re a ***** along with the rest of them ‘soldiers’ you hang with” Zanji Uchiha yelled at him. shodaime laughed while BlondieGirl showed concern on her face as if she knew what was about to happen.

Zonder stopped and turned back around. “Alright have it your way, I’ll fight you and show you the strength of aAdmin Soldier first hand.” Zonder said drawing his sword from his back.

BIBI seemed to show no interest in stopping what was about to happen as he simply took a few steps back. shodaime and BlondieGirl jumped into the near by trees so they could watch the fight overhead and Zanji began to walk towards Zonder, smiling at the fact he’d been able to coax Zonder into this fight.

“What are you doing?” Zonder asked taking his battle stance. “Draw your weapon before we begin.”

Zanji simply laughed and held up his hands as he made fists.

“These are my weapons fool, the two manly hands that reside on my body, I am going to teach you what it means to be a real soldier” Zanji said as he began his charge at Zonder.


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Chapter Eleven: Unexpected Power ? Hand battles Blade


Zanji was charging at Zonder head on with his fists up ready to fight. He threw a straight blow at him that Zonder blocked with his sword, the force of the punch however was so strong he had to use both hands to brace the sword and hold him back but Zanji simply grabbed the blade and forced it down to Zonder knees and used his free hand to punch Zanji right in the jaw that sent him flying threw the trees.

?Idiot, the limits of a sword are easy to exploit for someone like me, I am guessing this is your first time fighting a warrior who uses only his own body and does not rely on some man made weapon.? Zanji yelled smugly.

Zonder came out of the trees at Zanji with a burst of speed and sent a slice directed right at his body, Zanji dodged and Zonder continued the chase him through the open area slicing anything that got in his way, even almost hitting a sleeping Pride on the side.

?You are not fast enough boy, come on I?ve only got one eye? Zanji said as he kept dodging.

?Shut up? Zonder yelled as he continued to try and harm Zanji.

Zonder switched up his approach and snuck up on Zanji?s left side and was able to connect with a well placed slice to his arm, Zanji smiled and stopped to look at the cut while Zonder stopped too just in front of him and out of breath.

?Alright then, my turn again? Zanji said smoothly.

Blondiegirl, shodaime and BIBI were still just looking on as Zanji had now begun sending shots with his fists at Zonder who could just barely keep up blocking them with his sword.

?*Gotta catch him off guard, he can be hurt its just a matter of ending this in one strike, but I don?t wanna kill him, just put him down to end this, next opening I will make my move!*? Zonder thought to himself as Zanji kept up his attack.

?Come on, my fists might be filled with some of me spirit energy but can you honestly tell me you can?t do anything now but block? HAHA PATHETIC? Zanji said as he taunted him.

?Yeah Zanji that?s right kick his Admin ass? shodaime yelled out from the tree as Blondiegirl kicked him giving him a disapproving look.

Zanji leaned back and sent another hard punch straight down at Zonder who not only blocked it this time but used his energy to fling Zanji?s hand to the side and quickly counter attack with a sliced straight down Zanji?s chest.

BIBI, Blondiegirl and shodaime seemed to just look on with a bit of shock as Zanji dropped to his knees, the blood slowly dripping from his chest.

?You are too over confident and too blind with just one eye to see it, stay down and get treated, you have lost this fight? Zonder said resting his sword on his shoulder.

Just then Zanji rubbed his hand across his chest collecting blood and threw it in Zonders eyes. Zonder stumbled dropping his sword and holding his eyes.

?You fu**ing coward that was a cheap shot, WHAT THE F**K? Zonder roared still not able to see anything.

?Nothing is cheap in battle, you fight to win and nothing more, in the land of the blind a man with one eye is the king and that King would be me boy? Zanji said standing up and seemly unfazed by the long cut in his chest.

Zanji seemed to be charging up energy in his right hand preparing to deliver a punch to the blinded and fallen Zonder.

?This is it? shodaime said as him and Blondiegirl looked on to see if the fight was going to end here. Zanji made a fist and went to attack but felt his arm stop as his he was restrained before he could hit the fallen Zonder.

?That?ll do Zanji, thanks for giving Zon an little warm up session? BIBI said smiling as she held Zanji?s arm back from behind.

?Eh yeah, no problem, I?d fix him up a little though, were leaving first thing in the morning? Zanji said as he walked back to the middle of the opening being joined by shodaime and Blondiegirl.

?Damn that guy, I?ll get him back I swear.? Zonder said as BIBI was helping him up and over to a stream downhill to be treated.

?Settle down Zon that?s just his way of saying he likes you, he does not fight hard against any old scrub, be honored.? BIBI?s voice was cheerful but there was a slight hint of concern in it, he?d be leaving Zonder alone with them tomorrow morning and could not help but wonder if he?d be returning in one piece or not.

Else where back at the castle the news of Zonder?s death at the hands of Domi had spread, everyone was in shock but none more so then Sweetsasuke who had the news delivered to him personally by Vesuvio.

?Oh I just cannot believe this, how could Zon have lost to that guy and to die by someone who is supposed to be your companion, its just sick? sweetsasuke said as the tears rolled down his face.

?I know, Versuvio has called a meeting for first thing tomorrow, things are going to be crazy here for awhile, you know I heard they can?t even find BIBI, don?t know what that?s about but hopefully tomorrow will bring some better news, feel better I am off.? shinbu said as he took his hand from her shoulder and departed the room.

?Okay you take care and I will still let you know if Jessie?s condition changes.? She yelled at him.

?Thanks!? He yelled back and was gone.

?Oh what a horrible, horrible day, Zon how could you just leave and die on me like that, what were you thinking fighting Domi, since when did you desire to replace him as an S Admin anyway, idiot I?ll never forgive you? sweetsasuke said silently to himself while sitting alone in the room.

In the bed in front of her however a patient began to stir, moving slowly but surely and with their eyes opening someone had woke up. Sweetsasuke stood up and realized it was jessie as she was the only patient left, she had awoken at long last from her sleep.

?Umm where am I, what happened?? jessie said trying to get a good look of the room she was in as she pulled herself up.

Sweetsasuke just stood there in shock, he had not prepared for this and did not know how to explain all of what had occured, he?d have to comfort jessie without a dout once she told her everything and she knew what that may lead to, a difficult action but one she had to follow through with.

?jessie I am afraid I have some bad news for you? he said as his eyes filled with tears once again.


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>< more more more more more more more more more more lol this is getting good :D

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Chapter Twelve: Naughty nurse and Kingdom decisions

jessie stared blankly at Sweetsasuke as he had just finished updating his on what had taken place, the deal on his chest, Zonder death, everything, she could hardly take it all in as she had just woken up and was not in the best state of mind. Sweetsasuke stood quiet in front of his bed not knowing exactly what to expect.

“So that’s everything right, everything that’s happened while I have been asleep?” jessie asked in a low voice.

“Yes jessie it is, I am so sorry I had to tell you this and when you had just woken up too from your injury, please forgive me.” Sweetsasuke said as he began to cry again and covered his face with his hands.

“Its no your fault, you know in a way I am kind of glad it was you who told me, I’ve always liked your way of going about things and your honestly.” jessie said as she extended her arms for a hug. Sweetsasuke walked over and hugged her back their warm flesh rubbing together.

“I’ve always felt something for you jessie, really I have, please let me try and take your mind off things, let me be with you if only for a short while” Sweetsasuke said looking into jessie eyes.

jessie simply blushed as she stared back at him and replied: “I know its not right but I am yours for now.”

Sweetsasuke’s lips crash against jessie’s. she can feel the passion, she knows what she wants and she won’t stop until she gets it. Sweetsasuke pulls her closer and slides her hand up his shirt knowing she will like it. jessie moans softly and Sweetsasuke whispers sweet love bits into her ear. It drives her crazy, arching his back and he knows exactly what jessie wants but he teases her. he is trailing his fingers down jessie’s stomach while he gently nibbles on her ear. Alternating between biting and sucking she whispers in her ear.

“It feels so nice” jessie says blushing as Sweetsasuke continues.

"I want you so bad." Sweetsasuke whispers.

The only thought that comes to jessie’s mind is"Take me then" but she keeps that to herself for now until she finally gives in.

“I need you so bad. I want to feel you inside of me." jessie moans in pleasure.

His hand slides down jessie's stomach feather and into her pants. he seems surprised to find that there are no panties underneath. jessie gives a look, his face is full of fear but his eyes say something different, he knows she wants it even more now.

Sweetsasuke slides his finger into jessie’s pulsing cunt and pushes causing jessie to moan more in delight. Sweetsasuke finds her rhythm, in and out as she picks up the pace pumping her arm harder for your pleasure.jessie is working herself up as she enjoys it and needs to be released soon.

“I can’t hold it anymore.. its too much” jessie says as she lets out one moan after the other burying her head into Sweetsasuke’s neck and resisting the temptation to bite neck at it as she lets out one final moan.

The after shocks ripple through jessie in various waves, it's pleasurable. It's complete and utter bliss. She wraps her arms around her tighter as she is breathing unevenly into Sweetsasuke’s ear.

“You need it like I do” jessie says bravely and gets down and removes Sweetsasuke’s skirt.

She tosses them somewhere behind her over the bed and on the floor. Sweetsasuke hops on the bed as jessie pushes up closer to him and lays herself between his legs. jessie begins to open him up and sticks her tongue directly on his clit, moving in slow even circles then switching it up.

“Am I doing okay?” jessie pauses as he asks shyly.

“You are” Moans Sweetsasuke as she gives the look to continue.

jessie keeps licking him up and down, gently sucking every once in awhile. Sweetsasuke moans ever so often but it increases as jessie picks up the pace with her tongue forcing him to get louder. Sweetsasuke reaches for a pillow to bury your face but jessie pushes it away. Sweetsasuke grabs the back of her head and pushes her closer into him wet and warm cunt and jessie more then gladly accepts the invitation.

jessie keeps her pace and finally Sweetsasuke cums as he grabs jessie’s head to get her to stop. he pulls her close licking her face gently.

“Thank you” jessie says as she crawls to cuddle with Sweetsasuke on the bed. The footstep’s however heading towards them prevents this from happening. Barely able to stand straight they both hurry and re dress looking as sloppy as ever.

shodaime arrives seconds later looking shocked and confused.

“Oh my goodness jessie you are awake at last” He says running and hugging her.

Sweetsasuke looked on with a weak smile on his face as jessie hugged shodaime back still blushing from her adventure with Sweetsasuke.

“Hey Sweetsasuke why didn’t you send for me if she was awake” shodaime said suddenly.

Sweetsasuke opened his mouth to speak but jessie had already begun speaking.

“That was my doing, sorry I wanted to surprise you in person” jessie said with a smile on her face.

“Ha well as long as you were feeling better its fine, you are right, I mean your all read and hot, plus you are a little sweaty, come to think of it so is Sweetsasuke.”shodaime said observing them a little more closely.

jessie was about to try and offer an explanation but this time Sweetsasuke was quick to speak.

“You spend enough time in this room and it will happen to you as well shodaime” Sweetsasuke said brightly. “Now tell me why have you come back so soon?”

“Oh right, versuvio wants everyone in the assembly hall at once, seems he is making a huge announcement” shodaime said leading the way as they followed.

The hall was packed, everyone seemed to be there, all the Mods and S Admin took their seats at the tables on the stage as versuvio stood in the middle with Domi next to him.

“With the passing death of Zonder and recent events we have learned off I have decided to make some changes, I will keep this short because I have much to do.” versuvio said as the crowd in the hall looked on.

“It is with great pleasure I present to you the newest Admin Soldier and Zonders worthy replacement, Akira_Tao.”

A normal sized girl with big black eyes that were as deep as puddles, perky boobs and a slim well toned body stood up, she removed the robe she had on revealing the Mod out fit she had on and then took the stage to speak.

“Its never easy coming in and being the new guy, in this case girl, I will do my best to uphold the rules this Kingdom has and hopefully follow in Zonder footsteps before his foolish death.” Akira_Tao said quickly as she moved to take her seat.

jessie’s eyes followed her sharply.

“*Foolish death? who does this bitch think she is*” jessie thought angrily to herself.

“Next up I would like to say I have finally found a warrior worthy of the Admin title so please welcome our newest South Member MR. Madara.”

The former Hidden Flame Village Soldier of the East stood up and took his spot on versuvio’s left side across from Domi, he said nothing as he put on his robes and looked on at the crowd. He was slightly tall and in great shape, his hair extended no lower then a little past his eyebrows, he had pure white skin and his stare was cold.

“A man with little to say but much to offer, he will be taking steps to bring justice back into the land of the South by any means needed, that will conclude with meeting but jessie I would like to say its great to see you awake however please see me outside in a moment, we have some things to discuss” versuvio said shortly as he, Domi and Madara exited.

Many were talking about what had just happened, jessie herself was in a bit of shock, this was even more to take in. What was versuvio going to say to her and would it be good? The story is truly only just beginning.


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