Itachi9695
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Before I begin I would like to say some things
1. I came up with this title a long time ago so no one can say i stole someone's title
2. I will accept new fan characters but you must post their stats (appearance, attitude, interests, what they dislike, and of course their name, etc.)
3. Please give me any suggestions to help make this story better
4. Also note this is my first fanfiction on any forum in a long time
5. The storyline was begun by me and someone i used to chat with, so were the name of the original characters
6. when I put text inside of asteriks it means it's a thought
Setting: A field by the Ninja Academy
Tauto: (inhales) Ahh... fresh air. (hears the bell that starts classes) Oh man, not again! (runs to class but arrives too late)
Kiba: Tauto, this is the 2nd time you've been late this week. One more time and I'm calling your parents!
Tauto: (sits in his seat and sees a new girl in class) *She must have just transferred to this class*
Kiba: Today, we're going over the Shadow Clone Jutsu
Tauto: *Oh, man that's my worst jutsu, I'll never pass*
Kiba: Tauto, why don't you go first?
Tauto: *Drat!* (walks to the front of the class and attempts a shadow clone, but instead, it turns out to be a centaur looking thing, then looks at Kiba) I failed, didn't I?
Kiba: Hmm... how to sum it up...Yes!
Sayla(New Girl): *Man... he sucks*
Kiba: Why don't we have our new girl, Sayla, come up and demonstrate?
Sayla: (goes to front and makes a perfect shadow clone)
(After school)
Kiba: Class dismissed.
(Claas leaves except Sayla)
Kiba: Sayla, I found this with your stuff, (hands her a note) could you read it if it's not too personal. I saw it was from your father, Sasuke.
Tauto: (stops outside the door)
Sayla: (reads note that says: Dear Sayla, I'm going away again, but for power this time. Your father, Sasuke.)
Kiba: Oh no! Not again!! (calls Naruto) Naruto, Sasuke's runnig away again, we have to go after him now!
Naruto: Okay, I'll meet you at the gate.
(both hang up)
Kiba: (runs out the door)
To be continued...
1. I came up with this title a long time ago so no one can say i stole someone's title
2. I will accept new fan characters but you must post their stats (appearance, attitude, interests, what they dislike, and of course their name, etc.)
3. Please give me any suggestions to help make this story better
4. Also note this is my first fanfiction on any forum in a long time
5. The storyline was begun by me and someone i used to chat with, so were the name of the original characters
6. when I put text inside of asteriks it means it's a thought
Chapter 1
Setting: A field by the Ninja Academy
Tauto: (inhales) Ahh... fresh air. (hears the bell that starts classes) Oh man, not again! (runs to class but arrives too late)
Kiba: Tauto, this is the 2nd time you've been late this week. One more time and I'm calling your parents!
Tauto: (sits in his seat and sees a new girl in class) *She must have just transferred to this class*
Kiba: Today, we're going over the Shadow Clone Jutsu
Tauto: *Oh, man that's my worst jutsu, I'll never pass*
Kiba: Tauto, why don't you go first?
Tauto: *Drat!* (walks to the front of the class and attempts a shadow clone, but instead, it turns out to be a centaur looking thing, then looks at Kiba) I failed, didn't I?
Kiba: Hmm... how to sum it up...Yes!
Sayla(New Girl): *Man... he sucks*
Kiba: Why don't we have our new girl, Sayla, come up and demonstrate?
Sayla: (goes to front and makes a perfect shadow clone)
(After school)
Kiba: Class dismissed.
(Claas leaves except Sayla)
Kiba: Sayla, I found this with your stuff, (hands her a note) could you read it if it's not too personal. I saw it was from your father, Sasuke.
Tauto: (stops outside the door)
Sayla: (reads note that says: Dear Sayla, I'm going away again, but for power this time. Your father, Sasuke.)
Kiba: Oh no! Not again!! (calls Naruto) Naruto, Sasuke's runnig away again, we have to go after him now!
Naruto: Okay, I'll meet you at the gate.
(both hang up)
Kiba: (runs out the door)
To be continued...
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