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A white figure appears besides Naruto.
Page 1
Naruto: Ashura!!!
Hagoromo: This is a reflection of your past self. A thoughtless embodiment that is no one but you.
Naruto: Then that means that Sasuke is the elder son. He has always been much ahead of me.
Hagoromo: You two were always meant to be like my sons.
Naruto: There is something I do not understand. Why did the elder son confront his brother if his ideals involved peace?
Hagoromo: You probably already know about the cycle of hatred.
SFX: SIGH
Hagoromo: When I made my choice, Indra tried to convince me about his brother's flaws. But I knew that the elder son had always had a deep loathing for his brother. He felt that his brother was a shame and that he didn't deserve to exist in the first place.
Page 2
Naruto: So, he was someone like Madara.
Hagoromo: Indeed! However, if I didn't seal the juubi's mind inside Indra, the cycle of hatred would never have existed.
Naruto: Like Kurama, the Juubi was divided in half?
Hagoromo: Yes! Originally when I fought the juubi, my brother Hagoromo sealed its mind and I sealed its body.
Naruto: How did you defeat such a thing in the first place?
Hagoromo: This had been a long battle.
SFX: Shining
A light emerges from Hagoromo's middle forehead.
Page 3
SFX: Rumbling! Explosions!
Mountains are being destroyed apart and huge blasts have left craters in the ground
Uzushi(Hagoromo's brother): Here it is! Be on your guards Hagoromo!
Kilometres away, Juubi is shown in its first form destroying the land.
Uzushi: It won't cease to cause chaos. Why is it targeting the landscape too?
Hagoromo: The shinju was the creator of the world. It seeks to obliterate humans along with this land for the birth of another world.
Uzushi(shouting): Shinju!!! Stop!!!
Page 4
Shinju in first form: Kaguya's sons, have you come to embrace death.
SFX: Skin peeling
The shinju transcends from first form to second form.
SFX: Charge
A small juubi dama is formed.
SFX: Shooting
Uzushi: Hagoromo, use your onmyoudon!
SFX: Crashing
Hagoromo strikes his staff against the ground.
Page 5
SFX: Gigantic blast
Uzushi: Go!!!
SFX: Run
The two of them charges towards the Juubi.
Scene changes to present
Hagoromo: We fought the shinju for two days but after, we realised that we had been underestimating it.
Scene reverts back
Shinju in second form is on the ground.
Uzushi: I guess this is the end.
Hagoromo: No, Uzushi!
Page 6
Shinju: Rahhhhhhhhh!
SFX: Shockwave! Earthquake!
Hagoromo: Get ready, it is transforming again.
Shinju: Kaguya brat, how long will you understimate me!!!!!
Shinju accumulates chakra and becomes more massive.
Its mouth and eye aligns on one face and he grows another ear. The spikes on its back dissapear, its body becomes more human like. The spikes on its head grows in size and align themselves in the form of a crown.
Hagoromo: This had been its perfect stage since the beginning. I will absorb natural energy while you open the gates!
Uzushi: I will have to use the eighth gate. My body can handle it after all!
Shinju: Gaaaah!
The shinju creates a shockwave which directs hundreds of mountains at them.
Page 7
Scene changes to present
Naruto: What happened next?
Hagoromo: We confronted the shinju for another day and then we bound it.
Scene reverts back
Hagoromo and Uzushi: Senpou-Onmyoujin Keikai
Thousands of giant chakra rods appear and impale juubi while chains emergy from the ground to bind juubi. Also, Red Tori(Gates of great god) falls from the sky and pummels juubi's body to the ground.
SFX: Crashing
Shinju: Hagoromo!!!!
SFX: Raise
The shinju pulls itself against the ground and destroy a few chains and gates.
Hagoromo: This won't hold it much longer.
Page 8
Uzushi: I will seal it inside my body with my sealing technique
SFX: Appear
Kaguya: Stop Uzushi, Hagoromo.
SFX: Raising hands
A giant transparent figure emerges from kaguya's body.
Kaguya: I will use the shiki fuujin.
Hagoromo and Uzushi: Mother-
Kaguya(serious): I will compensate for my own sins! Shiki fuujin!
SFX: Forming
Two arms are directed at the juubi's body to make contact.
Page 9
Shinju: Kaguya, so damned are you.
SFX: Separation
The two arms split the juubi into two parts.
Kaguya: I will seal the shinju's mind and body into each of you. Be ready!
SFX: Sealing
Shinju: Raaaaa-
Seals form on hagoromo and uzushi's bodies.
Hagoromo: Mother!
Kaguya's body dissolve and she changes into a spirit to fuse with the shinigami she casted.
SFX: Fusion
The shinigami which had no face before took a similar appearance to Kaguya.
Page 10
Scene changes to present
Hagoromo: Our mother Kaguya perished and became the death god.
Naruto: Her power was exiged in the afterlife huh!
Hagoromo: Right, she passed a contract with death itself.
Naruto: What happened after the juubi was sealed?
Hagoromo: My brother and I subjugated the Juubi. Its sealed mind inside uzushi lacked its powerful body whereas its body which was sealed in me lacked a mind. By dividing the juubi into two parts, we have ensured that the juubi would be easy to be controlled in one's body. Then, shortly afterwards, Indra and Ashura were born.
Naruto: The 2 sons!
Hagoromo: My brother was much older than me. After several years, he was no longer able to subdue the juubi because his body has been weakened by old age. I was left with no choice but to seal it into one of my sons.
Page 11
Naruto: Why into your own sons?
Hagoromo: Only my sons had the adequate body and part of the fruit's power passed by my mother Kaguya.
Naruto: Who did you choose?
Hagoromo: Unfortunately, I chose Indra because I thought he had more potential than his brother. However I was wrong. When I sealed the juubi's mind, his ripple-like eye changed into the 3 tomoe eye known in your time as the sharingan.
Naruto: So, does that mean that the juubi has initially 9 tomoes.
Hagoromo: You have figured it out Uzumaki Naruto. The juubi's body had 6 tomoes whereas its mind had 3 tomoes.
Naruto: Then, what happened to the elder son?
Page 12
Hagoromo: He bore hatred towards the world and his brother. On hearing that I chose Ashura as my successor, Indra allowed himself to be unconsciously overwhelmed by the juubi's mind. As a result, his ocular power surpassed the rinnegan and was able to summon the god Susanoo.
Naruto: I imagine that the elder son lost to the younger son.
Hagoromo: Indeed! That is what set the cycle of hatred. The battle left the world in awe!
SFX: Shift
The world that was being shown by hagoromo changes to a battlefield.
Page 13
Indra: You do not come close to me in terms of power, Ashura.
Ashura: Huff Huff
Indra: Even if you unlocked your power from Uzushi and sealed the nine pets inside of you, you still cannot oppose my space-time ocular technique neither my imperfect susannoo nor my black flames.
Ashura: Let's end this here, Indra!
Indra: It will never end until one of us die. So, vanish!
SFX: Perfect susanoo forms
Ashura: It can't be helped.
Ashura concentrates and enters into a mental dimension.
Page 14
Ashura to bijuus: I need your help, please, please!
Kurama: We will try our best Ashura!
Kurama to other bijuus: Let's put more effort into this!
The 9 bijuus come forward and form a circle.
Ashura: Let's go!
SFX: Moving
A giant susanoo sword is coming at full speed towards Indra.
Ashura: The power of love, friendship and unison won't fail.
SFX: Blast
A huge bijuu cloak forms around Ashura sending the susanoo's sword crashing on the ground kilometres away.
Page 15
Ashura: Brother, you are allowing yourself to be overwhelmed by the juubi.
Indra(shocked): How and when did you?
Ashura: Drop your hatred and you will achieve a similar power.
Indra(angry): Like I care!
SFX: Magatama forming
Indra: You cannot imagine how much my hatred for you is Ashura.
SFX: Shooting
SFX: Dodging
Ashura quickly manages to get out of the way.
Page 16
Scene changes to present
Hagoromo: The battle left Ashura as the winner. However, Ashura refused to kill his brother which continued on bearing hatred towards him. Indra had sons and daughters which are the founders of the uchiha clan. On the contrary, Ashura's offsprings founded the senju clan. Eventually, the two fought major wars.
Naruto: I feel sorry that it had to come to this.
Hagoromo: I am regretful of having sealed the juubi's mind into Indra and setting up the cycle of hatred. Uzumaki Naruto, I will confy to you a power unknown to the world before. You are able to save your friends and even Madara from the curse of hatred.
Naruto(smiling): Leave it to me. I am the reincarnation of your son after all.
Hagoromo: I guess our little meeting is over. There is nothing more left to be said. Farewell, Uzumaki Naruto!
HAGOROMO DISAPPEARS LEAVING NARUTO WITH AN UNKNOWN POWER AND A NEW WILL!
Page 1
Naruto: Ashura!!!
Hagoromo: This is a reflection of your past self. A thoughtless embodiment that is no one but you.
Naruto: Then that means that Sasuke is the elder son. He has always been much ahead of me.
Hagoromo: You two were always meant to be like my sons.
Naruto: There is something I do not understand. Why did the elder son confront his brother if his ideals involved peace?
Hagoromo: You probably already know about the cycle of hatred.
SFX: SIGH
Hagoromo: When I made my choice, Indra tried to convince me about his brother's flaws. But I knew that the elder son had always had a deep loathing for his brother. He felt that his brother was a shame and that he didn't deserve to exist in the first place.
Page 2
Naruto: So, he was someone like Madara.
Hagoromo: Indeed! However, if I didn't seal the juubi's mind inside Indra, the cycle of hatred would never have existed.
Naruto: Like Kurama, the Juubi was divided in half?
Hagoromo: Yes! Originally when I fought the juubi, my brother Hagoromo sealed its mind and I sealed its body.
Naruto: How did you defeat such a thing in the first place?
Hagoromo: This had been a long battle.
SFX: Shining
A light emerges from Hagoromo's middle forehead.
Page 3
SFX: Rumbling! Explosions!
Mountains are being destroyed apart and huge blasts have left craters in the ground
Uzushi(Hagoromo's brother): Here it is! Be on your guards Hagoromo!
Kilometres away, Juubi is shown in its first form destroying the land.
Uzushi: It won't cease to cause chaos. Why is it targeting the landscape too?
Hagoromo: The shinju was the creator of the world. It seeks to obliterate humans along with this land for the birth of another world.
Uzushi(shouting): Shinju!!! Stop!!!
Page 4
Shinju in first form: Kaguya's sons, have you come to embrace death.
SFX: Skin peeling
The shinju transcends from first form to second form.
SFX: Charge
A small juubi dama is formed.
SFX: Shooting
Uzushi: Hagoromo, use your onmyoudon!
SFX: Crashing
Hagoromo strikes his staff against the ground.
Page 5
SFX: Gigantic blast
Uzushi: Go!!!
SFX: Run
The two of them charges towards the Juubi.
Scene changes to present
Hagoromo: We fought the shinju for two days but after, we realised that we had been underestimating it.
Scene reverts back
Shinju in second form is on the ground.
Uzushi: I guess this is the end.
Hagoromo: No, Uzushi!
Page 6
Shinju: Rahhhhhhhhh!
SFX: Shockwave! Earthquake!
Hagoromo: Get ready, it is transforming again.
Shinju: Kaguya brat, how long will you understimate me!!!!!
Shinju accumulates chakra and becomes more massive.
Its mouth and eye aligns on one face and he grows another ear. The spikes on its back dissapear, its body becomes more human like. The spikes on its head grows in size and align themselves in the form of a crown.
Hagoromo: This had been its perfect stage since the beginning. I will absorb natural energy while you open the gates!
Uzushi: I will have to use the eighth gate. My body can handle it after all!
Shinju: Gaaaah!
The shinju creates a shockwave which directs hundreds of mountains at them.
Page 7
Scene changes to present
Naruto: What happened next?
Hagoromo: We confronted the shinju for another day and then we bound it.
Scene reverts back
Hagoromo and Uzushi: Senpou-Onmyoujin Keikai
Thousands of giant chakra rods appear and impale juubi while chains emergy from the ground to bind juubi. Also, Red Tori(Gates of great god) falls from the sky and pummels juubi's body to the ground.
SFX: Crashing
Shinju: Hagoromo!!!!
SFX: Raise
The shinju pulls itself against the ground and destroy a few chains and gates.
Hagoromo: This won't hold it much longer.
Page 8
Uzushi: I will seal it inside my body with my sealing technique
SFX: Appear
Kaguya: Stop Uzushi, Hagoromo.
SFX: Raising hands
A giant transparent figure emerges from kaguya's body.
Kaguya: I will use the shiki fuujin.
Hagoromo and Uzushi: Mother-
Kaguya(serious): I will compensate for my own sins! Shiki fuujin!
SFX: Forming
Two arms are directed at the juubi's body to make contact.
Page 9
Shinju: Kaguya, so damned are you.
SFX: Separation
The two arms split the juubi into two parts.
Kaguya: I will seal the shinju's mind and body into each of you. Be ready!
SFX: Sealing
Shinju: Raaaaa-
Seals form on hagoromo and uzushi's bodies.
Hagoromo: Mother!
Kaguya's body dissolve and she changes into a spirit to fuse with the shinigami she casted.
SFX: Fusion
The shinigami which had no face before took a similar appearance to Kaguya.
Page 10
Scene changes to present
Hagoromo: Our mother Kaguya perished and became the death god.
Naruto: Her power was exiged in the afterlife huh!
Hagoromo: Right, she passed a contract with death itself.
Naruto: What happened after the juubi was sealed?
Hagoromo: My brother and I subjugated the Juubi. Its sealed mind inside uzushi lacked its powerful body whereas its body which was sealed in me lacked a mind. By dividing the juubi into two parts, we have ensured that the juubi would be easy to be controlled in one's body. Then, shortly afterwards, Indra and Ashura were born.
Naruto: The 2 sons!
Hagoromo: My brother was much older than me. After several years, he was no longer able to subdue the juubi because his body has been weakened by old age. I was left with no choice but to seal it into one of my sons.
Page 11
Naruto: Why into your own sons?
Hagoromo: Only my sons had the adequate body and part of the fruit's power passed by my mother Kaguya.
Naruto: Who did you choose?
Hagoromo: Unfortunately, I chose Indra because I thought he had more potential than his brother. However I was wrong. When I sealed the juubi's mind, his ripple-like eye changed into the 3 tomoe eye known in your time as the sharingan.
Naruto: So, does that mean that the juubi has initially 9 tomoes.
Hagoromo: You have figured it out Uzumaki Naruto. The juubi's body had 6 tomoes whereas its mind had 3 tomoes.
Naruto: Then, what happened to the elder son?
Page 12
Hagoromo: He bore hatred towards the world and his brother. On hearing that I chose Ashura as my successor, Indra allowed himself to be unconsciously overwhelmed by the juubi's mind. As a result, his ocular power surpassed the rinnegan and was able to summon the god Susanoo.
Naruto: I imagine that the elder son lost to the younger son.
Hagoromo: Indeed! That is what set the cycle of hatred. The battle left the world in awe!
SFX: Shift
The world that was being shown by hagoromo changes to a battlefield.
Page 13
Indra: You do not come close to me in terms of power, Ashura.
Ashura: Huff Huff
Indra: Even if you unlocked your power from Uzushi and sealed the nine pets inside of you, you still cannot oppose my space-time ocular technique neither my imperfect susannoo nor my black flames.
Ashura: Let's end this here, Indra!
Indra: It will never end until one of us die. So, vanish!
SFX: Perfect susanoo forms
Ashura: It can't be helped.
Ashura concentrates and enters into a mental dimension.
Page 14
Ashura to bijuus: I need your help, please, please!
Kurama: We will try our best Ashura!
Kurama to other bijuus: Let's put more effort into this!
The 9 bijuus come forward and form a circle.
Ashura: Let's go!
SFX: Moving
A giant susanoo sword is coming at full speed towards Indra.
Ashura: The power of love, friendship and unison won't fail.
SFX: Blast
A huge bijuu cloak forms around Ashura sending the susanoo's sword crashing on the ground kilometres away.
Page 15
Ashura: Brother, you are allowing yourself to be overwhelmed by the juubi.
Indra(shocked): How and when did you?
Ashura: Drop your hatred and you will achieve a similar power.
Indra(angry): Like I care!
SFX: Magatama forming
Indra: You cannot imagine how much my hatred for you is Ashura.
SFX: Shooting
SFX: Dodging
Ashura quickly manages to get out of the way.
Page 16
Scene changes to present
Hagoromo: The battle left Ashura as the winner. However, Ashura refused to kill his brother which continued on bearing hatred towards him. Indra had sons and daughters which are the founders of the uchiha clan. On the contrary, Ashura's offsprings founded the senju clan. Eventually, the two fought major wars.
Naruto: I feel sorry that it had to come to this.
Hagoromo: I am regretful of having sealed the juubi's mind into Indra and setting up the cycle of hatred. Uzumaki Naruto, I will confy to you a power unknown to the world before. You are able to save your friends and even Madara from the curse of hatred.
Naruto(smiling): Leave it to me. I am the reincarnation of your son after all.
Hagoromo: I guess our little meeting is over. There is nothing more left to be said. Farewell, Uzumaki Naruto!
HAGOROMO DISAPPEARS LEAVING NARUTO WITH AN UNKNOWN POWER AND A NEW WILL!
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