[Predictions] naruto 641 prrediction : exploding

Kishi Uzumaki

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(the ball is exploding)

Minato : shit. naruto and sasuke get away

Sasuke : idiot let's get away

Naruto : (stunned) Hm ?

( in his mind )

Kurama : Naruto get away I'm not ready yet .

Naruto : shit . then I'm gonna surely die .

obito : it's too late . it's time to die fellow traitor .

Naruto : he gonna blow up the whole area .


Onoki : you did a great job naruto . Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique
( he uses technique to stop ball from exploding )
( ball explode inside the cube)
Naruto : Gamakachi go now . tell them to get ready to fight . ( gamakachi disappears leaving only smoke )

Obito : you can't stop it fully tsuchikage .

Onoki : it's same as my technique it will stop .

Obito : look is that what you see .

Onoki : !? there is four elements get away everyone .
( he begin flying up with ball in the cube and gaara comes covering the alliance )

( naruto vanish with sasuke in a flicker as well as minato and appear near sakura and others )

Naruto : that was close . if not short granpa , gaara we surely have gonna die .

Sasuke : that technique ( remembers when he used it against him )

Obito : you must be grateful to me sasuke but you betrayed me .

Sasuke : you were just using me for your plans that's why you saved me .

gaara : at last you saw light and get rid of the hatred .

Sasuke : i'm not pure . ( glares at him )

Gaara : that look in your eyes is still the same but you have found some love .

Sasuke : you see these eyes it belong to my brother .

Naruto : itachi ! did you met him sasuke ? ( remembers what itachi said )

Itachi : no . i can't meet him .

Naruto : then that's what he was talking about .

sasuke : you met him too . he was saying something about your are the one who gonna save me .
Sakura : what you guys are talking ? is it the thing you hid from us naruto ?

Sasuke : ( coldly ) tell them naruto or I'm going to tell them .

Naruto : shut up sasuke ! can't do .

Sasuke : ( looks angrily at naruto ) Bastard . you can't accept him as a hero after what he did
for leaf's sake ?

Sakura : ( thinks ) how can he be a hero after what he has done ?

Naruto : sorry . sakura - chan . i can't tell you . i promised him .

Obito : heh . that's what happens to the heroes they die as trash . just like me .

Sasuke : ( gives a glare full of hatred ) just like you . my brother is nothing like you .

Naruto : itachi were nothing like you . that's true that i can't tell others
the truth but i believe he's a true hero .

Sasuke : (shows bit surprise ) Naruto !?

Sakura : what ?

shikamaru : what are you saying naruto ?

Obito : see even you think like that others won't accept him as a hero . even though he killed his clan , his father and mother for the leaf's sake . i think he is the one stopped edo tensei right sasuke .

( All alliance Is surprised )

Sakura and ino : is that what happened ? sasuke-kun !

Sasuke :( angrily staring at obito and susano'o cloak begins enveloping around sasuke . it's much darker than before )

Obito : It is the truth . even he became trash in this world .

Sasuke : ( while charging towered obito his susano'o stabilize into it's full form ) you are the one responsible for everything .

( obito dodges his susano'o sword slashes easily )

Obito : you are not powerful enough .
( drags sasuke out of susano'o with a chakra arm and punch him on face
sending him along the ground but juugo catches him )

Juugo : are you OK . you are the memento of kimimaro .
( begins transforming )

Juugo :( his voice changes ) i will kill him .

( scene changes to hashi and madara )
( while fighting )

Hashirama : get out of the way madara .

Madara : you have to go through me .
( all of a sudden punch lands on him making a crater )

....... : this is for payback .

Hashirama : Tsunade !!!

Tsunade : grandpa !

Hashirama : ha ha ha . you have grown very well tsunade although i spoiled you as a brat .

Tsunade : yeah . it's nice to see you again grandpa .
( hugs him )

Madara :( standup ) damn hashirama you will never change . ( thinks ) that weak senju woman
( to tsunade ) who thought you will survive maybe i underestimated your uzumaki blood . let's see if you can survive this too .
( madara summons a small meteorite and send it towards hashi and tsunade. they jump and punch it shattering it to pieces . madara's lower part of the body get covered in lava )



Mei : you forgot about us . now raikage .

A : double lariat .
( madara's head fall to the ground )

Madara : damn .

Bee : wee . we did it brother .

( madara regenerating )

Orichimaru : Kuku . so you are madara or just a half of his body .

Madara : who are you ?

Orichimaru : you will know soon . soul binding technique : control of body

Madara : do you think you can control me with a simple technique ?

Orichimaru : kuku . I'm not underestimating you but few seconds will be enough .

Madara : what you gonna do in such short time .

Karin and suigetsu : is that juugo ?
( charging juugo got kicked away by obito )

Orichimaru : now go and blow yourself with him .

( madara jumps where obito is )

Obito : what you doing here ?
( grabs madara by neck )

Madara : obito !
( grab his hands )

Obito : !!!

Huge explosion is seen on last page .

The end

( Madara explodes with obito what will happen )
 
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it's okay, but needs better grammar, spelling, and form.
 

miromiro

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Meh, those crappy pessimistic lines of Naruto "We can't escape; we're gonna die" are uncalled for. He'd never say such a thing. And then Naruto asking Sasuke if he met Itachi? That's a little dumb, obviously he met him since he killed him. All that chit-chat about Itachi is also un-needed, and that "Kimmimaro moment" of Juugo is also bad placed.

Other than that, Hashirama crying (seriously?), Orochimaru controlling Madara, and that bunch of explosions at the end are also all bad parts. Even if Obito's Juubi's Jinchuuriki, I can't see him defeating Madara so easily, after all he knows what he can and what not, plus he has the Trump Card.

All in all, it was a bad prediction. No offense.
 

CeeRock Damigro

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A little too much for one chapter, but good job anyways.
 

ahmher

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great predication
 

Naijakid

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Worst prediction I've seen and that Hashi part got me lol
 

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Wow I like it. I thought they already knew why Sasuke did all that but it seems they didn't.
 

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prediction is good enough
 
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