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(the ball is exploding)
Minato : shit. naruto and sasuke get away
Sasuke : idiot let's get away
Naruto : (stunned) Hm ?
( in his mind )
Kurama : Naruto get away I'm not ready yet .
Naruto : shit . then I'm gonna surely die .
obito : it's too late . it's time to die fellow traitor .
Naruto : he gonna blow up the whole area .
Onoki : you did a great job naruto . Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique
( he uses technique to stop ball from exploding )
( ball explode inside the cube)
Naruto : Gamakachi go now . tell them to get ready to fight . ( gamakachi disappears leaving only smoke )
Obito : you can't stop it fully tsuchikage .
Onoki : it's same as my technique it will stop .
Obito : look is that what you see .
Onoki : !? there is four elements get away everyone .
( he begin flying up with ball in the cube and gaara comes covering the alliance )
( naruto vanish with sasuke in a flicker as well as minato and appear near sakura and others )
Naruto : that was close . if not short granpa , gaara we surely have gonna die .
Sasuke : that technique ( remembers when he used it against him )
Obito : you must be grateful to me sasuke but you betrayed me .
Sasuke : you were just using me for your plans that's why you saved me .
gaara : at last you saw light and get rid of the hatred .
Sasuke : i'm not pure . ( glares at him )
Gaara : that look in your eyes is still the same but you have found some love .
Sasuke : you see these eyes it belong to my brother .
Naruto : itachi ! did you met him sasuke ? ( remembers what itachi said )
Itachi : no . i can't meet him .
Naruto : then that's what he was talking about .
sasuke : you met him too . he was saying something about your are the one who gonna save me .
Sakura : what you guys are talking ? is it the thing you hid from us naruto ?
Sasuke : ( coldly ) tell them naruto or I'm going to tell them .
Naruto : shut up sasuke ! can't do .
Sasuke : ( looks angrily at naruto ) Bastard . you can't accept him as a hero after what he did
for leaf's sake ?
Sakura : ( thinks ) how can he be a hero after what he has done ?
Naruto : sorry . sakura - chan . i can't tell you . i promised him .
Obito : heh . that's what happens to the heroes they die as trash . just like me .
Sasuke : ( gives a glare full of hatred ) just like you . my brother is nothing like you .
Naruto : itachi were nothing like you . that's true that i can't tell others
the truth but i believe he's a true hero .
Sasuke : (shows bit surprise ) Naruto !?
Sakura : what ?
shikamaru : what are you saying naruto ?
Obito : see even you think like that others won't accept him as a hero . even though he killed his clan , his father and mother for the leaf's sake . i think he is the one stopped edo tensei right sasuke .
( All alliance Is surprised )
Sakura and ino : is that what happened ? sasuke-kun !
Sasuke
angrily staring at obito and susano'o cloak begins enveloping around sasuke . it's much darker than before )
Obito : It is the truth . even he became trash in this world .
Sasuke : ( while charging towered obito his susano'o stabilize into it's full form ) you are the one responsible for everything .
( obito dodges his susano'o sword slashes easily )
Obito : you are not powerful enough .
( drags sasuke out of susano'o with a chakra arm and punch him on face
sending him along the ground but juugo catches him )
Juugo : are you OK . you are the memento of kimimaro .
( begins transforming )
Juugo
his voice changes ) i will kill him .
( scene changes to hashi and madara )
( while fighting )
Hashirama : get out of the way madara .
Madara : you have to go through me .
( all of a sudden punch lands on him making a crater )
....... : this is for payback .
Hashirama : Tsunade !!!
Tsunade : grandpa !
Hashirama : ha ha ha . you have grown very well tsunade although i spoiled you as a brat .
Tsunade : yeah . it's nice to see you again grandpa .
( hugs him )
Madara
standup ) damn hashirama you will never change . ( thinks ) that weak senju woman
( to tsunade ) who thought you will survive maybe i underestimated your uzumaki blood . let's see if you can survive this too .
( madara summons a small meteorite and send it towards hashi and tsunade. they jump and punch it shattering it to pieces . madara's lower part of the body get covered in lava )
Mei : you forgot about us . now raikage .
A : double lariat .
( madara's head fall to the ground )
Madara : damn .
Bee : wee . we did it brother .
( madara regenerating )
Orichimaru : Kuku . so you are madara or just a half of his body .
Madara : who are you ?
Orichimaru : you will know soon . soul binding technique : control of body
Madara : do you think you can control me with a simple technique ?
Orichimaru : kuku . I'm not underestimating you but few seconds will be enough .
Madara : what you gonna do in such short time .
Karin and suigetsu : is that juugo ?
( charging juugo got kicked away by obito )
Orichimaru : now go and blow yourself with him .
( madara jumps where obito is )
Obito : what you doing here ?
( grabs madara by neck )
Madara : obito !
( grab his hands )
Obito : !!!
Huge explosion is seen on last page .
The end
( Madara explodes with obito what will happen )
Minato : shit. naruto and sasuke get away
Sasuke : idiot let's get away
Naruto : (stunned) Hm ?
( in his mind )
Kurama : Naruto get away I'm not ready yet .
Naruto : shit . then I'm gonna surely die .
obito : it's too late . it's time to die fellow traitor .
Naruto : he gonna blow up the whole area .
Onoki : you did a great job naruto . Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique
( he uses technique to stop ball from exploding )
( ball explode inside the cube)
Naruto : Gamakachi go now . tell them to get ready to fight . ( gamakachi disappears leaving only smoke )
Obito : you can't stop it fully tsuchikage .
Onoki : it's same as my technique it will stop .
Obito : look is that what you see .
Onoki : !? there is four elements get away everyone .
( he begin flying up with ball in the cube and gaara comes covering the alliance )
( naruto vanish with sasuke in a flicker as well as minato and appear near sakura and others )
Naruto : that was close . if not short granpa , gaara we surely have gonna die .
Sasuke : that technique ( remembers when he used it against him )
Obito : you must be grateful to me sasuke but you betrayed me .
Sasuke : you were just using me for your plans that's why you saved me .
gaara : at last you saw light and get rid of the hatred .
Sasuke : i'm not pure . ( glares at him )
Gaara : that look in your eyes is still the same but you have found some love .
Sasuke : you see these eyes it belong to my brother .
Naruto : itachi ! did you met him sasuke ? ( remembers what itachi said )
Itachi : no . i can't meet him .
Naruto : then that's what he was talking about .
sasuke : you met him too . he was saying something about your are the one who gonna save me .
Sakura : what you guys are talking ? is it the thing you hid from us naruto ?
Sasuke : ( coldly ) tell them naruto or I'm going to tell them .
Naruto : shut up sasuke ! can't do .
Sasuke : ( looks angrily at naruto ) Bastard . you can't accept him as a hero after what he did
for leaf's sake ?
Sakura : ( thinks ) how can he be a hero after what he has done ?
Naruto : sorry . sakura - chan . i can't tell you . i promised him .
Obito : heh . that's what happens to the heroes they die as trash . just like me .
Sasuke : ( gives a glare full of hatred ) just like you . my brother is nothing like you .
Naruto : itachi were nothing like you . that's true that i can't tell others
the truth but i believe he's a true hero .
Sasuke : (shows bit surprise ) Naruto !?
Sakura : what ?
shikamaru : what are you saying naruto ?
Obito : see even you think like that others won't accept him as a hero . even though he killed his clan , his father and mother for the leaf's sake . i think he is the one stopped edo tensei right sasuke .
( All alliance Is surprised )
Sakura and ino : is that what happened ? sasuke-kun !
Sasuke
Obito : It is the truth . even he became trash in this world .
Sasuke : ( while charging towered obito his susano'o stabilize into it's full form ) you are the one responsible for everything .
( obito dodges his susano'o sword slashes easily )
Obito : you are not powerful enough .
( drags sasuke out of susano'o with a chakra arm and punch him on face
sending him along the ground but juugo catches him )
Juugo : are you OK . you are the memento of kimimaro .
( begins transforming )
Juugo
( scene changes to hashi and madara )
( while fighting )
Hashirama : get out of the way madara .
Madara : you have to go through me .
( all of a sudden punch lands on him making a crater )
....... : this is for payback .
Hashirama : Tsunade !!!
Tsunade : grandpa !
Hashirama : ha ha ha . you have grown very well tsunade although i spoiled you as a brat .
Tsunade : yeah . it's nice to see you again grandpa .
( hugs him )
Madara
( to tsunade ) who thought you will survive maybe i underestimated your uzumaki blood . let's see if you can survive this too .
( madara summons a small meteorite and send it towards hashi and tsunade. they jump and punch it shattering it to pieces . madara's lower part of the body get covered in lava )
Mei : you forgot about us . now raikage .
A : double lariat .
( madara's head fall to the ground )
Madara : damn .
Bee : wee . we did it brother .
( madara regenerating )
Orichimaru : Kuku . so you are madara or just a half of his body .
Madara : who are you ?
Orichimaru : you will know soon . soul binding technique : control of body
Madara : do you think you can control me with a simple technique ?
Orichimaru : kuku . I'm not underestimating you but few seconds will be enough .
Madara : what you gonna do in such short time .
Karin and suigetsu : is that juugo ?
( charging juugo got kicked away by obito )
Orichimaru : now go and blow yourself with him .
( madara jumps where obito is )
Obito : what you doing here ?
( grabs madara by neck )
Madara : obito !
( grab his hands )
Obito : !!!
Huge explosion is seen on last page .
The end
( Madara explodes with obito what will happen )
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