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Madara: Release!
The strongest immortal body with unlimited chakra, how will the alliance fair now?
Onoki: This is bad....he's even stronger now
Mei: We don't even compare...
Tsunade: Even back to normal....I still don't think we can do this now.
A: .....alright.
Gaara/Mei/Tsunade/Onoki: !?
A walks in front of them
A: As the commanding general of the 5 nations, it was only necessity that I
held back some power.
Gaara: What are you talking about?
Madara:....
A: I've been fighting at my minimum. I think it's time I got serious.
Onoki: wait...don't tell me...
A: yeah, the first raikages technique. I know it.
Madara: !??
Madara turns his head
Madara: *what's this...I can sense someone else near Kabuto...someone
with chakras like mine?*
Madara: 5 Kages, as much as I would like to play around, something
interests me more.
A: What? are you running away?
Madara: For now, but I'll be back soon to kill you all.
Madara uses perfect susano and runs off.
Onoki: Follow him! Now!
Scene switches to Kabuto and Sasuke
Sasuke: !?
Sasuke: What's this? An earthquake? Something big's coming...
Madara destroys the base and lands near Sasuke.
Sasuke: !? You're....
Madara: Ahh....now I see...so you have the eternal as well.
Sasuke: This must be one of Kabutos summons, did he send it here before
Itachi trapped him? No....Itachi ended the jutsu...so why...
Madara: !....so that's Kabuto....what happened to him.
Sasuke: He's under Izanami.
Madara: Izanami!...So...someone used that jutsus on him to end the edo
tensei I see.
Madara: I see.
Madara stabs Kabuto with Susano.
Sasuke: Why? Didn't you come here for me.
Madara: I did, and he's not in control of me anymore. He's jus-
Kabuto suddenly comes out from the ground and tries to impale Madara head
with the command kunai.
Susano knocks him away.
Sasuke: What the hell? Kabuto? When ..how?
Kabuto: I'll explain later Sasuke-kun. Right now we have bigger issues.
Madara: You tried to re take control of me. Pitiful.
Kabuto: Before you released your jutsu, you said something about the caster didn't you.
Madara: Ah yea, you must have heard that part. You're a fool.
Kabuto has an angry look on his face.
Sasuke: All this time....everything...all because of your actions....you're the reason the Uchiha clan is gone!
Madara: *Gone....what happened when I was dead*
Sasuke: I will kill you where you stand. Uchiha Madara.
Kabuto stands up near Sasuke.
Kabuto: As much as I would like to see that, you'll need my help to get
there besides.....
Kabuto: A master must put down his dogs when he see's fit.
Madara: Two stand before me, hopefully you put up a better fight than the 5 kages.
Chapter end.
The strongest immortal body with unlimited chakra, how will the alliance fair now?
Onoki: This is bad....he's even stronger now
Mei: We don't even compare...
Tsunade: Even back to normal....I still don't think we can do this now.
A: .....alright.
Gaara/Mei/Tsunade/Onoki: !?
A walks in front of them
A: As the commanding general of the 5 nations, it was only necessity that I
held back some power.
Gaara: What are you talking about?
Madara:....
A: I've been fighting at my minimum. I think it's time I got serious.
Onoki: wait...don't tell me...
A: yeah, the first raikages technique. I know it.
Madara: !??
Madara turns his head
Madara: *what's this...I can sense someone else near Kabuto...someone
with chakras like mine?*
Madara: 5 Kages, as much as I would like to play around, something
interests me more.
A: What? are you running away?
Madara: For now, but I'll be back soon to kill you all.
Madara uses perfect susano and runs off.
Onoki: Follow him! Now!
Scene switches to Kabuto and Sasuke
Sasuke: !?
Sasuke: What's this? An earthquake? Something big's coming...
Madara destroys the base and lands near Sasuke.
Sasuke: !? You're....
Madara: Ahh....now I see...so you have the eternal as well.
Sasuke: This must be one of Kabutos summons, did he send it here before
Itachi trapped him? No....Itachi ended the jutsu...so why...
Madara: !....so that's Kabuto....what happened to him.
Sasuke: He's under Izanami.
Madara: Izanami!...So...someone used that jutsus on him to end the edo
tensei I see.
Madara: I see.
Madara stabs Kabuto with Susano.
Sasuke: Why? Didn't you come here for me.
Madara: I did, and he's not in control of me anymore. He's jus-
Kabuto suddenly comes out from the ground and tries to impale Madara head
with the command kunai.
Susano knocks him away.
Sasuke: What the hell? Kabuto? When ..how?
Kabuto: I'll explain later Sasuke-kun. Right now we have bigger issues.
Madara: You tried to re take control of me. Pitiful.
Kabuto: Before you released your jutsu, you said something about the caster didn't you.
Madara: Ah yea, you must have heard that part. You're a fool.
Kabuto has an angry look on his face.
Sasuke: All this time....everything...all because of your actions....you're the reason the Uchiha clan is gone!
Madara: *Gone....what happened when I was dead*
Sasuke: I will kill you where you stand. Uchiha Madara.
Kabuto stands up near Sasuke.
Kabuto: As much as I would like to see that, you'll need my help to get
there besides.....
Kabuto: A master must put down his dogs when he see's fit.
Madara: Two stand before me, hopefully you put up a better fight than the 5 kages.
Chapter end.
but you are always making it to seem like 2-3 chapters instead of one. Else I liked the story, but imo it wont happen like this 
