Naruo: Dark age----chapter 20(spoilers)

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ok then i want suggestion from you guys its battle against good vs evil but according my theory now evil gonna win, may be versuvio, nexus, rei, Bibi, jake, yamato,darkblade and all other important people may die, but i will go with my plot any changes you want can be put into my story line please feel free to suggest i will be waiting for your suggestion, i am putting some of fights between greats warriors for time being.


next chapter power of evil
Domi Vs Scary yamato
yamato:what?he absobed entire jutsu, how is it possible

yamato is in confused state

Domi:
what a pitiful technique cheap tricks will not work on me.

Yamato: ah shutup i will kill *yamato makes hand signs*Jukai Koutan jutsu - Birth of Dense Woodland

a huge trees surrounds domi and grabs him.

Domi: do you think they will hold me*domi increases his chakra and intense of chakra burns every inch of forest.

Scary yamato:*with scared face* no!he is unreal


Versuvio Vs Khaledio


Khaledio: do you think your sharingen will work on me*he laughs lodly*

Versuvio:
well if sharingen will not work then i will use*versuvio closes his eyes and switches to reningen mode*

versuvio makes hand signs and summons dragon beast

versuvio
: its a special summon don't angry him otherwise you will die.

Khaledio
:well well we will see who will gonna die.

dragon beast hits khaledio but khaledio splits into bunch of snakes, dragon spilts fires and burns all snakes, but ash again turns into snakes.

versuvio:what happening is he immortal.

Khaledio:surprise!

khaledio appears back of versuvio and stabs with his sword on versuvio's back

nexus vs roku

Nexus is lying on ground unconscious

roku: ah i had lot of expectations from you but you little child, you already tired, waste of time

roku gathers air in his hand, air tuns into sharp blade, he comes close to nexus and stabs with his blade into nexus heart.


rei Vs ali
ali got stabbed into his heart he is crying with pain

rei: stop your little act i know you don't have heart.

ali: ah then you know my secret then its very good*he gently takes out sword from his heart location*

ali:
do you think with your cheap tricks you can beat me.*ali splits into 100's of ali*

ali:this is my special power i want to test against your eyes, someone said you have powerful eyes and can see everything,find me and hit me i promise you that i will not move a inch and i will not use any power for defense also.

rei: what?you will not use your powers for defense, what the heck happening*she lifts her sword and runs towards ali*

she hits one of ali clone with sword


rei:aaaah* rei cries with pain,her hand is bleeding.*

rei:what?its impossible.

tell me how is it going now i just posted a little when real chapter come each battle will be one chapter i hope you like it and i will be waiting for your suggestions

next chapter will come in two days
 
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ok then i want suggestion from you guys its battle against good vs evil but according my theory now evil gonna win, may be versuvio, nexus, rei, Bibi, jake, yamato,darkblade and all other important people may die, but i will go with my plot any changes you want can be put into my story line please feel free to suggest i will be waiting for your suggestion, i am putting some of fights between greats warriors for time being.



next chapter power of evil
Domi Vs Scary yamato
yamato:what?he absobed entire jutsu, how is it possible

yamato is in confused state

Domi:
what a pitiful technique cheap tricks will not work on me.

Yamato: ah shutup i will kill *yamato makes hand signs*Jukai Koutan jutsu - Birth of Dense Woodland

a huge trees surrounds domi and grabs him.

Domi: do you think they will hold me*domi increases his chakra and intense of chakra burns every inch of forest.

Scary yamato:*with scared face* no!he is unreal


Versuvio Vs Khaledio


Khaledio: do you think your sharingen will work on me*he laughs lodly*

Versuvio:
well if sharingen will not work then i will use*versuvio closes his eyes and switches to reningen mode*

versuvio makes hand signs and summons dragon beast

versuvio
: its a special summon don't angry him otherwise you will die.

Khaledio
:well well we will see who will gonna die.

dragon beast hits khaledio but khaledio splits into bunch of snakes, dragon spilts fires and burns all snakes, but ash again turns into snakes.

versuvio:what happening is he immortal.

Khaledio:surprise!

khaledio appears back of versuvio and stabs with his sword on versuvio's back

nexus vs roku

Nexus is lying on ground unconscious

roku: ah i had lot of expectations from you but you little child, you already tired, waste of time

roku gathers air in his hand, air tuns into sharp blade, he comes close to nexus and stabs with his blade into nexus heart.


rei Vs ali
ali got stabbed into his heart he is crying with pain

rei: stop your little act i know you don't have heart.

ali: ah then you know my secret then its very good*he gently takes out sword from his heart location*

ali:
do you think with your cheap tricks you can beat me.*ali splits into 100's of ali*

ali:this is my special power i want to test against your eyes, someone said you have powerful eyes and can see everything,find me and hit me i promise you that i will not move a inch and i will not use any power for defense also.

rei: what?you will not use your powers for defense, what the heck happening*she lifts her sword and runs towards ali*

she hits one of ali clone with sword


rei:aaaah* rei cries with pain,her hand is bleeding.*

rei:what?its impossible.

tell me how is it going now i just posted a little when real chapter come each battle will be one chapter i hope you like it and i will be waiting for your suggestions

next chapter will come in two days
only one problem....im not in it.:D
 

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wow its realy good and its all good as it is so i think you just stick whit your plane ^^
thanq naruto ya i am going with my plot but any suggestion also i want to put it

god of ice thank you for your valuable suggestion
yes i am taking lot of time to put this action fanfic, next episode is full of surprises
 

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thanq naruto ya i am going with my plot but any suggestion also i want to put it

god of ice thank you for your valuable suggestion
yes i am taking lot of time to put this action fanfic, next episode is full of surprises
=P I love surprises in the storys :D Yey !
 
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