Sorry, made a thread earlier in the wrong section by mistake, apologies!!
Here it is in the right section:
1st chap's called, "My sister"
"So the Masked-man isn't Madara, we have to help everyone who's fighting him" Hinata thought, as Neji, and her made their way along with all of the team members on their division through the forest.
"I have to do my best in this war, i have to because it's to protect everyone i love, I'm going to protect everyone at the village and on the battlefield... i'm going to do my bes-" Hinata thought.
Hinata suddenly stopped.
Flashback.
“I’m going to get on the battlefield and stop Madara, you’ll see,” Said Hanabi.
“Please don’t be so reckless,” Hinata replied.
“Don’t underestimate me, I’ll prove to you that I can do it!! Besides I’m stronger than you! So don’t talk me down!” Hanabi hotly replied.
“But that’s not wha-” Hinata said.
“Leave me alone!” Hanabi cried.
End of flashback
“No, NO! How could I have been so stupid, of course it’s her chakra! She’s here!” Hinata thought
"What's wrong?" Alarmed by the sudden change in her mood.
"uh... N-nothing Neji ni-san, I just remembered that i forgot my kunai knives, I’ll get them" hinata said.
“Are you nothing else is wrong?” Neji asked very suspicious.
“oh, nothing, I’m just getting my kunai knives.” She replied
“Hinata I know when your lyin-” Neji began, but a hug explosion erupted ahead.
“I can’t stand around arguing, they need as much of our help as they can get, hinata’s on her own whatever she’s got under her sleeve,” Neji thought.
“Alright, we’re going now, there isn’t any time to stand around and argue, Hinata, finish whatever you have to and catch up. ” Neji told Hinata.
Hinata wore a surprised expression and said,“s-sure, I’ll be right there.”
Neji gave her one last suspicious look and started moving with the rest of the division, while Hinata moved in the opposite direction.
“How could she have been so stupid!? I have to catch up to her right now!” Hinata thought as she raced through the forest. It might be too late, her chakra’s fading, “ byakugan!”
Hannabi was standing next to two bodies beside either side of her, her teammates, opposite her were 2 red eyes. Sharingan eyes. He ran torwards Hannabi with a sword in one hand, she didn’t have enough time to move!
Hinata panicked, running as fast as she can, she jumped into the clearing right in between Hannabi and Sasuke and felt a sharp cut slice through her.
“it won’t be enough, he’s going to slice through me and reach hannabi! But I don’t have enough energy to hold the sword back, I have no choice,” Thought Hinata.
To Sasuke’s surprise, she began to move towards sasuke, the blade tearing into her while doing so.
“She doesn’t have enough energy to stop the blade from going through her and reaching her sister so she’s moving towards the helm of the sword, that way there won’t be anyway for the sword to reach her.” Sasuke thought.
“Your quite clever and strong… howev-” Sasuke began, though interrupted by Hannabi, as she aimed a kick at Sasuke’s head, but he quickly deflects it.
“You are getting rather annoying,” Sasuke said to Hanabi, He balanced his sword onto his left hand and began charging his chidori on his right hand, “as I was saying before,.. however, your defense is also my defence.”
He aimed the chidori at the helpless Hannabi on the clearing floor and shot the beam right through her. Hinata’s efforts were useless, he held her body on the opposite side, but she stopped resisting when she saw the blood-stained body of her sister. She stood in utter shock, “and that is how my clan was taken from me,” said Sasuke.
Upon hearing Sasuke’s words, she came out of her shock, with tears glistening on her eyes, she spoke firmly and in a dangerous voice, “I’m usually a very quiet person, and I am quite hard to piss off, but when I am, I can be very scary.” Hinata said looking Sasuke straight I the eye.
She removed the sword from her and threw it aside and faced off with Sasuke, while Tobi, sitting on a nearby tree watched as they began to fight.
Here it is in the right section:
1st chap's called, "My sister"
"So the Masked-man isn't Madara, we have to help everyone who's fighting him" Hinata thought, as Neji, and her made their way along with all of the team members on their division through the forest.
"I have to do my best in this war, i have to because it's to protect everyone i love, I'm going to protect everyone at the village and on the battlefield... i'm going to do my bes-" Hinata thought.
Hinata suddenly stopped.
Flashback.
“I’m going to get on the battlefield and stop Madara, you’ll see,” Said Hanabi.
“Please don’t be so reckless,” Hinata replied.
“Don’t underestimate me, I’ll prove to you that I can do it!! Besides I’m stronger than you! So don’t talk me down!” Hanabi hotly replied.
“But that’s not wha-” Hinata said.
“Leave me alone!” Hanabi cried.
End of flashback
“No, NO! How could I have been so stupid, of course it’s her chakra! She’s here!” Hinata thought
"What's wrong?" Alarmed by the sudden change in her mood.
"uh... N-nothing Neji ni-san, I just remembered that i forgot my kunai knives, I’ll get them" hinata said.
“Are you nothing else is wrong?” Neji asked very suspicious.
“oh, nothing, I’m just getting my kunai knives.” She replied
“Hinata I know when your lyin-” Neji began, but a hug explosion erupted ahead.
“I can’t stand around arguing, they need as much of our help as they can get, hinata’s on her own whatever she’s got under her sleeve,” Neji thought.
“Alright, we’re going now, there isn’t any time to stand around and argue, Hinata, finish whatever you have to and catch up. ” Neji told Hinata.
Hinata wore a surprised expression and said,“s-sure, I’ll be right there.”
Neji gave her one last suspicious look and started moving with the rest of the division, while Hinata moved in the opposite direction.
“How could she have been so stupid!? I have to catch up to her right now!” Hinata thought as she raced through the forest. It might be too late, her chakra’s fading, “ byakugan!”
Hannabi was standing next to two bodies beside either side of her, her teammates, opposite her were 2 red eyes. Sharingan eyes. He ran torwards Hannabi with a sword in one hand, she didn’t have enough time to move!
Hinata panicked, running as fast as she can, she jumped into the clearing right in between Hannabi and Sasuke and felt a sharp cut slice through her.
“it won’t be enough, he’s going to slice through me and reach hannabi! But I don’t have enough energy to hold the sword back, I have no choice,” Thought Hinata.
To Sasuke’s surprise, she began to move towards sasuke, the blade tearing into her while doing so.
“She doesn’t have enough energy to stop the blade from going through her and reaching her sister so she’s moving towards the helm of the sword, that way there won’t be anyway for the sword to reach her.” Sasuke thought.
“Your quite clever and strong… howev-” Sasuke began, though interrupted by Hannabi, as she aimed a kick at Sasuke’s head, but he quickly deflects it.
“You are getting rather annoying,” Sasuke said to Hanabi, He balanced his sword onto his left hand and began charging his chidori on his right hand, “as I was saying before,.. however, your defense is also my defence.”
He aimed the chidori at the helpless Hannabi on the clearing floor and shot the beam right through her. Hinata’s efforts were useless, he held her body on the opposite side, but she stopped resisting when she saw the blood-stained body of her sister. She stood in utter shock, “and that is how my clan was taken from me,” said Sasuke.
Upon hearing Sasuke’s words, she came out of her shock, with tears glistening on her eyes, she spoke firmly and in a dangerous voice, “I’m usually a very quiet person, and I am quite hard to piss off, but when I am, I can be very scary.” Hinata said looking Sasuke straight I the eye.
She removed the sword from her and threw it aside and faced off with Sasuke, while Tobi, sitting on a nearby tree watched as they began to fight.
