oh right i remember you! your new name is way better than the last ones.
i cant really give you advice for making it big though. im successful in the indie rock/alt rock scene but its not mainstream level. most people who are aiming to be "big" want to make a lot of money with some major label and be on the radio all day. i do know a big artist on Republic pretty well but i wouldnt advise it in this age from what ive heard from her
the song sounds okay, you definitely have improved since that last song i heard a while ago...Trojan or something, i remember the chorus had something to do with that. you have more style in your music but its not necessarily unique or fresh. it reminded me of Drake, which isnt bad or wrong to have a style influence, every successful music artist does. but you have to work on separating yourself if you want to be a big artist in the genre of your choosing. what can you add to the hip-hop genre that hasnt been done or at least well? thats the mindset you need when creating
take what you like about your influences and push it further than they did, thats essentially what it means to be an artist in a genre. hope my advice helps however it should