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Ahh, so proposers go first in my books:

(Yousobetsushori Ninjutsu: Rongu Karakuri) - Elemental Ninja Arts: The Long Con
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short - Long (if thrown)
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique is a rather creative technique. This technique is an alternative performance of the Shadow Clone Technique in which the user will create a bladed weapon out of one of the basic five elements, but with a twist. It gives of the impression of a normal elemental bladed weapon, but hidden within the chakra is a shadow clone of that decided element. Once the weapon is created within the users hand (at this time depending on the element chosen the user will receive some effects from it, example if they picked fire they would receive minor burns from holding the weapon) - from there the user will throw the elemental bladed weapon, at any time the user can perform one hand seal to release the elemental shadow clone from the elemental blade, if so the clone will grasp hold of the blade and fight. This technique is best used as an assassin technique; getting the sword behind the opponent and stabbing them from behind. The speed at which the user performs this technique has given the illusion that the user is using Space–Time Ninjutsu on more than one occasion. Additionally, by manipulating the position of the blade via wire strings he can more easily position his blade behind an opponent.
Notes:
- Only usable four (4) times per-match, and one clone per-usage.
- Bladed weapon can range from anything from a kunai to a longsword, tanto, etc.
- Follows the rule of only four (4) clones per-match.
- If not thrown, the weapon stays active for four (4) turns. If thrown the weapon and the clone within the blade stay on the field for three (3) turns.
- Any of the basic five (earth, fire, wind, water, or lightning) can be used to create the weapon, and cannot be a mixture of two elements unless the user has the required training (Yin-Yang Release).
- The user will receive minor damage holding the elemental blade, depending on the nature of the chakra (fire - minor burns, lightning - small shocking, wind - minor cuts, earth & water - no effect)
-The clone can only use the element(s) its composed of and non-elemental abilities.
- Can only be taught by Nathan

Basically this works almost similar to Flying Thunder God Technique where the user could appear from kunai and other marked objects. What you did here was add a twist to it, with elemental chakra and clones. But its just as useful as FTG because the clones can basically use all the techniques of their nature combined with regular ninjutsu, this way you can replicate Hiraishin xD

Pros:
- Bladed weapons do not disappear after clone formation, can be used for combat
- Clones are basically instantaneous, which can really catch people by surprise
- Able to guide the weapons with strings to position it perfectly, in my case I'll use webs

Cons:
- Minor damage from holding said weapons, bummer
- Opponents in our RP are very weary of thrown weapons and will almost all the time destroy them
- Too bad the clones have to be elemental, if they weren't this would be an immaculate FTG re-imagining.
 

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Ahh, so proposers go first in my books:

(Yousobetsushori Ninjutsu: Rongu Karakuri) - Elemental Ninja Arts: The Long Con
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short - Long (if thrown)
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique is a rather creative technique. This technique is an alternative performance of the Shadow Clone Technique in which the user will create a bladed weapon out of one of the basic five elements, but with a twist. It gives of the impression of a normal elemental bladed weapon, but hidden within the chakra is a shadow clone of that decided element. Once the weapon is created within the users hand (at this time depending on the element chosen the user will receive some effects from it, example if they picked fire they would receive minor burns from holding the weapon) - from there the user will throw the elemental bladed weapon, at any time the user can perform one hand seal to release the elemental shadow clone from the elemental blade, if so the clone will grasp hold of the blade and fight. This technique is best used as an assassin technique; getting the sword behind the opponent and stabbing them from behind. The speed at which the user performs this technique has given the illusion that the user is using Space–Time Ninjutsu on more than one occasion. Additionally, by manipulating the position of the blade via wire strings he can more easily position his blade behind an opponent.
Notes:
- Only usable four (4) times per-match, and one clone per-usage.
- Bladed weapon can range from anything from a kunai to a longsword, tanto, etc.
- Follows the rule of only four (4) clones per-match.
- If not thrown, the weapon stays active for four (4) turns. If thrown the weapon and the clone within the blade stay on the field for three (3) turns.
- Any of the basic five (earth, fire, wind, water, or lightning) can be used to create the weapon, and cannot be a mixture of two elements unless the user has the required training (Yin-Yang Release).
- The user will receive minor damage holding the elemental blade, depending on the nature of the chakra (fire - minor burns, lightning - small shocking, wind - minor cuts, earth & water - no effect)
-The clone can only use the element(s) its composed of and non-elemental abilities.
- Can only be taught by Nathan

Basically this works almost similar to Flying Thunder God Technique where the user could appear from kunai and other marked objects. What you did here was add a twist to it, with elemental chakra and clones. But its just as useful as FTG because the clones can basically use all the techniques of their nature combined with regular ninjutsu, this way you can replicate Hiraishin xD

Pros:
- Bladed weapons do not disappear after clone formation, can be used for combat
- Clones are basically instantaneous, which can really catch people by surprise
- Able to guide the weapons with strings to position it perfectly, in my case I'll use webs

Cons:
- Minor damage from holding said weapons, bummer
- Opponents in our RP are very weary of thrown weapons and will almost all the time destroy them
- Too bad the clones have to be elemental, if they weren't this would be an immaculate FTG re-imagining.
Well, I do plan to make a fuuin one when I get fuuin, so there is that. But the minor damage is only from shit like fire, lightning or wind. The other two elements don't do any sort of damage, which is good.

It doesn't have to be normal boring earth either, it can be made out of mud, etc... so variations of the element, which is a neat thing.
 

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Oh ok, that's neat indeed.

(Tokei shikake no dageki) Clockwork Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: The user will advance on the enemy, closing the distance in one powerful lunge using the left leg to anchor himself. While doing this the user will channel Futon chakra in his right leg and left hand respectively. He'll then bring the right leg, which would be hanging behind, towards the opponent's ankle(s) in a short, horizontal instep kick but he won't complete the motion, instead he'll cease movement in the right foot as soon as it reaches about 5-6 inches from the opponent's targeted foot where he will release a small gust of wind with just the right amount of force to send them off their feet while his left hand in the form of a Shuto strike will come crashing down on the opponent's neck or head area but he won't complete this motion either, instead he'll stop his own hand a few inches from the target to have a more powerful gust of wind fire from his hand onto the targeted area from the user's upper left towards the lower right in a diagonal motion. The small gust supplied by the sweeping kick combined with the more powerful gust from the hand will cause an imbalance in the force applied on the opponent's body and send the opponent spinning in a clockwise motion with great force, capable of up to 4 revolutions spinning on the spot.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x

Any questions/concerns?
 

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Oh ok, that's neat indeed.

(Tokei shikake no dageki) Clockwork Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: The user will advance on the enemy, closing the distance in one powerful lunge using the left leg to anchor himself. While doing this the user will channel Futon chakra in his right leg and left hand respectively. He'll then bring the right leg, which would be hanging behind, towards the opponent's ankle(s) in a short, horizontal instep kick but he won't complete the motion, instead he'll cease movement in the right foot as soon as it reaches about 5-6 inches from the opponent's targeted foot where he will release a small gust of wind with just the right amount of force to send them off their feet while his left hand in the form of a Shuto strike will come crashing down on the opponent's neck or head area but he won't complete this motion either, instead he'll stop his own hand a few inches from the target to have a more powerful gust of wind fire from his hand onto the targeted area from the user's upper left towards the lower right in a diagonal motion. The small gust supplied by the sweeping kick combined with the more powerful gust from the hand will cause an imbalance in the force applied on the opponent's body and send the opponent spinning in a clockwise motion with great force, capable of up to 4 revolutions spinning on the spot.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x

Any questions/concerns?
Nah, nice technique. Will go perfect with both my CFS'.

(sorry don't feel like pointing out stuff, about to go to bed. xD - Can do it in the morning if you want.)
 
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