[Photoshop] N v S redo

[Shogi]

i took people suggestions into consideration when they said i should use less effects, make it a lot simpler and tone the signature down a bit, so here is the original then the 2 after i changed.

rate, comment, helpful suggestions please ^^

(i still think the original is better)

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[ammar666]

look man:
the third is not good at all
the 2nd is good but(sasuke`s side should be darker)
the 1st I cant see a thing

 

[Shogi]

look man:
the third is not good at all
the 2nd is good but(sasuke`s side should be darker)
the 1st I cant see a thing

how can the second be good but third be bad the only difference is a purple spot.

 

[ammar666]

yeah exactly
naruto`s side should be orange
sasuke`s side should be dark purple almost black

 

[Heister]

yeah exactly
naruto`s side should be orange
sasuke`s side should be dark purple almost black

Is this your piece? No, so STFU. He did it how he wanted.

As for the CnC.


It's alright, needs more depth and render blending.

 

[Shogi]

Is this your piece? No, so STFU. He did it how he wanted.

As for the CnC.


It's alright, needs more depth and render blending.

thankyou sir, finnaly someone with some helpful feedback, personally i'm not that fond of the 2nd and 3rd ones myself but people asked me to redo it so i did.

 

[Heister]

I actually do like the 2nd one, just work on trying to blend the render better into the background.

Maybe the 2nd one with a few more touches would be very good

 

[Ali G MPGH]

Is this your piece? No, so STFU. He did it how he wanted.

As for the CnC.


It's alright, needs more depth and render blending.

he gave some helpful cnc.
Why does he need to stfu?

 

[ammar666]

Is this your piece? No, so STFU. He did it how he wanted.

As for the CnC.


It's alright, needs more depth and render blending.

look "broo" he asked for comments
that means people giving their opinions not yours
so no i think you should STFU
I didn`t say he must do it that way I gave him the way that I think it would be better like
so again and just for fun STFU

 

[Alternative]

Wow, the first one sure is vibrant. There really is a lot going on, but maybe too much for my liking. From the first one, there seems to be no depth for it, like the focal is blending in way too much to the rest of the tag. I would have also made the tag a bit longer, as well as making the render much larger. It really seems like one of those renders which seem like it should be stretched all over the page.

As for the other two, they seem to show some more depth, but seem a little too simple for me. The orange and purple don't really work well together either, so maybe next time, try something like White with a little orange on Naruto's side, and Black with a little purple on Sasuke's side.

 

[Shogi]

yea, i tried to make it simpler but i'm not good with simple xD thank you for your input ^^