Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Training Begins

[-Andy-]

wow nice job but i didnt like the question in the end i would of asked something like what is the secret behind that legendary toad?or what is the outcome of this battle?or something like that but still nice

 

[Akiza]

awesome job again...keep goin

 

[Naruto1217]

I have to say that was a very nicely written story; you should definitely keep it up. :naruto:

The only criticism that I have for you is to maybe lengthen your chapters a little bit; other than that keep up the good work. :headband:

 

[squiremarcus]

awesome again, thats all i gots to say

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

I have to say that was a very nicely written story; you should definitely keep it up. :naruto:

The only criticism that I have for you is to maybe lengthen your chapters a little bit; other than that keep up the good work. :headband:

Thanks man!

 

[Sasuke Uzumaki]

THe one I liked best! Really, so well written. The day I learn become an animator, could you be the writer?
:headband::headband::headband:

 

[anbu kakashi]

another awesome chapter cant wait for the next one

 

[Eddy-kun..]

yeah it was better good

 

[TheLoneWolf]

Loved it... specially this part
"Kaeruzan: I suggest you to come at me as if you were gonna kill me. You can even use that sword of yours. No ninjutsu or genjutsu, just use your katana." It reminded me of Naruto's and Kakashi's first training session

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Have i ever disappointed you?

NEVER and that why im an avid reader!

 

[platinum69]

I have to say that was a very nicely written story; you should definitely keep it up. :naruto:

The only criticism that I have for you is to maybe lengthen your chapters a little bit; other than that keep up the good work. :headband:

Im a believer... your work is second to none next to the real Naruto and I would love to support you if you made a spin off... Well done bro...

PLEASE MAKE IT A BIT LONGER!!!

 

[Scary Yamato]

Anothe rawesome chapter... keep it up man. you have real tallent

 

[Gatsndshanks]

wow nice job but i didnt like the question in the end i would of asked something like what is the secret behind that legendary toad?or what is the outcome of this battle?or something like that but still nice

find out on the next episode of...
DRAGONBALL Z!

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

find out on the next episode of...
DRAGONBALL Z!

I got the idea from there!

 

[Naruto..]

awsome chapter bro^^

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

awsome chapter bro^^

Thanks.

 

[Anbu_Gaara]

great job

 

[narutouchihakiller]

nice job.