Hiruzen Sarutobi
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Here's the 14th chapter people. Still full of work... I finally found a day to write peacefully...
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Chapter 1:
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Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:
Chapter 5:
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:
Chapter 9:
Chapter 10:
Chapter 11:
Chapter 12:
Chapter 13:
Naruto: Goodbye... Sensei...
Naruto closed the wooden coffin and burried it inside the hole that was open. He picked up the scroll and walked back to the wooden caban, without looking back.
He walked back to the wooden caban, he didn't feel the need to run as he usually did. No, not this time. This time he had an invisible weight over his shoulders, the feeling of having the entire world on his back. The scroll that Kaeruzan had left him was there on his shoulder, the scroll that would help him train even after his master's death. Surprisingly enough, Naruto didn't feel his usual raging curiosity, that would have made him open the scroll and read every line of it. He reached the caban, and somehow he felt it was a different place than the one where he had spent his last weeks.
Naruto:*looking at the empty caban* It's just me now, huh...?
Naruto didn't feel like eating at all that day so he just threw himself onto his bed and tried to sleep, even if countless thought raced through his mind and made it hard for him. The day after, when he woke up, he prepared himself to train as usual, but then he remembered. The scroll.
Naruto ran to the caban's main room and stood at the door looking inside it. There, on top of the table, was the scroll that Kaeruzan had left for him to train. He walked slowly to it and picked it up, unravelling it, his heart pumping fast because of what he was about to discover. He began reading:
Naruto:*reading to himself*
In this scroll I will write down the basics of the Seishitsu-Buki, that is only to be taught and learned by us, "Green-Eyed" Myobokuzan's descendants of Myobokuzan Mountain. It is nothing but a prevention, to ensure the secret technique lives on, but remains inside our lineage...
After reading the rest of the introduction, Naruto walked outside with the giant scroll and left it open on the ground while he unsheathed his sword from his back and held it front of his eyes. The training he would go through was completly different from the other times... He looked at the rock where Kaeruzan used to sit patiently, waiting for him, and
Naruto:*to himself* Watch me... Kaeruzan!
Konoha looked different from what it looked ike before... Something had disrupted the village's peace. People were running around, screaming, holding to their children as caos had begun to spread all over the place. Giant creatures crawled over the buildings and fought the Konoha shinobi that desperatly tried to save the people and lead the women and children to the cave inside the Hokage Mountain, were they would be safe.
The city had been invaded, and Konoha's troops had fallen to the surprise attack that was destroying the village by few but insanely strong ninjas. In every corner of the village there was one of them catching the people that ran away in fear and killing them with no mercy. On the roof of one of the buildings stood one of these invaders, with long red hair and strange-looking eyes. He was holding a girl's skull with his hand, while the girl stayed motionless, fearing for her life. The man wore a black cloak, with a red cloud pattern on it.
Invader: Don't make any sudden moves... or this girl dies.
The invader made a strange look with his weird eyes, looking at the girl's head, as if he was reading her mind.
Invader: Myoboku... zan.
On the other side of the village, the Hokage had confronted one of the invaders, and was talking with him in way that seemed like a battle was about to take place between them. This one had the same cloak, but spiked hair. He had the exact same eyes and his face covered in piercings. He closed his eyes for a second as if he was concentrating or trying to hear something.
Pain: Looks like Naruto isn't here... Myobokuzan...
Tsunade: What!?
What will Pain do now that he knows where Naruto is? Will Naruto's scroll-training succeed?
To be continued.
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Chapter 14
Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Scroll and Konoha
Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Scroll and Konoha
Naruto: Goodbye... Sensei...
Naruto closed the wooden coffin and burried it inside the hole that was open. He picked up the scroll and walked back to the wooden caban, without looking back.
He walked back to the wooden caban, he didn't feel the need to run as he usually did. No, not this time. This time he had an invisible weight over his shoulders, the feeling of having the entire world on his back. The scroll that Kaeruzan had left him was there on his shoulder, the scroll that would help him train even after his master's death. Surprisingly enough, Naruto didn't feel his usual raging curiosity, that would have made him open the scroll and read every line of it. He reached the caban, and somehow he felt it was a different place than the one where he had spent his last weeks.
Naruto:*looking at the empty caban* It's just me now, huh...?
Naruto didn't feel like eating at all that day so he just threw himself onto his bed and tried to sleep, even if countless thought raced through his mind and made it hard for him. The day after, when he woke up, he prepared himself to train as usual, but then he remembered. The scroll.
Naruto ran to the caban's main room and stood at the door looking inside it. There, on top of the table, was the scroll that Kaeruzan had left for him to train. He walked slowly to it and picked it up, unravelling it, his heart pumping fast because of what he was about to discover. He began reading:
Naruto:*reading to himself*
The Art of The Seishitsu-Buki, by Marazan, Myobokuzan's second descendant
In this scroll I will write down the basics of the Seishitsu-Buki, that is only to be taught and learned by us, "Green-Eyed" Myobokuzan's descendants of Myobokuzan Mountain. It is nothing but a prevention, to ensure the secret technique lives on, but remains inside our lineage...
After reading the rest of the introduction, Naruto walked outside with the giant scroll and left it open on the ground while he unsheathed his sword from his back and held it front of his eyes. The training he would go through was completly different from the other times... He looked at the rock where Kaeruzan used to sit patiently, waiting for him, and
Naruto:*to himself* Watch me... Kaeruzan!
Konoha looked different from what it looked ike before... Something had disrupted the village's peace. People were running around, screaming, holding to their children as caos had begun to spread all over the place. Giant creatures crawled over the buildings and fought the Konoha shinobi that desperatly tried to save the people and lead the women and children to the cave inside the Hokage Mountain, were they would be safe.
The city had been invaded, and Konoha's troops had fallen to the surprise attack that was destroying the village by few but insanely strong ninjas. In every corner of the village there was one of them catching the people that ran away in fear and killing them with no mercy. On the roof of one of the buildings stood one of these invaders, with long red hair and strange-looking eyes. He was holding a girl's skull with his hand, while the girl stayed motionless, fearing for her life. The man wore a black cloak, with a red cloud pattern on it.
Invader: Don't make any sudden moves... or this girl dies.
The invader made a strange look with his weird eyes, looking at the girl's head, as if he was reading her mind.
Invader: Myoboku... zan.
On the other side of the village, the Hokage had confronted one of the invaders, and was talking with him in way that seemed like a battle was about to take place between them. This one had the same cloak, but spiked hair. He had the exact same eyes and his face covered in piercings. He closed his eyes for a second as if he was concentrating or trying to hear something.
Pain: Looks like Naruto isn't here... Myobokuzan...
Tsunade: What!?
What will Pain do now that he knows where Naruto is? Will Naruto's scroll-training succeed?
To be continued.
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