Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Mysterious Walking Stick

[Skye Kaguya]

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[SAKumono26]

here it is guys! Chapter 7! Please enjoy and don't forget to leave comments! Your opinion is important!

If you haven't read the previous chapters, go read them!


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chapter 7



myobokuzan chronicles: The mysterious walking stick​

kaeruzan:*smiling* what's wrong kid? Are you giving up already?

Naruto:*to himself* w-what... Is he?

Naruto didn't even have time to think, in a blink of an eye the old toad was already a meter from him and about to hit him with that walking stick. Naruto barely dodged and the walking stick hit the rock behind him instead. The rock was broken to pieces.

Naruto: *to himself* i don't know what that thing is, but if it hits me... I'll die!

Naruto kept running away, trying desperatly to avoid that walking stick. Everytime he managed to hide himself behind a rock, it would blow up under kaeruzan's staff and show his position. It was useless to try and use the sword, it didn't work the first time and he could barely hold it. It wasn't about the training anymore, naruto was fighting for his life.

When he finally managed to conceal himself safely behind one of the rocks, he tried to think of a plan to give him an advantage.

Naruto: *to himself* think, think!

Kaeruzan: *laughing* hehe, come out kid! Come out and play!

Suddenly, naruto appeared flying towards him, from behind, his katana held high, shining and reflecting the sun. The sword was shinning as it came down on the old toad. That was when kaeruzan saw it as had always imagined it. The sword of his ancestors.

Naruto: This is the spot!

Kaeruzan: *to himself* myobokuzan!

The old toad quickly rolled out of the sword's way as it hit the ground where he stood. Quickly, he got up and swung his wooden staff at naruto that had just landed. He couldn't dodge and kaeruzan's staff hit him right in the ribs. Naruto was sent flying against a rock that broke to pieces with the impact.

Kaeruzan: *to himself, worried* did i kill him?!

Kaeruzan ran to the dead body, not believing what he had done. Naruto was lying on the ground, motionless. Half of his body had been destroyed by the old toad's staff. He was dead.

?poof?

kaeruzan: W-what the?!

Kaeruzan looked up, naruto was diving towards him, his sword pointed at him.

Naruto: *smiling* gotcha!

Kaeruzan: *to himself* shit! A shadow-clone!?

Kaeruzan grabbed the blade with his hand and threw naruto behind him with a strenght like naruto had only seen in tsunade or sakura. He was thrown against a rock, and lied beneath the rubble. He was losing his consciense slowly. When he opened his eyes he saw the tip of kaeruzan's walking stick and the old toad smiling at him. It all went black


naruto woke up in a small bed where his feet stood out. He was in a simple room with wooden walls. He tried to get up but his head was hurt when he tried.

Naruto: *in pain* argh...

Kaeruzan: You're awake? Stay in bed kid, i'm making dinner for us.

Naruto: *getting up* i'm fine... Argh.

Kaeruzan: *laughing* hehe sorry about that kid... It's been awhile since someone fooled me with a shadow-clone. *hands him soup* here eat this, you'll feel better.

Naruto: Thanks... Hey, old man?

Kaeruzan: What?

Naruto: So, will you train me? I know i failed to beat you.

Kaeruzan: We start tomorrow, when the sun rises.

Naruto: *trying to hug kaeruzan* thanks a lot!

Kaeruzan: *pushing naruto* get off me kid! Geez...

Naruto: Sorry... *looks at walking stick* ah! That thing! How on earth did you do that!? *picks it up and hits the floor with it* it's just normal wood!

Kaeruzan: Hehe, you're too curious kid. Well i guess i'll have to tell you sooner or later...

Naruto: *confused* tell me what!?

Kaeruzan: The technique that will make you master that weapon of yours, that belonged to the great "green-eyed myobokuzan".

Naruto: *amazed* what is it!?

Kaeruzan: seishitsu-buki (litterally in japanese: Nature-weapon).

Naruto: Seishitsu-buki...?



what is this seishitsu-buki technique? Will naruto learn it?

to be continued...


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[Madara Uchiha]

ive finally decided to read your fanfic (read all seven today) and I think its amazing.
Though I think you should be introducing a new character to the story, like a side character.

 

[platinum69]

Bro its getting better and better... your laway have me asking for MORE!!!!!

 

[Naruto1217]

not bad bro, you have a great imagination and that's what fuels your stories; Nicely done. :headband:

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

ive finally decided to read your fanfic (read all seven today) and I think its amazing.
Though I think you should be introducing a new character to the story, like a side character.

Thanks.

I'll take your thoughts into account, thanks for posting them!

 

[Scary Yamato]

nice fight scene man.... agian, another awesome chapter cant wait to read the next.

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

nice fight scene man.... agian, another awesome chapter cant wait to read the next.

Glad you liked the fight!

 

[YellowFlash622]

Just......friggin....awesome......

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

Just......friggin....awesome......

thank.....you

 

[Akiza]

nice job again dude keep goin!

 

[alt216]

I say its a technique that makes the natural energy transform into the weapon.
BTW i didn't understand:
naruto started to lose conciounes(i hate to write this word!!) and he closed he's eyes slowly, opened them, saw the tip of the stick and it went black? i meen it was:
blacking out, eyes closed, one last opening, and black out
or
blacking out, waking up, hit of the stick, and black out again?

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

I say its a technique that makes the natural energy transform into the weapon.
BTW i didn't understand:
naruto started to lose conciounes(i hate to write this word!!) and he closed he's eyes slowly, opened them, saw the tip of the stick and it went black? i meen it was:
blacking out, eyes closed, one last opening, and black out
or
blacking out, waking up, hit of the stick, and black out again?

first option

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

I say its a technique that makes the natural energy transform into the weapon.
BTW i didn't understand:
naruto started to lose conciounes(i hate to write this word!!) and he closed he's eyes slowly, opened them, saw the tip of the stick and it went black? i meen it was:
blacking out, eyes closed, one last opening, and black out
or
blacking out, waking up, hit of the stick, and black out again?

I won't reveal any spoilers!

 

[squiremarcus]

"the BEST"

 

[Naruto..]

its jsut get better and bettter every chapter you real are good at this bro

 

[Emperor]

you leave me speechless....awesome fanfic !!!

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

you leave me speechless....awesome fanfic !!!

Thanks man!

 

[Anbu_Gaara]

I just keep asking for more great job

 

[narutouchihakiller]

AWESOME-NESS!! And you made it long!

no it's good size keep creating