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Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Dream

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do you just make this up on the spot... or you have a planed out guide line??


Im so belown away... Your a turely awesome... I would ryde for you!!!
 

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Hiruzen Sarutobi said:
Here's the 11th chapter people.


If you haven't read the previous chapters, go read them!


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Chapter 3:
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Chapter 4:
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Chapter 5:
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Chapter 10:
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Chapter 11​


Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Dream​


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Naruto looked closely. There was something different from before. In front of the cage was the the sillhouette of a toad. With a katana on his back...

He didn't dare to approach, he just remained behind looking into the large room, staring at the sillhouette of the mysterious toad that stood there, motionless in front of the cage.

Suddenly, in the middle of the cage, two eyes opened slowly, and an evil-looking smile appeared from the darkness that covered the room. In front of the cage, the toad stood his ground, not showing a single bit of fear or concern...

Slowly, the water at the toad's feet started to bubble, the orange bubbles rised from the ground and began forming a figure that was very familiar to Naruto. The chakra began to form the head of the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox, that was smiling at the toad while he remained calm and normal, as if nothing had happened. Naruto approached to try to have a better look, he could hear them talk.

Kyuubi:*smiling* Well, well, well... Long time no see... "Green-Eyed" Myobokuzan...

Myobokuzan:*smiling back* He he indeed... I can't remember the last time we met you and I... Who would've think that of all people, this sword would fall on the hands of your Jinchuuriki...

Kyuubi: It seems like sealing your soul in that little sword of yours wasn't as pointless as it seemed after all.

Myobokuzan:*ironically* You're right... But look at you... You're a mess... I don't think I remember seeing you in a cage...

Kyuubi: Watch your words little toad... The Doubutsu Alliance is over. You were all killed by us if I recall...

Myobokuzan: Yes well, the Bijuu aren't looking great either.

Kyuubi: Let me give you a piece of advice. Stay out of this body, it's mine. Give up.

Myobokuzan:*smiling* Have you forgotten me? I never give up... And I have no intention to take it over. Just stay away from the boy. He doen't need you anymore...

Kyuubi:*getting ready to attack* He he... Good old Myobokuzan...

Myobokuzan:*pulling out his katana* Nine-Tails...

The Kyuubi's head made from the chakra bubbles rised to the air, opened its mouth and attacked the Toad coming down fastly. It was quickly stopped by a single slash of Myobokuzan's katana, that jumped towards the fox and delivered a single cut that blew up the chakra bubbles. The eyes in the cage closed and it was nothing but darkness inside. Myobokuzan landed and put the katana back on his back.

Myobokuzan:*without looking at Naruto* Come here boy.

Naruto was surprised by the toad and tried to hide behind the wall. That was him, the legendary Myobokuzan... Naruto couldn't believe his eyes. He tried to look again peeking from where he was hiding. The toad was standing right in front of him.

Myobokuzan: So you're the Nine-Tails Jinchuuriki and the one who my sword was given to, huh?

Naruto:*shocked* Y-Yes...

Myobokuzan slowly took out his golden katana. Naruto was terrified, what was the toad about to do to him? He closed his eyes, hoping for the best. He opened his eyes, something had fallen on his lap. It was the sword.

Myobokuzan: It's yours now boy... Use it well, and I will give my best to help you do so.

Naruto stared into those emerald-green eyes, that looked at him without moving. He got up to his feet and put the sword on his back.

Naruto: I won't disappoint you!


What kind of future awaits Naruto? What challenges and obstacles are yet to cross his path?

To be continued...


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O_O best chapter ever, publish it^^
that was amazing, Kyuubi and Myobokuzan old enemies, ha?
I never saw that coming!!
seriously keep typing, this is getting to be the best fan fic ever written on nb^^
 
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Hiruzen Sarutobi said:
Here's the 11th chapter people.


If you haven't read the previous chapters, go read them!


Chapter 1:
You must be registered for see links


Chapter 2:
You must be registered for see links


Chapter 3:
You must be registered for see links


Chapter 4:
You must be registered for see links


Chapter 5:
You must be registered for see links


Chapter 6:
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Chapter 7:
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Chapter 8:
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Chapter 9:
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Chapter 10:
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Chapter 11​


Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Dream​


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Naruto looked closely. There was something different from before. In front of the cage was the the sillhouette of a toad. With a katana on his back...

He didn't dare to approach, he just remained behind looking into the large room, staring at the sillhouette of the mysterious toad that stood there, motionless in front of the cage.

Suddenly, in the middle of the cage, two eyes opened slowly, and an evil-looking smile appeared from the darkness that covered the room. In front of the cage, the toad stood his ground, not showing a single bit of fear or concern...

Slowly, the water at the toad's feet started to bubble, the orange bubbles rised from the ground and began forming a figure that was very familiar to Naruto. The chakra began to form the head of the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox, that was smiling at the toad while he remained calm and normal, as if nothing had happened. Naruto approached to try to have a better look, he could hear them talk.

Kyuubi:*smiling* Well, well, well... Long time no see... "Green-Eyed" Myobokuzan...

Myobokuzan:*smiling back* He he indeed... I can't remember the last time we met you and I... Who would've think that of all people, this sword would fall on the hands of your Jinchuuriki...

Kyuubi: It seems like sealing your soul in that little sword of yours wasn't as pointless as it seemed after all.

Myobokuzan:*ironically* You're right... But look at you... You're a mess... I don't think I remember seeing you in a cage...

Kyuubi: Watch your words little toad... The Doubutsu Alliance is over. You were all killed by us if I recall...

Myobokuzan: Yes well, the Bijuu aren't looking great either.

Kyuubi: Let me give you a piece of advice. Stay out of this body, it's mine. Give up.

Myobokuzan:*smiling* Have you forgotten me? I never give up... And I have no intention to take it over. Just stay away from the boy. He doen't need you anymore...

Kyuubi:*getting ready to attack* He he... Good old Myobokuzan...

Myobokuzan:*pulling out his katana* Nine-Tails...

The Kyuubi's head made from the chakra bubbles rised to the air, opened its mouth and attacked the Toad coming down fastly. It was quickly stopped by a single slash of Myobokuzan's katana, that jumped towards the fox and delivered a single cut that blew up the chakra bubbles. The eyes in the cage closed and it was nothing but darkness inside. Myobokuzan landed and put the katana back on his back.

Myobokuzan:*without looking at Naruto* Come here boy.

Naruto was surprised by the toad and tried to hide behind the wall. That was him, the legendary Myobokuzan... Naruto couldn't believe his eyes. He tried to look again peeking from where he was hiding. The toad was standing right in front of him.

Myobokuzan: So you're the Nine-Tails Jinchuuriki and the one who my sword was given to, huh?

Naruto:*shocked* Y-Yes...

Myobokuzan slowly took out his golden katana. Naruto was terrified, what was the toad about to do to him? He closed his eyes, hoping for the best. He opened his eyes, something had fallen on his lap. It was the sword.

Myobokuzan: It's yours now boy... Use it well, and I will give my best to help you do so.

Naruto stared into those emerald-green eyes, that looked at him without moving. He got up to his feet and put the sword on his back.

Naruto: I won't disappoint you!


What kind of future awaits Naruto? What challenges and obstacles are yet to cross his path?

To be continued...


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thanks a lot your help is appreciated...
 
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Scary Yamato said:
I know its late but awesome chapter.... maybe you should make a gaiden chapter talking about how the toad and kyubii met and thier interactions before hand. :D
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Very good idea! Wow man... I like your thinking.

But I'm gonna take a hiatus after this one is over... but when I begin writing, I will seriously take your idea into account...
 
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