Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Beginning

[Rei]

ok, now you have me excited. you write so well, better than most other ppl here.
i love it^^

 

[Lara]

believe me or not.....waiting to read the 3rd part of ur story is like waiting to read the new manga.....
u got talent my friend

 

[Scary Yamato]

seriously... this is good work. Its perfectly paced, leaves you on your seat and wanting more.

 

[NyCzFn]

awesome!

 

[TC9tails]

thats clever sword of myobokezon!

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

seriously... this is good work. Its perfectly paced, leaves you on your seat and wanting more.

Hooray!

 

[Gatsndshanks]

really nice

Naruto rejecting the Toad Forehead protector is a typical naruto action xD

 

[anbu kakashi]

its getting more exciting cant wait for the next chapter

 

[Ace]

This is great stuff! If u could publish this, i'd buy it.

 

[SoulReaper]

awesome writer man
gerat story
u r awesome

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

awesome writer man
gerat story
u r awesome

thx!

 

[Anbu_Gaara]

nice job

 

[Kindomhurtz]

awesome