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Myobokuzan Chronicles: Jinchuuriki

Azaghast

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AWESOME ...as usual....................man you write good stories maybe you could ask shonen jump to publish it..............300 POSTS
 
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it keeps getting betetr but i rly hated the part when naruto cried. naruto doesnt cry he's naruto ! he's suppoust to try again ! keep it in your mind..
awesome writing btw if sakura get's in the story it would be awesome =]
 
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alt216 said:
it keeps getting betetr but i rly hated the part when naruto cried. naruto doesnt cry he's naruto ! he's suppoust to try again ! keep it in your mind..
awesome writing btw if sakura get's in the story it would be awesome =]
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I think I did well in letting him cry even if I hesitated. He cried alone, we never saw him cry, but I can assure you that when your life is like his, you cry a lot. lol

About Sakura... I don't think so but I'll think about it :D

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yet another awesome chapter...keep it up hiruzen!
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Thanks!
 
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So i just finished reading 430, then this.
I am in heaven right now.

The old man visits the fox....i love where this is going!:D:D

Fox you listen here, I run the show now! lol..:eek:

Keep em coming.You stay classy san diego.(...lol)
 
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