My way

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

There is pain in my heart
And sorrow on my blade
Though my heart may break
And my blade shatter
It doesnt really matter
For my legacy is eternal
And shall never fade

Rate and comment I'm open to criticism

 

[Sage of Infinity Paths]

3/5

 

[Scooby Doo]

Well its better than your previous one

 

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

Well its better than your previous one

Thank you i just posted another and am about to post my latest one

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

Very Nice. ^^ 5/5

 

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

Very Nice. ^^ 5/5

Thank you I have 2 new ones posted