My very first bio...

[Akisha]

Basic Information
Name: Hao N/A
Nickname: The Fire Lord
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Clan: N/A

Looks:

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Personality: He is a very calm person. Usually he doesn't get angry. He is smiling and laughing during battles. But he is always ready to learn seriosly. When Hao wants somehing he gets it. Even if that means to hurt someone. No matter he is a friend or a comrade.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty:/
Elements:Fire
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
History: If you haven't seen Hao before you would say that he is an ordinary ninja. He may noy be as different as the other people, but there is something that makes him different. Hao doesn't remember his past. One day he just woke up hanging on a tree with no memories of who he is and what he's supposed to do.Months ago he didn't know his name, but he found this out by his little brother. He was wondering around the worl trying to remember his past, but he did not succided. Now after all these years he has seen the dark harths of the people he fought with. He wanted to make a differance by helping people.He couldn't help his little brother to escapre from death but he is surely going to protect his comrades. Even if that means to die for their sake. After all these years Hao toght that living with no memories is a curse, now however he thinks it is a gift from God, because he can start over.Yet there was one year when his comrades wanted to attack the village in order to kill the Hokage. With tears on his eyes Hao had to kill his friends in order to protect the village. He was alone again with no friends, no memories in this cursed world. Now he is ready to learn, find comrades, remember his past and then fight against the dark....

Other He smiles a lot

Picture:

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Battles

Won:none
Lost:none

~Approved~ have fun RPing.

 

[Akisha]

I'm looking for aproval

 

[Ryuji]

I don't think your background history and your ''Clan'' will aprove your bio
I sujest that you make a new history and add this jutsus

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

you get them by default

 

[Anbu578]

Ok here are a few things wrong:

First add more history about him
Second add the basic e-rank jutsus which are

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

And third on NB you must make a custom clan at the rank of Kage so remove that clan and read this to undersand the rescritions on some clans:

You must be registered for see links

 

[Akisha]

I fixed the background info and I put the jutsus.
But didnt understand about the clan. What is wrong with it ? And does the clan have to be from the manga...? So if I change it to Uchiha would that be a problem ?

 

[-Tauburn-]

u have to have 1500 post to make an Uchiha just put N/A for clan for now

 

[Anbu578]

I fixed the background info and I put the jutsus.
But didnt understand about the clan. What is wrong with it ? And does the clan have to be from the manga...? So if I change it to Uchiha would that be a problem ?

Well let me put it this way: You must be a high rank here on NB in order to make a custom clan (I know it sounds weird) but the clans must be from Naruto or like I said make that clan when you reach that rank and you must have 1500 posts to mak a uchiha bio

 

[Akisha]

u have to have 1500 post to make an Uchiha just put N/A for clan for now

10x. Can u check my background info and tell me if it's ok ?

 

[Akisha]

Well let me put it this way: You must be a high rank here on NB in order to make a custom clan (I know it sounds weird) but the clans must be from Naruto or like I said make that clan when you reach that rank and you must have 1500 posts to mak a uchiha bio

10x. And the background. Is it ok now ???

 

[Ryuji]

remove the part of the forbidden jutsu

 

[Akisha]

ok

 

[Caliburn]

any years ago Hao tried to destroy the world. However he was stoped by a brave ninja who cursed him to live forever in this dark world.He lost all his powers and now his soul is continuing to live with one differance - it's not as dark as before.

Remove that completely as it's just utter ridiculous.

 

[Akisha]

Remove that completely as it's just utter ridiculous.

Ok. I made it all differant and even longer. Can u check it now...

 

[jazzon]

:O what is this i m new as u may see form my posts :S wat is the use of makin a charac like this and wat is the arena thingy here plzz tell? D

 

[Mockingbird]

here people make bios of a character they would like to rp as here on naruto base. you can make a bio of a made up character, or of a character from the anime of manga. you can make one too one you become a genin. Although there are some restrictions, lik u cant be from the uchiha clan unless u have 1,500 posts. after u finish ur bio, just wait a couple days for it to be approved or declined.

in the link below u can spam as much as u want go nuts its a good way to increase ur amount of posts.

You must be registered for see links

i didnt cover everything so go to the question section and post a thread asking more about this.

 

[-Tauburn-]

finaly got approved nice

jazzon if u make a character then u a role play fight in the arena, but u dont have to if u dont want to

 

[Akisha]

finaly got approved nice

jazzon if u make a character then u a role play fight in the arena, but u dont have to if u dont want to

lol It has been approved for like 40 days

 

[Kravenzblood]

Very interesting.

 

[pop123]

very got bio i am impresse