my poem

[Death Bringer]

I have been using my spare time to work on a FanFic that is a little deeper and well thought out. its called Tales Of A Samurai. im still making it but here is my opening. i would just like an opinion, that is all.


We live our life according to whats wrong and whats right. tho were always searching for our purpose. its what guides us through life that makes us who we are. our motives our desires, our dream those three things are what some or most people have in there mind every day. but what shall we do if those things are taken? it seems the path in life that we once walked upon has taken a turn for the worse and yet we do not stray from our path and we do not fear. instead we take the challenge and fight to the end, for what awaits us at the end of our path.

 

[Jazzy..]

That was really touching ^_^ I loved it!! Beautiful poem!!! ^_^

 

[Karmolo]

good poem

 

[Train]

This was nice...
But I dunno if I'd classify this as a poem, it was too blunt, and not many are.
Good for an opening though.

 

[Death Bringer]

This was nice...
But I dunno if I'd classify this as a poem, it was too blunt, and not many are.
Good for an opening though.

thank you everyone

also i wouldve said inspirational speech since technically thats what this would be labled as but i felt it was less of a speech and more of a poem or a mixture. but thanks

 

[Jazzy..]

I thought it was perfect I loved it ^_^

 

[Gama]

I like it..way to go...xd

 

[Mai]

I have been using my spare time to work on a FanFic that is a little deeper and well thought out. its called Tales Of A Samurai. im still making it but here is my opening. i would just like an opinion, that is all.


We live our life according to whats wrong and whats right. tho were always searching for our purpose. its what guides us through life that makes us who we are. our motives our desires, our dream those three things are what some or most people have in there mind every day. but what shall we do if those things are taken? it seems the path in life that we once walked upon has taken a turn for the worse and yet we do not stray from our path and we do not fear. instead we take the challenge and fight to the end, for what awaits us at the end of our path.

this left me speechless i love it...

 

[Death Bringer]

thank you all