My original manga character

[Dantee]

You like Darksiders bro?

I'm really interested in playing it but I cannot say I do.

Haha well the thing is, this particular character has stages to his design.


In the story I've been writing, there are five parts to it and in each part he has different outfits. He has more armor in other designs.

But with this design, this is how he looks like in the final part of the story. He's supposed to be "enlightened' so I wanted him to have a more light-armor Asian look.

Those tattoos symoblize his newly awakened power. In this final part of the story, the character has matured, so I wanted to make him look divine and wise.

When you look at him, I want people to instantly realize that this is a heroic persona.


He's not supposed to wear heavy bulky armor because he's nimble.

That makes more sense if thats his final power up form. I can't really see a character showing himself like that in the beginning of the show. You comes off as an already powerful and heroic figure. His design could have fit better into a comic book.

 

[flyboyissac]

im still learning how to draw a face in manga studio 5

this looks great but i don't like that big piece on its shoulder

 

[Lightbringer]

I'm really interested in playing it but I cannot say I do.


That makes more sense if thats his final power up form. I can't really see a character showing himself like that in the beginning of the show. You comes off as an already powerful and heroic figure. His design could have fit better into a comic book.

Haha well I'm actually trying to make a videogame series based on my story, so I got a long road to go.

But I have a draft of what he looks like in the first part of the series. I'm still gonna change it though and add more armor; it's hard finding the right balance.

But this is him when he's young, and with each game/stage, he would get longer hair and different outfits.

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These are two characters from the second part of the game, and as you can see they have more armor on. The protagonist will have more armor in the 2nd chapter, reminiscent to these two characters.

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[Kyaun97]

I like the concept and video

 

[Dantee]

Haha well I'm actually trying to make a videogame series based on my story, so I got a long road to go.

But I have a draft of what he looks like in the first part of the series. I'm still gonna change it though and add more armor; it's hard finding the right balance.

But this is him when he's young, and with each game/stage, he would get longer hair and different outfits.

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These are two characters from the second part of the game, and as you can see they have more armor on. The protagonist will have more armor in the 2nd chapter, reminiscent to these two characters.

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Seems cool but why does his 1st form seem so boring. Can I ask where this game will take place.

 

[Lightbringer]

Seems cool but why does his 1st form seem so boring. Can I ask where this game will take place.

Well the first form is still in the process of designing, and that particular drawing was a reference for my 3D model. So I made it flat.



But I've posted an animation in a previous comment, detailing how the fictional universe was created. But essentially it a world that is currently in war between Light and Dark forces(angel/demon)

but that's only the tip of the iceberg. There are many creatures and factions that are completely original. One such faction are called Heretics.

Heretics are followers of the Old God Inferno. When the Old Gods had their war, it shattered the realm and wiped out all life on the world except for a few races. One of those races were the Heretics.

Their goal is to resurrect the Old God in order to shape the world in his image. The Heretics live underground and in in the sides of volcanoes.


There's just too much to tell with just one post. All these groups tie into each other.

 

[Dantee]

Well the first form is still in the process of designing, and that particular drawing was a reference for my 3D model. So I made it flat.



But I've posted an animation in a previous comment, detailing how the fictional universe was created. But essentially it a world that is currently in war between Light and Dark forces(angel/demon)

but that's only the tip of the iceberg. There are many creatures and factions that are completely original. One such faction are called Heretics.

Heretics are followers of the Old God Inferno. When the Old Gods had their war, it shattered the realm and wiped out all life on the world except for a few races. One of those races were the Heretics.

Their goal is to resurrect the Old God in order to shape the world in his image. The Heretics live underground and in in the sides of volcanoes.


There's just too much to tell with just one post. All these groups tie into each other.

Your story is sounding very cool so far. I'm glad you have given it alot of thought as well. Angel/demon war and somehow you were able to tie factions and guilds into it. Interesting.

 

[Lightbringer]

Your story is sounding very cool so far. I'm glad you have given it alot of thought as well. Angel/demon war and somehow you were able to tie factions and guilds into it. Interesting.

Haha thanks, I'm glad you think so. I've started writing it since I was around 12, so that's like 10 years ago.

Looking back, it changed a lot. Originally the story was about 5 element gods(Fire, Wind, Water, Earth, Lightning) and the protagonist was the God of Wind.

It eventually evolved into what it is today, and the protagonist is no longer the God of Wind, but his design is still similar. Each element had a signature color, and Wind was Yellow, which is why this character wears yellow haha.

 

[Drakony Vosrata]

I watched the video. ..... At the end I was wanting more...... Good for you.......I want to play this.......... Also you should write a manga......... And a movie.......

 

[Joshutsu]

It's a long one. He's the protagonist of a story I've been writing for many years. I'm hoping to one day make it into a vidoegame series.


I have an animation I've made that is sort of the prologue to the series, explaining how the world was created.

[video=youtube;-16en4kYIlM]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-16en4kYIlM[/video]

That's pretty cool dude, I will watch it now.

 

[Yellow Flash of Konoha]

It is good! Raiden (Mortal kombat) + Sasuke future = your character. Soon my story's characters' images will come too!

 

[NiiNjuH]

just change the color scheme to blue and white or red and black

those color combos are way to over used, imo