My original manga character

[Lightbringer]

What do you guys this of my OC? It's an old design that I've been refining for years and it took me all day to make, so I really wanted to get an opinion on his look.

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[RaitonOniKairRasengan]

Without the teal sht all over him it looks good.

 

[069]

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[Joshutsu]

Looks like hes from a Naruto movie rather than the series lol pretty cool though.

No character bio?

 

[Antichrist]

Very bad .

 

[FleeOnSight]

Looks like a Uchiha with lord raiden's powers. Sweet.

 

[Dantee]

He's to flashy looking. To many bright colors and tats.

 

[HENI]

cool. good job.

 

[TheAncientJinchuuriki]

Kinda looks like Sasuke

 

[Yuse]

just change the color scheme to blue and white or red and black

 

[Angelic.]

my eyes! tone down the yellow.

 

[Lightbringer]

Looks like hes from a Naruto movie rather than the series lol pretty cool though.

No character bio?

It's a long one. He's the protagonist of a story I've been writing for many years. I'm hoping to one day make it into a vidoegame series.


I have an animation I've made that is sort of the prologue to the series, explaining how the world was created.

[video=youtube;-16en4kYIlM]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-16en4kYIlM[/video]

 

[Arian]

He's to flashy looking. To many bright colors and tats.

u mean unlike people like: Goku, Naruto, Sakura, Ichigo etc? XD

 

[Lightbringer]

just change the color scheme to blue and white or red and black

In the world I've created, yellow is the primary color of the "angelic" denizens. Yellow is his signature attire. Too many characters wear black/red/blue. I thought it'd be better to branch out and give him a more "divine" look

He's to flashy looking. To many bright colors and tats.

In the lore, the glowing tattoo's he has aren't permanent. It's like his awakened form.

 

[Jessika Uzumaki]

Nice! <3

 

[Tarinth]

The picture is all right. It's good, but not really the best.
However, I enjoyed your animation pretty well.

 

[Gein]

Eh change the eyes and remove the markings and youll be on to something


and change the Sasuke hair

 

[Dantee]

In the world I've created, yellow is the primary color of the "angelic" denizens. Yellow is his signature attire. Too many characters wear black/red/blue. I thought it'd be better to branch out and give him a more "divine" look



In the lore, the glowing tattoo's he has aren't permanent. It's like his awakened form.

Alright I guess that's okay. Maybe theres one thing you can change. His armour for instance to something more badass.

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[Gein]

Alright I guess that's okay. Maybe theres one thing you can change. His armour for instance to something more badass.

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You like Darksiders bro?

 

[Lightbringer]

Alright I guess that's okay. Maybe theres one thing you can change. His armour for instance to something more badass.

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Haha well the thing is, this particular character has stages to his design.


In the story I've been writing, there are five parts to it and in each part he has different outfits. He has more armor in other designs.

But with this design, this is how he looks like in the final part of the story. He's supposed to be "enlightened' so I wanted him to have a more light-armor Asian look.

Those tattoos symoblize his newly awakened power. In this final part of the story, the character has matured, so I wanted to make him look divine and wise.

When you look at him, I want people to instantly realize that this is a heroic persona.


He's not supposed to wear heavy bulky armor because he's nimble.