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Dedicated to a very special someone. <3<3<3



I didn’t realize until I met you that my life was an empty cup.

I’m seeing the glass half empty, half full.

Baby you opened up my eyes and filled it up.

You’re the road to paradise, yet you drive me crazy, and you smile like yeah, well the road gets rough.

You’re my life, you take all the bad and good that I give you, and you laugh like yeah, well life gets tough.

Even if I were only a millimeter away from you, sweetheart that’s not close enough.

I don’t even know how to describe you when I’m writing.

I just know you surprised the thunderstorm inside me when you calmed it, you can even shock lightning.

You can deliver me light on my brightest day.

I’m the luckiest man on earth, I even get mail on a Sunday.

Oh how I wish I could walk on water, but I can’t, so
on this earth I stand.

But you’re a hurricane, you put water on land.

With those eyes you’ve searched my soul, and they say curiosity killed the cat.

Well you made curiosity think twice when you actually scratched back, how ironic is that?

I thought my life was good, but you chewed it up and spit it out, damn you’re such an expert.

Wasn’t spiced enough for you, but what should I expect from a Sun that eats deserts?

You inhaled like a dragon, and blew your flame into me until my heartbeats could no longer punch back.

Damn baby, you sure know how to cause one hell of a heart attack.

Honey, let’s not even start with taking my breath away.

I’m a bee sting in the tongue away from having nothing left to say.

When the cat’s away, the critters will come out to play.

So I keep my mind focused, because thoughts of you sneak up on me every day.

You drive other chicks insane, live and let live, because of you thanksgiving turkeys doesn’t have a head to give.

No wonder you never got a Christmas gift, you’re the baddest girl on the planet.

You laid me under the stars and we both pointed at Saturn, you then asked the question…………two fingers can’t fit the same ring, or can it?
 

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You say, "I’m the luckiest man on earth, I even get mail on a Sunday." Is that possible? It was probably bills anyway. Did she kill the cat? I didn't understand this: "Well you made curiosity think twice when you actually scratched back, how ironic is that?," what do you mean? Is she evil? Never-mind, I read this: "I thought my life was good, but you chewed it up and spit it out, damn you’re such an expert." Dam, she something else. Talk about reckless. <SMH>

What does this mean? "You drive other chicks insane, live and let live, because of you thanksgiving turkeys doesn’t have a head to give."

"No wonder you never got a Christmas gift, you’re the baddest girl on the planet." That mess up. Even I would give her or want a gift for Christmas. SMH

"You laid me under the stars and we both pointed at Saturn, you then asked the question…………two fingers can’t fit the same ring, or can it?" How you see Saturn and you just nasty. <SMDH>

Edited: It was nice but had a few questions and what not. Above. ^^
 
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Shakespeare approved

Thanks. :p

Aww! That was beautiful!
I'm sure the person this poem was for will love it ~ ❤
Thanks, Jazzy! :3

i loved it thank you:p
Lmao. xD

You say, "I’m the luckiest man on earth, I even get mail on a Sunday." Is that possible? It was probably bills anyway. Did she kill the cat? I didn't understand this: "Well you made curiosity think twice when you actually scratched back, how ironic is that?," what do you mean? Is she evil? Never-mind, I read this: "I thought my life was good, but you chewed it up and spit it out, damn you’re such an expert." Dam, she something else. Talk about reckless. <SMH>

What does this mean? "You drive other chicks insane, live and let live, because of you thanksgiving turkeys doesn’t have a head to give."

"No wonder you never got a Christmas gift, you’re the baddest girl on the planet." That mess up. Even I would give her or want a gift for Christmas. SMH

"You laid me under the stars and we both pointed at Saturn, you then asked the question…………two fingers can’t fit the same ring, or can it?" How you see Saturn and you just nasty. <SMDH>

Edited: It was nice but had a few questions and what not. Above. ^^
Obvious troll is obvious, but at least you're amusing. :p rep+
 

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Obvious troll is obvious, but at least you're amusing. :p rep+
Not really trolling, probably a little,... but I did mean what I say. Could you answer what I couldn't understand? Really, just this one:

"You drive other chicks insane, live and let live, because of you thanksgiving turkeys doesn’t have a head to give."
 

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Not really trolling, probably a little,... but I did mean what I say. Could you answer what I couldn't understand? Really, just this one:

"You drive other chicks insane, live and let live, because of you thanksgiving turkeys doesn’t have a head to give."
Okay. I guess I believe you. o_O


Yes, even though chickens and turkeys aren't the same, I referred to turkeys as "chicks". Mainly because of the similarities. Meaning, she makes other girls crazy with jealousy, losing their head.
 

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Okay. I guess I believe you. o_O


Yes, even though chickens and turkeys aren't the same, I referred to turkeys as "chicks". Mainly because of the similarities. Meaning, she makes other girls crazy with jealousy, losing their head.
Wait what? o_O I'm confused as well! I agree though that statement made no sense to me either. Why would a chick want to be referred to as poultry or meat anyways. :| Sorry Yama I'm just confused as well.
 

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Super nice.. xd
Thanks! xd

Wait what? o_O I'm confused as well! I agree though that statement made no sense to me either. Why would a chick want to be referred to as poultry or meat anyways. :| Sorry Yama I'm just confused as well.
It's poetry. :) And I assume when you say "Why would a chick want to be reffered to as a poultry or meat anyways". You are talking about a "woman". So you just did the same thing. :)
 

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Thanks! xd



It's poetry. :) And I assume when you say "Why would a chick want to be reffered to as a poultry or meat anyways". You are talking about a "woman". So you just did the same thing. :)
Chick is slang for a woman of course. However a turkey....that's a different bird completely. Though I don't mind being called a chick as I don't think of a chicken or a bird. When it comes to literal terms though then it gets frustrating. U_U
 

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Chick is slang for a woman of course. However a turkey....that's a different bird completely. Though I don't mind being called a chick as I don't think of a chicken or a bird. When it comes to literal terms though then it gets frustrating. U_U
Well there you go, chick can mean "chicken" and also be slang for "woman".

As for that entire line:

Wikipedia:

A metaphor is a literary figure of speech that describes a subject by asserting that it is, on some point of comparison, the same as another otherwise unrelated object. Metaphor is a type of analogy and is closely related to other rhetorical figures of speech that achieve their effects via association, comparison or resemblance including allegory, hyperbole, and simile.


It's poetry. :)
 

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Well there you go, chick can mean "chicken" and also be slang for "woman".

As for that entire line:

Wikipedia:

A metaphor is a literary figure of speech that describes a subject by asserting that it is, on some point of comparison, the same as another otherwise unrelated object. Metaphor is a type of analogy and is closely related to other rhetorical figures of speech that achieve their effects via association, comparison or resemblance including allegory, hyperbole, and simile.


It's poetry. :)
I know what a metaphor is. :sy:

"You drive other chicks insane, live and let live, because of you thanksgiving turkeys doesn’t have a head to give."

Ok I get the driving other chicks insane as I guess it's out of jealousy that she has you and nobody else.

Live and let live? Just wondering how that fits into that specific line. Yes I know it's poetry and such but poetry breaks things into parts as well, grouped together. As the words in front of it is just stating that the person drives girls insane and the last person is talking about dead turkeys. >.>

The last part are the "turkeys" dead before Thanksgiving I guess? I know turkeys aren't served with heads on thanksgiving anyways. So it's confusing to me.

I know not all poetry makes sense to everyone, but I guess I'm having trouble grasping this poem. U_U
 

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I know what a metaphor is. :sy:

"You drive other chicks insane, live and let live, because of you thanksgiving turkeys doesn’t have a head to give."

Ok I get the driving other chicks insane as I guess it's out of jealousy that she has you and nobody else.

Live and let live? Just wondering how that fits into that specific line. Yes I know it's poetry and such but poetry breaks things into parts as well, grouped together.

The last part are the "turkeys" dead before Thanksgiving I guess? I know turkeys aren't served with heads on thanksgiving anyways. So it's confusing to me.

I know not all poetry makes sense to everyone, but I guess I'm having trouble grasping this poem. U_U
Well good. ^__^


Live and let live, by this I mean "Slow it down", she's killing the other "birds" out there.


On the parts in bold, I'm saying she's the reason for that. :p
 
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