My Kind Of Girl

[ikikouchiha9668]

I got this inspiration by my new favorite song Wanted by Hunter Hayes. I just...was listening to it and I was like "LIGHTBULB!" So I write my glowness on here **This is written with the help of my brother so it's in guy P.O.V! I'm not a lesbian!**

I'm in love with someone
Can you guess?
I doubt it

No she isn't popular
Yes she wears classes and sweaters
But she's my kind of pretty

I love her and her self-confidence
She's not afraid to stand up for what she believes in
But her eyes flash lonely

Her hair isn't eactly perfect
Her face isn't exactly pimple free
But I still love her

When she laughs it makes me feel good
When she smiles I blush
When we exchange glances I think I should talk to her

My Kind of Girl is the strong one
With her teeth gritted for any other teasing you through at her
To me she's beautiful and that's important to me- just like her.

 

[xMadara]

If you made it rhyme somehow it wouldve been a lot better.

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

If you made it rhyme somehow it wouldve been a lot better.

I'm a bad rhymer :T_T:

 

[Ldude]

Gritting your teeth is actually bad for them...You're wearing away the enamel on your teeth by doing that.

 

[Nerow]

Gritting your teeth is actually bad for them...You're wearing away the enamel on your teeth by doing that.

The more you know lol
But OP that was very good

 

[Tsuki]

I'm a bad rhymer :T_T:

Lol I might know how to rhyme but have no talent in being poetic

Nice poem (good I read the comment you made before starting the poem xD) Many things of what the narrator said were things I would actually feel/thing if I met the girl I love

 

[Dickey Mouse]

I liked it, made me feel brawny and insignificant ... little can be said to a brawny man, you made it stilling fulfilling

 

[KAP]

Crap ..

 

[Howard]

Gritting your teeth is actually bad for them...You're wearing away the enamel on your teeth by doing that.

I grind my teeth in my sleep. Just throwing that out there

I got this inspiration by my new favorite song Wanted by Hunter Hayes. I just...was listening to it and I was like "LIGHTBULB!" So I write my glowness on here **This is written with the help of my brother so it's in guy P.O.V! I'm not a lesbian!**

I'm in love with someone
Can you guess?
I doubt it

No she isn't popular
Yes she wears classes and sweaters
But she's my kind of pretty

I love her and her self-confidence
She's not afraid to stand up for what she believes in
But her eyes flash lonely

Her hair isn't eactly perfect
Her face isn't exactly pimple free
But I still love her

When she laughs it makes me feel good
When she smiles I blush
When we exchange glances I think I should talk to her

My Kind of Girl is the strong one
With her teeth gritted for any other teasing you through at her
To me she's beautiful and that's important to me- just like her.

Honestly it wasn't the worst but it wasn't the best. Made a point most people would agree with the whole 'character over beauty' thing. Try to use a rhyme scale or something it helps with the flow of the words if it actually rhymes somewhere. All in all it wasn't bad.

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Great poem .