My First Signature

[Sanzen]

its missing text(i couldnt figure out how to get it small enough if anyone know how let me know here or vm me
please critique its my first signature

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[Lord Snow]

Good job, just kinda big imo. Keep it up.

 

[Skruffy]

Well it needs some work, and I am just pointing out what I see to help you improve

1. WAY TOO BIG.. forum signatures should be around 450x175 In my opinion.
2. Remove that watermark at the top, or whatever it is.
3. The background is too plain, it needs some zaz, some "WOW"
4. The render looks scrunched. When re-sizing a render, always hit CTRL+T, the when you are about to drag the corners, hold SHIFT.
5. You need a clear focal point.
6. You need depth. At the moment, it just looks like text + watermark + render on top of background.

I know its a bit harsh, but that is just what i see wrong. Could look stunning if you resize, add some c4ds, add some effects, the works.

 

[Sanzen]

Good job, just kinda big imo. Keep it up.

thanks
yea its alittle big but if its one of 2 sigs I have and the other one is a banner itll be fine (hopefully)

 

[Nerei]

Good job, just kinda big imo. Keep it up.

^this

and

Well it needs some work, and I am just pointing out what I see to help you improve

1. WAY TOO BIG.. forum signatures should be around 450x175 In my opinion.
2. Remove that watermark at the top, or whatever it is.
3. The background is too plain, it needs some zaz, some "WOW"
4. The render looks scrunched. When re-sizing a render, always hit CTRL+T, the when you are about to drag the corners, hold SHIFT.
5. You need a clear focal point.
6. You need depth. At the moment, it just looks like text + watermark + render on top of background.

I know its a bit harsh, but that is just what i see wrong. Could look stunning if you resize, add some c4ds, add some effects, the works.

^that

For a first it's pretty good. Great job

 

[Sanzen]

Well it needs some work, and I am just pointing out what I see to help you improve

1. WAY TOO BIG.. forum signatures should be around 450x175 In my opinion.
2. Remove that watermark at the top, or whatever it is.
3. The background is too plain, it needs some zaz, some "WOW"
4. The render looks scrunched. When re-sizing a render, always hit CTRL+T, the when you are about to drag the corners, hold SHIFT.
5. You need a clear focal point.
6. You need depth. At the moment, it just looks like text + watermark + render on top of background.

I know its a bit harsh, but that is just what i see wrong. Could look stunning if you resize, add some c4ds, add some effects, the works.

Not sure what C4Ds are and thank you for the input

^this

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^that

For a first it's pretty good. Great job

thanks
I am also brand new as in about 3 hours new to photoshop so I dont know what C4Ds are and the the render is squished, i just went to resize and put a dimension that seem to suit the background size
also I only have one other signature that I want to use atm so this and the other one will be the allowed dimensions after combining them

 

[Ron Stoppable]

Nice.

 

[KAGE RYUU]

yep def awsome for a fist go and u can only get better from here what do u use ps or gimp

 

[Sanzen]

Nice.

thanks

yep def awsome for a fist go and u can only get better from here what do u use ps or gimp

ps I got to pissed off at gimp

 

[KAGE RYUU]

thanks

ps I got to pissed off at gimp

ya i liked ps but it slowed down my computer so i went back to gimp i dont mind it anyway good luck on ur future sigs and ask around there are alots good gfx ppl here

 

[Cassiopeia]

the background is too big for the little (in comparison) figure. ​

 

[Gary777]

nice pic dude !!!!

 

[System001]

Gimp sucks =\ use ps.
Yeah its a stock and a render unfortunately