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sagemode123

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Basic Information
Name:sagemode123
Nickname:
Gender:male
Age:16
Clan:

Looks:tall and big with arms


Personality: very funny and laid back

Village Info.Suna
Village of Birth:suna
Village of Alliancesuna

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:genin
Specialty:
Elements: i wanto lighting
Your ninjutsu:Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an
illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own
element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy.
Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move
with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu
causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect
lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will
quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person.
This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using
ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2
and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



Background Info. alone time ago my mom and dad were fighting this huge moster to protect me and the villgers but the fathe got caught in a bad genjustu and my mom got caught with a ninjustu every since that i was crying feeling miserable no friends i grow were people hateing because i some kind of power inside of me as i be came a genin i fought alot mission on a three man squad the was the best friends to i have this jouinin killed both of them i got so mad and pissed off i killed him with one blow we had the funeal and i made a promise to protect every one that v even its costs me my life

History:i was a alone with no parents my parents died during the war i was all ways crying and felt sorry for my self because nobody help me i was weak the kids in the school tease me because i cant perfom justus i worked and i worked to get back better by time i came a genin i was ready to protect my self and i was going on a b rank missions my first mission was too to kill some bandits but i saw got scared because i never seen a teenmate die befor right there in for of me i was crying hard and you know i had special powers of my charka increase because i was scread to let another teenmate die right in front of me

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Mephistopheles

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Your ninja rank is Genin and you should put the first element you want to learn in it.
Your village info and history contradict each other as your village of birth says Konoha and your history says your village of birth is Suna.
These are the ninjutsu you get by default btw:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an
illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own
element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy.
Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move
with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu
causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect
lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will
quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person.
This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using
ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2
and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
_____
And lol at the picture :p
 
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Sharingdork

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ummm... elements is the first one you want to learn, the name is the name of your character, not necissarily your username (at least get rid of the numbers. who has numbers in their names!?). if he was born in the village of sand, then the "Village of Birth" should be Suna, not Konoha. ninja rank is genin.
 

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You copied that background info from another bio o_O and I'm pretty sure you copied your history from another bio too -_-

Remove them and write something yourself and write something that doesn't contradict itself so much.

Also add the first element you want to learn.
 
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