[Approved] My First Bio!!!!

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Shirokami

Basic Information
Name: Niiroshikaku Shirokami[レッドビジョン 白髪]
Nickname:Red Vision
Gender:Male
Age:18
Height:152.4cm
Birthday:Jan 25
Horoscope:Aquarius
Eyes:Reddish/Auburn
Blood Type:O
Clan: /

Looks

Pale skin ,long white hair, with red intense eyes. Has a strong build, tall, and wears his favorite leather jacket on occasions. He wears long leather jeans, with a slit that can be found on the left pant legg on his knee. Has a scar on his back from when he was kidnapped by Orochimaru as a child, the scar stretches from his neck, down to his lower back, from being a test subject.

Personality

An introvert, Wise, Apprehensive , Kindred Spirit, that knows nothing of his origin, since he lost his memory at the age of seven. Shirokami believes that every human being has a dark side in them, so we should not judge. He has little friends, as chaotic as his life is, he doesn't have much time for them. Shirokami has been tricked many times by the people he's considered "friends", which is why he became apprehensive. His ex-wife(Married young) was a spy from the rock village, and tried to capture him to be tested on by the Rock Village. Shirokami is constantly on his tippy toes, having to sneak from place to place.

Village Info:

Village of Birth:Konoha
Village of Alliance:None

Rank//Chakra Info

Rank:JOUNIN

Specialty:

None


Elements:

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Fire Release-Need Training

Your Ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History: Shirokami's was born in Konoha, but was kidnapped by Orochimaru. At the age of thirteen, he managed to escape. A woman with a leaf village headband by the name Anko was currently on a long mission, she stayed in a cabin to get rest, as she rests she sees a homeless child with a huge scar on his back, she could smell that the boy belonged to Orochimaru, since she was once his student. Anko took care of him for a while, but only until the mission was over, the mission was over, but Shiromaki begged for her to take him with her, but she refused, as it would give Orochimaru a reason to attack the village. Knowing how dissapointed the boy was, Anko decided to teach Shirokami ways to live undercover without being found, so that he could survive. Every since that day he's been running away, never finding peace.

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Theme Song and Background Music:
[video=youtube;YFqCmSp_bio]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YFqCmSp_bio[/video]

Battles
Wins: 0
Lost: 0

~Approved~ edited stuff, next time follow the template correctly. Have fun RPing.
 
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You might want to put these
[/CENTE] around your pic to put it in the middle. That would make it look better. :D

( I purposely removed the r to show you but yeah xD​
 
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Nice bio and all but I think you should re-read the RP rules. You can't have Lava, Scorch and Swift on one bio not only that but I don't think you meet the requirments for any of those abilities as they need you to have mastered at least 2 of the basic 5 elements(Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, and Lightning). You also need to put Jounin down as your rank since your Rp rank goes by your post count. Also, since you are Jounin you need to pick 4 out of the 5 basic elements to start out with and when you do pick them you need to put "Need Training" next to them.
 
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to add to what abel said you also can have a specility,you can only specilise in something if you have mastered it,other then that it seems everyone else has already explain what was wrong and youve changed it so its a nice bio well done
 
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