p1gm1nt Member 57 posts 26 reactions More Joined Jan 26, 2012 Messages 57 Status Activity Streak Jun 19, 2012 #1 You must be registered for see images I know her eyes are a bit far apart but let me know what else you think
You must be registered for see images I know her eyes are a bit far apart but let me know what else you think
Scooby Doo Legendary Shinobi 🐸 Immortal 45,490 posts 1,676 reactions 27 More +24 Joined May 10, 2012 Messages 45,490 Status Activity Streak Jun 19, 2012 #2 Her neck is too long IMO But nice first work
narutorikudoumode Member 3,933 posts 459 reactions More Joined Oct 24, 2011 Messages 3,933 Status Activity Streak Jun 19, 2012 #3 its a good drawing just that like you said her eyes is apart and her neck is a little longer
kaka96 Anbu Operative 🎭 Veteran 4,035 posts 142 reactions More Joined Jul 12, 2011 Messages 4,035 Status Activity Streak Jun 19, 2012 #4 The eyes as you said, and I'd say the neck is too long perhaps. Looks good besides that
RoguePatriot Jōnin Strategist 🧠 Veteran 2,168 posts 232 reactions More Joined May 8, 2012 Messages 2,168 Status Activity Streak Jun 19, 2012 #5 Besides the neck and eyes it's really good!
partha420 Anbu Operative 🎭 Veteran 2,965 posts 137 reactions More Joined Jun 29, 2011 Messages 2,965 Status Activity Streak Jun 19, 2012 #6 Yup...Something's wrong with the Eyes and neck.Otherwise very Good..Btw who is it?
uzumaki antonia Jōnin Strategist 🧠 Veteran 2,488 posts 228 reactions More Joined Nov 8, 2010 Messages 2,488 Status Activity Streak Jun 19, 2012 #7 Besides the flaws everyone else has pointed out it's good
SasukeXbam Leaf Village Regular 🍃 Regular 906 posts 11 reactions More Joined Apr 25, 2011 Messages 906 Status Activity Streak Jun 19, 2012 #8 It's good just the neck is alittle too long
p1gm1nt Member 57 posts 26 reactions More Joined Jan 26, 2012 Messages 57 Status Activity Streak Jun 19, 2012 #9 Thank you everyone for the advice I have done a quick sketch to try improve those two aspects... You must be registered for see links partha420 said: Yup...Something's wrong with the Eyes and neck.Otherwise very Good..Btw who is it? Click to expand... I have no clue just my first attempt in this genre/style... i am more of a landscape and life portrait type but i thought i should give this style a try:ice:
Thank you everyone for the advice I have done a quick sketch to try improve those two aspects... You must be registered for see links partha420 said: Yup...Something's wrong with the Eyes and neck.Otherwise very Good..Btw who is it? Click to expand... I have no clue just my first attempt in this genre/style... i am more of a landscape and life portrait type but i thought i should give this style a try:ice: