My first anime/manga related sketch

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I know her eyes are a bit far apart :o but let me know what else you think :)
 

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Her neck is too long IMO But nice first work:)
 
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its a good drawing just that like you said her eyes is apart and her neck is a little longer
 

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The eyes as you said, and I'd say the neck is too long perhaps. Looks good besides that
 

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Besides the neck and eyes it's really good!
 

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Yup...Something's wrong with the Eyes and neck.Otherwise very Good..Btw who is it?
 

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Besides the flaws everyone else has pointed out it's good
 

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It's good just the neck is alittle too long
 

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Thank you everyone for the advice:D I have done a quick sketch to try improve those two aspects...

Yup...Something's wrong with the Eyes and neck.Otherwise very Good..Btw who is it?

I have no clue just my first attempt in this genre/style... i am more of a landscape and life portrait type but i thought i should give this style a try:ice:
 
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