My Failed Naruto Predictions

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Yep, i tried to write something on the matter of what would happen in this chapter...needless to say, i was wrong...i made some adjustments after i read the chapter, i made up predictions up to CH 629 based on this, so if you guys like it, ill post more and maybe even do more. So, its some failed predictions, an alternative ending maybe, consider it fanfiction.
 
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Prediction 627: Sasuke`s Decision


Hashirama: So…this is my story, I am not proud of what I did that day, but I regret nothing. You may say Madara survived but im sure…that day…that day was the day I saw my friend die.

Sasuke: So only something like Madara`s death could make you realize your real motivation for fighting…

Hashirama: Shinobi are all people who endure pain and hatred, however each one has its own motivation to endure, much like a nindo. Mine was a better future, Madara`s on the other side…

Sasuke: …

Orochimaru: Either way you choose you will have to find a motivation, Sasuke kun…

Sasuke: Im not sure…

Sarutobi : Arent you sure of your previous motivation?

Sasuke: I changed since then.

Hashirama: Then lets put it in a much more simple way, why do you fight Sasuke, for WHO do you fight?

Sasuke: …My clan...

Sarutobi : Yes, but do you see your clan as Madara and Fugaku or as your brother and Shisui did?

Sasuke: I… I have made my descision, lets go outside.

Sarutobi: Minato…

Minato: Im on it. *Performs a handseal* Flying Thunder God Jutsu

*Sasuke and the group appears just on top of the hokage monument.*

Suigetsu (thinking): Amazing, the 4th`s space time technique… its so…fast!

Sasuke: alright, now that we all are here I will- *Disapears just as he is about to be hit by a kunai on his back*

...

Hooded figure on top of a nearby tree (thinking): Damnit! Were did he go…?

Sasuke: *appears behind the figure*You shouldn’t try to sneak behind other people*pushes the hood down* Now, should you, Karin?

Karin: Bastard! I always stayed by your side, how could you simply stab me and leave me In the hands of Konoha?!

Sasuke: I wasn’t in my right mind back then…

Karin: Damn right you weren’t !* Tries to slap sasuke but he holds her hand*

Sasuke: I don’t know what you are planning to do, but I can either leave you here to be captured and put back into jail or you can accept my apologies and come with us.

Karin: …damn you Sasuke Uchiha!

*Sasuke lands near the group with Karin by his side*

Juugo: So Karin`s back in the group now...

Suigetsu: What!? Oh, man….I just cant get away from her can I?

Karin: Suigetsu! No one asked for your…*sees Orochimaru* LORD OROCHIMARU! Good…yo-you are back I see…

Orochimaru: Don’t worry Karin, I am on Sasuke- kun`s side now.

Suigetsu: About that… why are you working with Sasuke, wasn’t he the one who killed you?

Orochimaru : I think I just wanted to see how the tale of Uchiha Sasuke would end…

Sasuke: So…as I was saying now that we are all here I shall explain my plan.

Tobirama: So which side shall we fight for?

Sasuke: You will fight for the shinobi alliance.

Hashirama: Does that mean that…

Sasuke: No, I still haven’t decided which side I shall join, you four will only act as replacements.

Minato: Replacements…? For who?

Sasuke: For Uzumaki Naruto of course.

Minato (Thinking): Naruto!?

Sarutobi: Why for Naruto?

Sasuke: Because him and I have a meeting to attend, and with no one of his power to substitute him, he wouldn’t leave the alliance.

Hashirama: Of his power? How strong can he be?

Minato: Naruto is the Jinchuriki of the nine tails, much like your own deceased wife, I don’t think you’ve felt it, lord 1st but in the time I haven’t seen him he appears to have meet an agreement with the fox, he can use the full extent of his chakra…well, not the full extent…not yet.

Hashirama: How can you know all of this?

Minato: Because Naruto is my son…

Sasuke: Your…son?

Minato: Yes and judging from your previous words I do believe you have met him.

Sarutobi: Your boy and Sasuke were teammates when I last left this world, Minato…

Sasuke: A lot has changed since then…

Minato: If you want to meet him it means your bond wasn’t completely cut off…

Sasuke: It may be so, but it is a new bond, a bond of hatred.

*silence in the group*

Tobirama: The Naruto boy wants to maintain this bond dosent he?

Sasuke: How do you…?

Tobirama: Yours and his story are very similar to the one my brother has just told you…you should reflect on how Maddara ended up….

Minato:…I wonder how it ended all up in this situation…

Sasuke: *starts to walk away* I am going, team Taka, follow me, Orochimaru, Guide the hokages to the battlefield.

Tobirama: you haven’t told us where you want your friend to meet you…

Sasuke: He will know…

Hashirama: I wonder if your boy will be able to save him before he is blinded by the darkness…

Minato: Me too…

Orochimaru: If you realy want to help your son, you should be going, I don’t know how much longer he will survive
against the Ten tails…

Hashirama: The ten tails?! But…no…that’s only a legend…

Orochimaru: It may be so, but every legend has its bit of thruth…

Sarutobi: Minato!

Minato: I know, I KNOW!!! * makes series of handseals, seal appears on the floor*

Minato(thinking): Please, Naruto…stay alive until we get there! I know I have been a bad parent leaving you alone…but ive got a present for you…something to repay for the time I wasn’t with you…

Hashirama: Alright, finally i will be able to meet with Madara again, tonight the four hokages fight as one!
 
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Prediction 628: Reinforcements Arrive


Naruto: Ughh * Thrown on the floor*

Obito: Give up, you have no way of stoping us… *Naruto`s bijuu mode starts going back to Kyuubi chakra mode*

Obito: Your chakra mode is regressing...keeping all those people safe must realy be tiring…

Naruto: I wont let you kill anymore of my friends…

Obito: *Smiles* I think I heard those words before...

Naruto: Then if you heard that I think you’ve heard it too…

Obito: ?

Naruto: WHEN I TOLD YOU TO SHUT THE F**K UP!!! *Dashes against obito an tries to kick him, but passes right through*

Obito: He… some people never learn… *Makes a series of handseals* Fire Style: Great Fire Annihilation

Naruto: S**t… *Jumps up high, dodging the fire wall*

Obito: Not so fast! *Uses Kamui to teleport a giant shuriken and launches it at Naruto*

*Naruto uses a chakra hand to push himself to the ground.*

Naruto (thinking): Damnit, He dodges every single attack of mine simply by letting me pass through him…I need a distraction…and I think I just got one! *Goes out of kyuubi chakra mode and does a handseal* Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu *Three clones appear and dash at Obito.*

Obito: What do you expect to do with shadow clones against me? *Easily defeats clones with taijutsu*

Naruto: *Smiles* To distract you *Vanishes in a poof of smoke*

Obito: Another Shadow Clone…?

Naruto: *Apears on top of Obito (like his father with the hirashim) in kyubi chakra mode and a rasengan in hand*

Naruto: Now I got you! *brings down Rasengan with chakra hand* Rasengan!

Obito: *Smiles and blocks the Rasengan with his left hand* Preta Path…

Naruto (thinking): He`s absorving chakra…just like Nagato! But that means…

Obito: Surprised?*Smiles* Did you think the rinnegan in my left eye was just for show? *Transforms his right hand into a canon with the Asura Path* You think imitating your father will help you defeat me? Some people never learn… *Points cannon at Naruto* Unluckily for you, I do. Asura Attack! *Cannon releases a Massive bleam of chakra*

*Naruto appears some meters away from Obito*

Naruto( thinking): Damn, that was a close one…Ill have to be careful from now on… *Goes out of Kyubi chakra mode and after some moments enters sage mode* There, ill save Kurama`s chakra in case of emergency, for now ill have to fight with that.

Obito (thinking): Damn hes even faster than his father…I was saving my rinnegan abilities for later but this boy made me pull them out before their own time…

Naruto: This time I wont fall for your tricks… *Dashes against Obito again.*


Killer B: WHEEEEE * Brings down Samehameda against Madara, Madara dodges it by back flipping*

Madara: Damnit… *Madara is surrounded by five other shinobi but he jumps back again*

Madara (thinking): I cant fight all of them at once, Obito is taking care of the Kyuubi and the Juubi is rampaging…What have I got myself into...*More Shinobi try to attack Madara but he dispels them with taijutsu*

*Madara gets surrounded by at least one hundred shinobi with Kyubi chakra*

Kumo Shinobi: NOW WE GOT YOU! *Madara escapes again by backfliping high in the air, but the shinobi follow him.*

Madara:*Activates Rinnegan* Allmighty Push! *Throws all the shinobi after Madara to several sides.*

Madara (thinking): I have to get Obito, he didn’t realize yet the Juubi is planning a Massive scale attack on the alliance.

*Naruto (Still in Sage Mode) and Obito are struggling in taijutsu*

Obito: Give up, I am far more experienced and skilled with you in physical combat…

Naruto: I cant give up when my friends are out there, fighting and believing in me!

Obito: THEN IM GOING TO KILL ALL YOUR FRIENDS, STARTING FROM THE HYUUGA GIRL!!!

Naruto: Wait…Hinata? *Naruto gets distracted for a second and is kicked away by Obito a right before Madara arives.*

Madara: Obito, have you dealt with the boy?

Obito: Im finishing him off…

Madara: Well, I don’t think you noticed, but the juubi is gathering energy, it will soon release an powerful attack at the shinobi alliance, and you wont like to be in its way when it does so...

Naruto: Wait…is the Juubi gathering energy?

Madara: Yes, not that you should be able to see it in your curent form, but you have been distracted. Even if you struggle now its too late, the Juubi is about to release a Tailed Beast Bomb

Naruto: WHAT?! BUT THAT WOULD KILL NEARLY ALL THE SHINOBI ALLIANCE!

Madara: *Chuckles* Yes…Let’s see what will you do next…Kyuubi…

Naruto: Damnit! *Goes kyuubi chakra mode and dashes off after the shinobi alliance.*

*Juubi roars and opens its mouth to start gathering energy for a Tailed Beast Bomb*

*Naruto arrives In front of the alliance.*

Sakura: Naruto!? What are you doing here? I thought you were fighting the masked guy!

Naruto: No time to explain! Sakura chan, everybody, run! NOW!

Shikamaru: But Naruto…

Naruto: I SAID RUN!!

*Naruto appears inside his head*

Naruto: Kurama! I need all your chakra to enter bijuu mode NOW!

Kurama: Are you sure, kit? If you got all my chakra at once you could access bijuu mode but it wouldn’t last long…

Naruto: I DON’T CARE!! If I do nothing all my friends will die!

Kurama: Well…its true, you cant fight the Juubi without this army…ok, but it will only last about a minute or a bit less.

Naruto: Well, then it will have to do…

*Naruto enters Bijuu mode*

Naruto: COME AT ME YOU….THING!

*The Juubi roars and launches a Tailed Beast Bomb at Naruto*

*Naruto materializes a kyubi made of chakra arund him and tries to block the bomb with its tails* Naruto: Sh*t…its… too…much! * Kyuubi made of chakra disappears (But hes still in his bijuu mode) *

Naruto: Gah…

???: Need some help? * Naruto turns back only to see a kunai flying over his shoulder and suddenly the Tailed Beast Bomb is gone Leaving only a crater (About the size of a rasenshuriken exploding) and some dust in the air.*

Naruto What the…? *Far away in the horizon a giant explosion happens*

Figure In the middle of the smoke : Long time no see Naruto…

Naruto: This voice…old man third?

*Smoke clears up and reveals the four hokages standing in the middle of the cratter*

Minato: And he is not alone...
 
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SO...how was the chapter? I tried to fix action into it, i dont know how it turned out really... seemed a bit weird...anyway the Hinata thing was kind of a discussion me and my friend were having the other day, next chapter i want to show a bit of hokage action! And maybe add some things that are usualy present in the Naruto manga...Anyway leave me a comment of what you thought of this chapter!
 
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Prediction 629 The Substitution


Kakashi: It cant be…sensei!

Naruto: …Dad? But…how…I thought…

Minato: That I had been sealed away, inside the reaper? Yes but…

*Orochimaru lands by Minato`s side*

Orochimaru: I intervened.

Naruto: Orochimaru! *Goes bijuu mode*

*Naruto disappears and appears again in front of Orochimaru but is stopped right in time by Minato who teleports between them.*

Minato: Naruto, I know Orochimaru has done horrible things in the past but he is in our side now!

Hashirama (thinking): Such power…its seems like hes on fire…I see now why the Sasuke kid wanted all the four of us to take his place…

Tobirama (thinking): He has potential, his speed is already enourmous…but something is not right about the nine tails chakra…

Sarutobi (thinking): Is that really Naruto? That kid who always pranked the village and vandalized the Hokage monument…?

Minato (thinking): To think he has grown so much in such a short time…

Naruto: But dad, Orochimaru- *Gasps in pain and falls to the ground before the bijuu mode fades, the kyuubi cloak on the alliance also fades.*

*Naruto appears inside his head*

Naruto: What the hell Kurama?!

Kurama: I told you not to overuse my chakra, but nevermind, now that the hokages are here you got enough manpower, I will recharge for now.

Naruto: *Gets up* Dad…Old Man Third…* Looks at the Senju brothers* and who the hell are you?

Tobirama: Really? You wake up and look at our giant stone faces everyday and you don’t recognize us?

Naruto:…no.

Hashirama: They call me the first!

Naruto:WOW, the first Hokage, that’s right! So cool, did you know im gonna be the sixth?

Hashirama: WOW, and I was amazed by a fourth when we already have a sixth!

Tobirama (thinking): They’re so alike its disturbing…

Minato: Naruto, we didn’t come here to chat.

Naruto: Oh! That’s right…Why are you here Dad?

Minato: We are here on a request from a friend of yours.

Naruto: A friend…?

Orochimaru: Yes *Does an Orochimaru laugh (Ya know, the kukukukuku thing he does)* Sasuke kun asked us to help you.

Naruto: Sasuke…? Why would he do that?

Sarutobi: Because he wants to talk to you.

Naruto: Him…? Talk to me?...ok, but I cant leave the alliance alone.

Hashirama: And that is why he send us, we will fight while you are gone .

Naruto: But what if Orochimaru turns you guys against the alliance?

Tobirama: We would resist his control, this time we came back full power unlike last time, I would never let him use us to harm our fellow shinobi, be them from other village or not they are on our side.

Naruto: Then…I think ill leave it to you guys from here. * Starts walking out the cratter*

Minato: Naruto. *Naruto turns to face Minato* Take this. * Flying Thunder God kunai appears on his hand and he throws it at Naruto, who catches.* This wont be the last time we meet, don’t worry.

Naruto: * Smiles* Good luck, dad. * Walks away*

Sarutobi: Are you sure we should let him go, Minato? We might need him later…

Minato: We are Hokages for a reason, maybe we will need Naruto`s help, yes…but for now…he`s got his own business to attend to…

Orochimaru:...i think my job is done...for now... * disappears leaving some leaves behind*

...

Naruto: Kakashi! *pulls Kakashi close to him*

Kakashi: Naruto? What is it?

Naruto: I have business to attend with Sasuke, the Hokages will take care of the alliance while im gone. I need a favor of you.

Kakashi: … of course…what is it?

Naruto: Watch Hinata for me?

Kakashi: Hinata? Why?

Naruto: Obito is targeting her to affect me, when he tries to make a move get him, and please don’t let her get hurt.

Kakashi: …you can count on me, I promise ill take care of her for you, Naruto.

Naruto: Thanks Kakashi Sensei, and don’t worry, I’ll be back before you even notice! *Runs off*

Kakashi (Thinking): Naruto…you’ve grown.

...

Hashirama: So…That’s the Juubi of legends…

Sarutobi: Yes, but we have been informed of two other enemies besides that, were are those two?

Madara: HERE!! *Falls off the sky and tries to land a kick on Hashirama, who blocks it.*

Hashirama: Madara! How have you been?

Madara: That’s not how you should treat an enemy! *tries another Kick on Hashirama but he uses a Body Flicker to get out of the way fast*

Hashirama (Depresed): Don’t talk to me like that…

Madara: Unbelievable, you ARE still the same idiot! * Pursues Hashirama*

Minato: But then where is the other one?

???: Here…sensei…

Minato: This voice…wait, sensei? *Looks at Obito who is standing at the edge of the crater*

Minato: No…that’s…imposible…

Sarutobi: Obito…

Tobirama: Seems like those two have unfinished business…we should get going Saru, lets join the alliance against the Juubi.

Sarutobi: …Yes, sensei. *Heads off with Tobirama towards the alliance*

Minato: So…you were him…the man in the mask…you were him all along… even that night…

Obito: Yes, that night, the night with the nine tails, that was me…

Minato: Why, Obito? Is it because of Rin? She died for a noble cause…

Obito: SHE DIED BECAUSE OF THE MIST, SHE HAD BEEN CAPTURED AND TURNED INTO THE THREE TAILS JINCHURIKI BY THEM! THEY PLANNED ON RELEASING THE BIJUU ON THE MIDDLE OF THE VILLAGE!

Minato:…

Obito: And then she asked Kakashi to kill her, when he didn’t, she jumped in front of his chidori…it wouldn’t have happened if you were there…it wouldn’t have happened if you had stoped the mist…

Minato: Im so sorry I couldn’t protect her, Obito…When I arrived it was already too late…im so sorry.

Obito:…*raises opened hand towards Minato* Its indeed too late, sensei. Allmighty Push! *Throws Minato out of the cratter and into the middle of the battlefield*

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*Tobirama and Sarutobi arrive in the front of the alliance*

Tobirama: My name is Tobirama Senju, also known as the Second Hokage, and this is Hiruzen Sarutobi, Third Hokage. We will lead you in battle against the beast known as the Ten Tails! *Cheers are heard from the alliance*



*Naruto is seen jumping from tree to tree*

Naruto(thinking):Sasuke…wait for me…im coming…
 
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SO…how was the chapter? Since my attempt of action seems to have worked well last chapter I thought on trying other Naruto manga elements, those were: the classic Naruto Humor (I hope Tobirama wasn’t too much OOC when talking to Naruto)and hinting future Romance between characters (Im still not sure if I will make a pairing actualy canon in the fanfic, as much as I like Naru x Hina)...Anyway, leave me a comment of what you thought of this chapter!

Ps: I wont be posting with the same frequency (once a day) now that the weekend`s over, but ill try my best
 
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Prediction 630 Each to its own Battle


Madara and Hashirama (Unison): Secret Wood Style Jutsu: Deep Forest Emergence ! *Two forest of trees come out of the ground and become intertwined, both jumps through trees, jumps into the air and clash Madara`s fan and Hashirama`s wooden sword*

Hashirama: So…you stole my DNA? I never thought you would go soo low, Madara…

Madara: Maybe it was too low, but it was worth it…*Activates rinnegan* Allmighty Push! *Launches Hashirama against the forest, Hashirama lands in a pillar of wood made just before he hits the trees.*

Hashirama: So…that’s the rinnegan, eh?

Madara: As I told you previously, it was worth it.

Hashirama: *laughs* This may rather be a fun battle after all…

Madara: Agreed!

*Both dash at each other ready to attack*

...

*Juubi roars and its body is filled with small wood spikes*

Tobirama ( thinking): We need a tactic to counter the Juubi`s power…

Shikamaru: *Lands by the second`s side with Ino.* Lord second, My name is Shikamaru Nara and this is Ino Yamanaka, based on what I heard of yours and the third`s abilities I think I have a way to counter the Juubi`s attacks.

Tobirama: A boy from the Nara clan… I will hear you, Nara, but don’t think you will gain my trust so easily

Shikamaru: Troublesome…

Tobirama: What did you say?

Shikamaru: Uhm…nothing. As I was saying we could *explains plans to Tobirama* So, what do you think?

*Tobirama smiles*

...

Obito (thinking): So…the Juubi copied my jutsu…I wasn’t expecting this, but it will certainly be fun…

*Small army of shinobi (at least 30 ninja) dash at Obito*

Suna shinobi: GET HIM!

Obito: *Sigh* Do they ever give up? Allmighty Push! *throws all shinobi in 5 meters range from him back before using Kamui to teleport two big shuriken (like Mizuki`s shuriken)* Not done yet! *Spins the shuriken in his hands and they suddenly combust.*

Konoha shinobi: Look out! Those shuriken are made out of chakra conducting metal

Obito: *smiles* exactly… *Throws them against the army and makes four quick handeseals* Ninja Art: Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu *At least 60 shuriken on fire appear out of nowhere, they hit all members of the small army but two man. *

Obito: Did you think you would escape? * Obito uses Kamui to teleport himself in front of these two man and proceeds to reach both man`s necks and kills them.* This was too easy…

???: Too bad its not finished yet, then! *Kakashi comes out of the ground and tries to punch Obito , but Obito blocks the punch before kicking Kakashi in the chest, Kakashi blocks the attack but is thrown back by it*

Obito: Kakashi…I would have to take care of you soner or later *Grabs a shuriken in the ground and uses chakra to make it burst into flames.*…lets end this…

Kakashi:…* Performs several handseals before holding his hand down and creating a lightning blade* Yes…its about time…

*Both look eye in the eye before dashing at each other*

...

*Juubi roars shots a barrage of wood spikes towards the alliance*

Tobirama: Saru! Now!

Sarutobi: Yes!* Makes a series of handseals before putting his hands down on the ground* Earth Style: Rock Canyon! * Earth opens itself on front of the alliance leaving a gap of ten metters from one side to another*

Tobirama: *Does a series of handseals* Water Style: Water Wall Jutsu! *Water shoots of the hole making a natural shield against the barrage of wood spikes he then proceeds to make yet another series of handseals* Water style: Twin Water Dragons! *Two gigantic Water Dragons Come out of the water wall and fly and hit simultaneously the Juubi`s chest pushing it back and stunning it*

Shikamaru: INO!

Ino: I know, I KNOW! *Uses a telephatic Jutsu and contacts all the alliance`s minds* NOW!! *Every ninja uses his best long ranged jutsu aiming at the Juubi as Tobirama dismisses the water wall, every Jutsu hits the Juubi, making the beast roar in anger. *

Tobirama: Its working! KEEP AT IT!

...

*Obito and Kakashi are about to clash*

Kakashi (thinking): Obito…im so sorry… *tries to stab Obito with his hand, but the hand passes right through him *

Obito: *Smirks* Im sorry Kakashi… *Grabs a kunai in Kakashi`s pocket* But I just remembered I have some business to take care of…* Turns and throws his shuriken at Kakashi, who jumps when the weapon is about to hit him* I think it’s about time for your student to fell how a broken promise fells like… *Uses Kamui and disapears*

Kakashi: What did he mean by…oh s*it!

...

*Hinata being healed by Sakura while many shinobi are seen running towards the main army*

Kakashi: *jumps in top of a rock about 70 meters away from Hinata* Hinata, look out!

*Obito uses Kamui to appear behind both girls with Kakashi`s kunai on his hand*

Obito: Too late! *Hinata and Sakura turns to look at Obito, a kunai flies between them and Minato appears between Obito and Hinata and blocks the kunai with his own*

Minato: Didn’t I teach you to treat ladies nicely, Obito?

Obito: Damn you… *Minato kicks Obito`s chest and Obito lands not very far away*

Sakura: I…I know this man…

Hinata: Youre… Youre Naruto-Kun`s dad arent you? The Fourth?

Minato: Hum? You two girls know my son? Oh…I see, so which one of you two is Naruto`s… *Raises Pinky*?

Hinata: *Blushes* NO! Nothing like that, I…we just….we are just friends….

Sakura: Me and Naruto?! HELL NO!!

Kakashi: *Lands on Sakura`s side* Sensei, stop teasing the girls…

Minato: Oh, alright…but both seem like they would be nice girls for Naruto…

Hinata: *Blushes even more* Nice….girl?

Sakura: Humph…me and him...as if…

Minato: Kakashi, please get them away from here, Obito and I have unresolved Business…

Sakura: Come Hinata, Sensei… lets join the army…

*Hinata noods and the trio run off*

Minato:…We don’t need to do this, Obito.

Obito: We wouldn’t if you had protected Rin…

...

*Hashirama lands a chakra enhanced punch right in Madara`s jaw, Launching hiw in the air, Madara spins in the air and lands in the ground before creating a susanoo around him.*

Hashirama: Get ready for my Wood Style: Wood Dragon Jutsu!* Wood Dragon dashes at Madara`s Susanoo and both start to fight, as Hashirama launches himself against the actual Madara and both restart their fighting.*

Hashirama: I missed this…

Madara: And you think I didn’t?

*Both Jump back*

...

Fire style Shinobi: Fire style: Fireball Jutsu *Launches a gigantic Firebal, (that grows even bigger after being reinforced by wind style shinobi ) against the Juubi, The Juubi tries to hold the attack but roars in pain as the attack hits it*
*Choza and Chouji Akimichi appear out of the smoke left by the jutsu both with chakra surounding their hands*

Chouza and Choji (Unison): Butterfly Bomb! *Both simultaneously land each one a chakra enhanced punch in the Juubi`s gut and throw it back

Tobirama: ONE MORE TIME!!! * The Shinobi advance again against the Juubi*

*The Juubi Roars and tries to attack the shinobi with its hands*

Sarutobi: OH NO YOU DON’T!!!Fire style: Fire Dragon Jutsu!! *Launches a gigantic dragon shaped fireball at the back of the Juubi`s head*

Tobirama: Good one, Saru! It will be stunned for some seconds after that, lets take the opurtunity to ATTACK!!

...

Minato: Obito, please…listen to the voice of reason….

Obito: Im very sorry sensei…but that voice you speak of has left me a long time ago

Minato:…Then you leave me with no choice…* Sheds a tear before making three fast handseals* Wind Style: Air Armor! *Wind envelops Minato (Like Naruto in ending 21) Making a round armor made of air the tear is blown off* Obito Uchiha… this all ENDS HERE!!
 
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So...how was the chapter? Nobody said anything bout last chapter yet...did i do something wrong? Anyway, showing the four Hokages battle was fun, im sorry that it took me quite the time to post this, it was originaly meant to be posted earlier today, but i wasnt in the inspiration to write down my ideas after today`s chapter...Anyway leave me a coment of what you thought of this chapter!
 

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So...how was the chapter? Nobody said anything bout last chapter yet...did i do something wrong? Anyway, showing the four Hokages battle was fun, im sorry that it took me quite the time to post this, it was originaly meant to be posted earlier today, but i wasnt in the inspiration to write down my ideas after today`s chapter...Anyway leave me a coment of what you thought of this chapter!
That was a great chapter but seemed way too uni-dimensional for my taste except that obito and hinata part.
Add a bit turbulence to it like killing an important character may be :yeah:
 

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So...how was the chapter? for explanations, the black haired baby Rin was holding, it was her and Obito`s child. I realy liked the idea of ading team taka and the dream world parts. Both werent originaly planned, i just had the idea while writing. Maybe you guys will have to wait a bit to 632, im out of ideas curently, and havent got a perfect idea of the next chapter yet...Anyway, leave me a comment of what you thought of this chapter!
 

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So...how was the chapter? for explanations, the black haired baby Rin was holding, it was her and Obito`s child. I realy liked the idea of ading team taka and the dream world parts. Both werent originaly planned, i just had the idea while writing. Maybe you guys will have to wait a bit to 632, im out of ideas curently, and havent got a perfect idea of the next chapter yet...Anyway, leave me a comment of what you thought of this chapter!
Nice read =D
The ending was perfect BTW.
The big fight huh.Looking forward for the next one *_*
 

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So...how was the chapter? for explanations, the black haired baby Rin was holding, it was her and Obito`s child. I realy liked the idea of ading team taka and the dream world parts. Both werent originaly planned, i just had the idea while writing. Maybe you guys will have to wait a bit to 632, im out of ideas curently, and havent got a perfect idea of the next chapter yet...Anyway, leave me a comment of what you thought of this chapter!

Wow, this was...this was badass, simply put. Really liked it, just one question: are you gonna make any pairing?
 
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