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Chapter 651: A break from the battle
*The Raikage is seen slowly getting up from the ground*
A (thinking): Ugh…what happened, I remembered being beat up by Madara but then…*Turns to see Gaara, Mei and Onoki standing looking down at something*
A: HEY! What are you people looking at?
Mei :*Turns to look at A with a sad expresion* Its Tsunade…she`s…
Gaara: Dying…
A: WHAT?! *Stands up and walks to the Kage only to see Tsunade in a pool of blood around her* Tsunade! You cant die! Not just yet!
Tsunade (With difficulty): I…tried to put myself together and I succeeded…*Coughs*…but I lost too much blood…
Ohnoki: When the elders have to bury the young ones…*Looks up* This is truly war…
Tsunade (With difficulty): *Gives a small laugh* Don’t worry Tsuchikage…Im not that young…*Her young transformation vanishes and we get a full look at old Tsunade*
Ohnoki: *Smiles* You`re still young compared to me, slug princess…
A: *Sheding Tears* WHAT ARE YOU ALL SAYING?! STOP CRYING, SHE CAN STILL BE SAVED!!!
Tsunade (With difficulty): Raikage…stop. Its no use…I just want you to listen to my last request, my final words…
A: Tsunade…You may speak….
*Tsunade speaks but we don’t see what shes speaking *
A: WHAT?! WHY WOULD YOU ASK US THAT?!
Gaara: This request is very noble but…
Mei: Tsunade…I don’t quite understand why you are asking us this but…
Ohnoki: We Promise you, Slug Princess. *All the other kages look in astonish to him* If it all happens like you predict it to be, we promise you we will do as you requested.
Tsunade (With difficulty): Thank you, Tsuchikage Ohnoki… I have also one more thing to say…
*Tsunade speaks again, shocking even more the Kages*
A: Tsunade. Are you sure about this?
Tsunade: Absolutly…
Gaara: You are serious then? Do you really think…?
Mei: If you say so…we will take your word…
Ohnoki: Who would’ve known…*Slightly smiles*
Tsunade: I feel my time is coming my friends…I said all I have to say, its time…for me…to go…*Closes her eyes, dying with a smile on her face.*
*Right at the time the Hokage Bodyguards appear out of the ruined battlefield*
Genma: Hey look there they are! Wait…is that…Oh no…*Rushes to the kages*
A: Tsunade…*Takes out his cloak and wraps Tsunade around it* You are a true kage…and a true friend…
…
*Obito enters his hideout in a black sphere and starts walking when suddenly...*
Obito: What the-*Obito suddenly falls next to the wall of the cave hearing a thousand voices in his head saying random things about death and loneliness* Ugh…shut up…SHUT UP!!! *He punches the wall next to him causing it to crack, the voices stop and he is left there breathing heavily* What was that…no matter…*Walks to the center of the room* What happened here?…oh well, there is only one way to know…KAMIGAN!! *Images flash through Obito`s mind of Itachi`s and Sasuke`s battle against Kabuto and a final image of Anko waking up and walking away as if in pain* So…Kabuto was defeated…and the girl escaped…*Looks at Kabuto at his right, who is still traped in Itachi`s Genjutsu, He walks to him and looks Obito right in the eye* Dismiss.
*Kabuto opens both his eyes, confused*
Kabuto: What`s…happening?
Obito: Itachi trapped you in a genjutsu, the Izanami…
Kabuto: What happened? Where are my powers? And who are you?
Obito: Orochimaru stole your powers and I am the one you called Tobi.
Kabuto: Lord Orochimaru….is he alive?
Obito: He was for a short while in which he resurrected the Hokage we fought him and the edo Hokage…*Summons the kusanagi sword in a poof of smoke (Like Sasuke summons his weapons)* …and I got this as a trophy. I do not know how Orochimaru got a sword that originally belonged to the second Raikage, but…well, here it is.
Kabuto: May I look at it…*Psycho look on his face*
Obito: Of course...* Gives the blade to Kabuto who examinates it*
Kabuto: So….you killed Lord Orochimaru to get this…?
Obito: No, I-
Kabuto: YOU DIE! *Brings down the sword at Obito but the blade stops midair before hiting Obito*
Obito: You were Orochimaru`s right hand, you should know that the sword of Kusanagi can’t attack its own master. *Obito makes a small movement in his right hand and the blade is thrown back* And besides, why are you doing this anyway?
Kabuto: *Jumps back* Our deal is dead, you don’t have Sasuke with you anymore do you?
Obito: No, but I would have let you live if you hadn’t attacked me.
Kabuto: *Laughs* Do you think you can kill me-
Obito: Kusanagi. *The blade comes behind Kabuto`s back and impales him, Obito body flickers behind Obito and uses the human path to finish him off* Yes, I can kill you that easily. *Kabuto falls to the ground as Obito wonders deeper in the cave*
…
*Sasuke and Taka are running through the forrest*
Suigetsu: You have been quiet Sasuke… what happened back there?
Sasuke: I have no obligation to tell you, I`ll just say it changed my point of view in a lot of things.
Suigetsu: So we`re good guys now.
Sasuke:…
Suigetsu: Gee, what a humor…
*The team Taka lands on the ground an continues running not noticing Naruto, leaned against a nearby tree in sage mode*
Naruto (thinking): Holy crap…that was close…
*Inside Naruto`s head*
Kurama: Yes it was, now we must keep going.
Naruto: Yeah…but…
Kurama: What is it Naruto?
Naruto: I haven’t slept for two days, Kurama, im tired…
Kurama: You cant be tired! You need to go there and save the world!
Naruto: Yeah, but Im so sleepy…Besides, dad is taking care of everything…*Yawns* I think I`ll just…
Kurama: Naruto don’t you dare sleep on me! Don’t you- …hes asleep…I cant believe he fell asleep in the middle of a war…
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*Obito Is walking back on his hideout, he is now wearing a black robe and a belt with scrolls attached to it, he walks until he is in front of Yamato in the tree trunk next ot the hashirama senju clone*
Obito: I have no longer use for you…* Touches the tree trunk and Yamato falls to the ground, he slowly gets up before looking at Obito and getting startled*
Yamato: You! Who are you?
Obito: I am the one under the mask. Madara Uchiha as you know me.
Yamato: What do you want of me?!
Obito: Nothing…much the opposite, really. You have no longer an use for me, so I am to dismiss of you.
Yamato: You`re here to kill me?!
Obito: You can say that as well…
Yamato : I see…that leaves me no choice…*Claps his hands togheter*
Obito: What…are you doing?
Yamato: Im taking you out with me! *Tree trunks start growing out of Yamato*
Obito: Releasing your Hashirama cells cant kill me.
Yamato: No…but for my wood, this whole tree is nothing but fuel…
Obito : What do you mean?
Yamato: I mean…*Smiles* Its over for you.
*The tree trunk behind him explodes in a wave of wood, pushing Obito back , a tree starts to grow on the room until it hits the ceeling, but it dosent stop growing there, it keeps on going, forcing the ceeling until it collapses, in less then five Minutes Obito Uchiha`s hideout is nothing but a giant tree
Obito: *Reapears in a black sphere just out of the hideout* Sh*t! What was that…at least I equipped myself to battle the enemy before THAT happened! Ugh….no matter anymore, once the eye of the moon plan succeeds I wont need a hideout. But first…*Makes four fast handseals before being consumed by black sphere* I need to go after the missing Bijuu…
Extra Note: I just killed three characters in one chapter, deal with it.
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Chapter 651: A break from the battle
*The Raikage is seen slowly getting up from the ground*
A (thinking): Ugh…what happened, I remembered being beat up by Madara but then…*Turns to see Gaara, Mei and Onoki standing looking down at something*
A: HEY! What are you people looking at?
Mei :*Turns to look at A with a sad expresion* Its Tsunade…she`s…
Gaara: Dying…
A: WHAT?! *Stands up and walks to the Kage only to see Tsunade in a pool of blood around her* Tsunade! You cant die! Not just yet!
Tsunade (With difficulty): I…tried to put myself together and I succeeded…*Coughs*…but I lost too much blood…
Ohnoki: When the elders have to bury the young ones…*Looks up* This is truly war…
Tsunade (With difficulty): *Gives a small laugh* Don’t worry Tsuchikage…Im not that young…*Her young transformation vanishes and we get a full look at old Tsunade*
Ohnoki: *Smiles* You`re still young compared to me, slug princess…
A: *Sheding Tears* WHAT ARE YOU ALL SAYING?! STOP CRYING, SHE CAN STILL BE SAVED!!!
Tsunade (With difficulty): Raikage…stop. Its no use…I just want you to listen to my last request, my final words…
A: Tsunade…You may speak….
*Tsunade speaks but we don’t see what shes speaking *
A: WHAT?! WHY WOULD YOU ASK US THAT?!
Gaara: This request is very noble but…
Mei: Tsunade…I don’t quite understand why you are asking us this but…
Ohnoki: We Promise you, Slug Princess. *All the other kages look in astonish to him* If it all happens like you predict it to be, we promise you we will do as you requested.
Tsunade (With difficulty): Thank you, Tsuchikage Ohnoki… I have also one more thing to say…
*Tsunade speaks again, shocking even more the Kages*
A: Tsunade. Are you sure about this?
Tsunade: Absolutly…
Gaara: You are serious then? Do you really think…?
Mei: If you say so…we will take your word…
Ohnoki: Who would’ve known…*Slightly smiles*
Tsunade: I feel my time is coming my friends…I said all I have to say, its time…for me…to go…*Closes her eyes, dying with a smile on her face.*
*Right at the time the Hokage Bodyguards appear out of the ruined battlefield*
Genma: Hey look there they are! Wait…is that…Oh no…*Rushes to the kages*
A: Tsunade…*Takes out his cloak and wraps Tsunade around it* You are a true kage…and a true friend…
…
*Obito enters his hideout in a black sphere and starts walking when suddenly...*
Obito: What the-*Obito suddenly falls next to the wall of the cave hearing a thousand voices in his head saying random things about death and loneliness* Ugh…shut up…SHUT UP!!! *He punches the wall next to him causing it to crack, the voices stop and he is left there breathing heavily* What was that…no matter…*Walks to the center of the room* What happened here?…oh well, there is only one way to know…KAMIGAN!! *Images flash through Obito`s mind of Itachi`s and Sasuke`s battle against Kabuto and a final image of Anko waking up and walking away as if in pain* So…Kabuto was defeated…and the girl escaped…*Looks at Kabuto at his right, who is still traped in Itachi`s Genjutsu, He walks to him and looks Obito right in the eye* Dismiss.
*Kabuto opens both his eyes, confused*
Kabuto: What`s…happening?
Obito: Itachi trapped you in a genjutsu, the Izanami…
Kabuto: What happened? Where are my powers? And who are you?
Obito: Orochimaru stole your powers and I am the one you called Tobi.
Kabuto: Lord Orochimaru….is he alive?
Obito: He was for a short while in which he resurrected the Hokage we fought him and the edo Hokage…*Summons the kusanagi sword in a poof of smoke (Like Sasuke summons his weapons)* …and I got this as a trophy. I do not know how Orochimaru got a sword that originally belonged to the second Raikage, but…well, here it is.
Kabuto: May I look at it…*Psycho look on his face*
Obito: Of course...* Gives the blade to Kabuto who examinates it*
Kabuto: So….you killed Lord Orochimaru to get this…?
Obito: No, I-
Kabuto: YOU DIE! *Brings down the sword at Obito but the blade stops midair before hiting Obito*
Obito: You were Orochimaru`s right hand, you should know that the sword of Kusanagi can’t attack its own master. *Obito makes a small movement in his right hand and the blade is thrown back* And besides, why are you doing this anyway?
Kabuto: *Jumps back* Our deal is dead, you don’t have Sasuke with you anymore do you?
Obito: No, but I would have let you live if you hadn’t attacked me.
Kabuto: *Laughs* Do you think you can kill me-
Obito: Kusanagi. *The blade comes behind Kabuto`s back and impales him, Obito body flickers behind Obito and uses the human path to finish him off* Yes, I can kill you that easily. *Kabuto falls to the ground as Obito wonders deeper in the cave*
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*Sasuke and Taka are running through the forrest*
Suigetsu: You have been quiet Sasuke… what happened back there?
Sasuke: I have no obligation to tell you, I`ll just say it changed my point of view in a lot of things.
Suigetsu: So we`re good guys now.
Sasuke:…
Suigetsu: Gee, what a humor…
*The team Taka lands on the ground an continues running not noticing Naruto, leaned against a nearby tree in sage mode*
Naruto (thinking): Holy crap…that was close…
*Inside Naruto`s head*
Kurama: Yes it was, now we must keep going.
Naruto: Yeah…but…
Kurama: What is it Naruto?
Naruto: I haven’t slept for two days, Kurama, im tired…
Kurama: You cant be tired! You need to go there and save the world!
Naruto: Yeah, but Im so sleepy…Besides, dad is taking care of everything…*Yawns* I think I`ll just…
Kurama: Naruto don’t you dare sleep on me! Don’t you- …hes asleep…I cant believe he fell asleep in the middle of a war…
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*Obito Is walking back on his hideout, he is now wearing a black robe and a belt with scrolls attached to it, he walks until he is in front of Yamato in the tree trunk next ot the hashirama senju clone*
Obito: I have no longer use for you…* Touches the tree trunk and Yamato falls to the ground, he slowly gets up before looking at Obito and getting startled*
Yamato: You! Who are you?
Obito: I am the one under the mask. Madara Uchiha as you know me.
Yamato: What do you want of me?!
Obito: Nothing…much the opposite, really. You have no longer an use for me, so I am to dismiss of you.
Yamato: You`re here to kill me?!
Obito: You can say that as well…
Yamato : I see…that leaves me no choice…*Claps his hands togheter*
Obito: What…are you doing?
Yamato: Im taking you out with me! *Tree trunks start growing out of Yamato*
Obito: Releasing your Hashirama cells cant kill me.
Yamato: No…but for my wood, this whole tree is nothing but fuel…
Obito : What do you mean?
Yamato: I mean…*Smiles* Its over for you.
*The tree trunk behind him explodes in a wave of wood, pushing Obito back , a tree starts to grow on the room until it hits the ceeling, but it dosent stop growing there, it keeps on going, forcing the ceeling until it collapses, in less then five Minutes Obito Uchiha`s hideout is nothing but a giant tree
Obito: *Reapears in a black sphere just out of the hideout* Sh*t! What was that…at least I equipped myself to battle the enemy before THAT happened! Ugh….no matter anymore, once the eye of the moon plan succeeds I wont need a hideout. But first…*Makes four fast handseals before being consumed by black sphere* I need to go after the missing Bijuu…
Extra Note: I just killed three characters in one chapter, deal with it.
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