My failed Naruto predictions 628

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So here is the second failed prediction, fight scenes included, enjoy.

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Extra note: The idea of Naruto using an attack just like Minato, isnt that original, i know (Rtn, UNS3...me) but it seemed so right...

Chapter 628: Reinforcements Arrive


Naruto: Ughh * Thrown on the floor*

Obito: Give up, you have no way of stoping us… *Naruto`s bijuu mode starts going back to Kyuubi chakra mode*

Obito: Your chakra mode is regressing...keeping all those people safe must realy be tiring…

Naruto: I wont let you kill anymore of my friends…

Obito: *Smiles* I think I heard those words before...

Naruto: Then if you heard that I think you’ve heard it too…

Obito: ?

Naruto: WHEN I TOLD YOU TO SHUT THE F**K UP!!! *Dashes against obito an tries to kick him, but passes right through*

Obito: *Chuckles*… some people never learn… *Makes a series of handseals* Fire Style: Bomb Blast Dance

Naruto: S**t… *Jumps up high, dodging the fire wall*

Obito: Not so fast! *Uses Kamui to teleport a giant shuriken and launches it at Naruto*

*Naruto uses a chakra hand to push himself to the ground.*

Naruto (thinking): Damnit, He dodges every single attack of mine simply by letting me pass through him…I need a distraction…and I think I just got one! *Goes out of kyuubi chakra mode and does a handseal* Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu *Three clones appear and dash at Obito.*

Obito: What do you expect to do with shadow clones against me? *Easily defeats clones with taijutsu*

Naruto: *Smiles* To distract you *Vanishes in a poof of smoke*

Obito: Another Shadow Clone…?

Naruto: *Apears on top of Obito (like his father with the hirashim) in kyubi chakra mode and a rasengan in hand*

Naruto: Now I got you! *brings down Rasengan with chakra hand* Rasengan!

Obito: *Smiles and blocks the Rasengan with his left hand* Preta Path…

Naruto (thinking): He`s absorving chakra…just like Nagato! But that means…

Obito: Surprised?*Smiles* Did you think the rinnegan in my left eye was just for show? *Transforms his right hand into a canon with the Asura Path* You think imitating your father will help you defeat me? Some people never learn… *Points cannon at Naruto* Unluckily for you, I do. Asura Attack! *Cannon releases a Massive bleam of chakra*

*Naruto appears some meters away from Obito*

Naruto( thinking): Damn, that was a close one…Ill have to be careful from now on… *Goes out of Kyubi chakra mode and after some moments enters sage mode* There, ill save Kurama`s chakra in case of emergency, for now ill have to fight with that.

Obito (thinking): Damn hes even faster than his father…I was saving my rinnegan abilities for later but this boy made me pull them out before their own time…

Naruto: This time I wont fall for your tricks… *Dashes against Obito again.*

...

Killer B: WHEEEEE * Brings down Samehameda against Madara, Madara dodges it by back flipping*

Madara: Damnit… *Madara is surrounded by five other shinobi but he jumps back again*

Madara (thinking): I cant fight all of them at once, Obito is taking care of the Kyuubi and the Juubi is rampaging…What have I got myself into...*More Shinobi try to attack Madara but he dispels them with taijutsu*

*Madara gets surrounded by at least one hundred shinobi with Kyubi chakra*

Kumo Shinobi: NOW WE GOT YOU! *Madara escapes again by backfliping high in the air, but the shinobi follow him.*

Madara:*Activates Rinnegan* Allmighty Push! *Throws all the shinobi after Madara to several sides.*

Madara (thinking): I have to get Obito, he didn’t realize yet the Juubi is planning a Massive scale attack on the alliance.

...

*Naruto (Still in Sage Mode) and Obito are struggling in taijutsu*

Obito: Give up, I am far more experienced and skilled with you in physical combat…

Naruto: I cant give up when my friends are out there, fighting and believing in me!

Obito: THEN IM GOING TO KILL ALL YOUR FRIENDS, STARTING FROM THE HYUUGA GIRL!!!

Naruto: Wait…Hinata? *Naruto gets distracted for a second and is kicked away by Obito a right before Madara arives.*

Madara: Obito, have you dealt with the boy?

Obito: Im finishing him off…

Madara: Well, I don’t think you noticed, but the juubi is gathering energy, it will soon release an powerful attack at the shinobi alliance, and you wont like to be in its way when it does so...

Naruto: Wait…is the Juubi gathering energy?

Madara: Yes, not that you should be able to see it in your curent form, but you have been distracted. Even if you struggle now its too late, the Juubi is about to release a Tailed Beast Bomb

Naruto: WHAT?! BUT THAT WOULD KILL NEARLY ALL THE SHINOBI ALLIANCE!

Madara: *Chuckles* Yes…Let’s see what will you do next…Kyuubi…

Naruto: Damnit! *Goes kyuubi chakra mode and dashes off after the shinobi alliance.*

*Juubi roars and opens its mouth to start gathering energy for a Tailed Beast Bomb*

*Naruto arrives In front of the alliance.*

Sakura: Naruto!? What are you doing here? I thought you were fighting the masked guy!

Naruto: No time to explain! Sakura chan, everybody, run! NOW!

Shikamaru: But Naruto…

Naruto: I SAID RUN!!

*Naruto appears inside his head*

Naruto: Kurama! I need all your chakra to enter bijuu mode NOW!

Kurama: Are you sure, kit? If you got all my chakra at once you could access bijuu mode but it wouldn’t last long…

Naruto: I DON’T CARE!! If I do nothing all my friends will die!

Kurama: Well…its true, you cant fight the Juubi without this army…ok, but it will only last about a minute or a bit less.

Naruto: Well, then it will have to do…

*Naruto enters Bijuu mode*

Naruto: COME AT ME YOU….THING!

*The Juubi roars and launches a Tailed Beast Bomb at Naruto*

*Naruto materializes a kyubi made of chakra arund him and tries to block the bomb with its tails* Naruto: Sh*t…its… too…much! * Kyuubi made of chakra disappears (But hes still in his bijuu mode) *

Naruto: Gah…

???: Need some help? * Naruto turns back only to see a kunai flying over his shoulder and suddenly the Tailed Beast Bomb is gone Leaving only a crater (About the size of a rasenshuriken exploding) and some dust in the air.*

Naruto What the…? *Far away in the horizon a giant explosion happens*

Figure In the middle of the smoke : Long time no see Naruto…

Naruto: This voice…old man third?

*Smoke clears up and reveals the four hokages standing in the middle of the cratter*

Minato: And he is not alone...
 
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So this was your first one. It has potential, but it also has significant issues. being that the dialog doesn't seem to match the personalities of the characters. I'll be reading the rest and see if there's been improvement.
 

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So this was your first one. It has potential, but it also has significant issues. being that the dialog doesn't seem to match the personalities of the characters. I'll be reading the rest and see if there's been improvement.
Well, second chapter actually, but i give me a break it was my first fanfic, matching the characters and the personalities was the most difficult part of it..
 
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