My dream to become a famous rapper

[sasukeu]

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WILL IT COME TRUE?

 

[slayerdanger]

Yes, I like music about ***, it gets me "excited."

 

[Venomous Cobra]

Too much auto tune, too much
OT:maybe maybe not

 

[lndra]

If you have to advertise on NarutoBase, I'm afraid not.

 

[KING KISAME]

Super wack

 

[lndra]

Super wack

I listened to it.

It really is wack. Everything you rapped about felt so fake, try to be original man.

 

[sasukeu]

If you have to advertise on NarutoBase, I'm afraid not.

my first rap did you like it or not

 

[sasukeu]

everything i said was true

 

[lndra]

my first rap did you like it or not

No. There are about 999999999999999999999999 other rappers like you at home recording with Audacity.

I didn't like the tone, flow, nor the words you rapped about.

Do you have a possible future with this? Nah, not the way you are going.

Do you want a possible future with this? Be original and find you're own flow, because I swear this is wank.

 

[Zoids]

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[ToadSageNaruto]

honest opinion.

flows choppy. doesn't feel genuine. despite you rapping about the most mature things you can, it manages to sound childish.
just my opinion tho. don't let it stop ya. go for it. hell, soulja boy made it.

 

[sasukeu]

I listened to it.

It really is wack. Everything you rapped about felt so fake, try to be original man.

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you'd like this then

 

[lndra]

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you'd like this then

Music is about expressing yourself.

This was better but you need more emotion in you're flow, and try to talk less about "itches and money" and focus more on yourself. Because you are not making music for us, you are making music for you.