The video quality was nice, I could tell you got the videos from NyaaTorrents, and presumably from Leopard-Raws.
The timing and just random cut-scenes with mild effects won't work, buddy.
You'll need to sync those parts in and use effects with the music so that it'd be effective in terms of the flow of the whole AMV.
See this
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so you can see what I mean by using effects and syncing properly.
Now I'm not saying this to discourage you from continuing making AMVs, I'm just telling you this so that you can improve.
Don't take this the wrong way!
You can ask me for opinions or criticism if you want to, you can always message me.