[Approved] My 1st biography!!! pls overlook small mistakes :)

[AWSUM SID]

Basic Information

Name: Isamu Samuru
Nickname: White Phantom
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Clan: N/A

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Personality: Samuru has white hair and skin and wears a white collared coat. He is always seen walking around with a smile. Around girls he becomes flirtatious although he strikes out most of the time
Samuru is an avid fan of plays performed at the theater.When he is not in the theater, he is usually found at the local sweet shops indicating that he has a sweet tooth. Even while as a genin, Samuru is seen to eat Anpan( a type of Japanese sweet).

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Hidden Volcano
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: N/A
Elements: Fire Style (needs training)

Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
History:
Isamu Samuru, Son of Isamu Kotetsu, was referred to as the genius of the village.
Because of his white complexion the nickname " White Phantom" was given to him by fellow ninjas.
Growing up, Samuru had to face many hardships. His father was a Chuunin and died during the third great ninja war. His mother died giving birth to him.
Between the age of 4-11, he had nowhere to stay and mainly lived in the streets. One day he was being beaten by some drunk thugs, thankfully the academy teacher was passing by and managed to save him. He was admitted to the ninja academy and displayed natural talents when it came to ninjutsu.
His ultimate dream is to be the leader of the village.

Theme Song and Background Music: Painkiller( Judas Priest)


Battles: N/A

Won:N/A
Lost:N/A

~Approved~

 

[Madara mhm]

Basic Information

Name: Isamu Samuru
Nickname: White Phantom
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Clan: Isamu Clan

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Personality: Samuru has white hair and skin( which is a characteristic of clan members) and wears a white collared coat. He is always seen walking around with a smile. Around girls he becomes flirtatious and is also known as one of the more promiscuous men of the village.
During battle his personality becomes different and he changes into a very stern and serious person. He firmly believes that compassion and mercy towards opponents are grave mistakes during battle and does not hesitate to kill his foes without mercy.
Samuru is an avid fan of plays performed at the theater.When he is not in the theater, he is usually found at the local sweet shops indicating that he has a sweet tooth. Even while training the genin of his team, Samuru is seen to eat Anpan( a type of Japanese sweet).

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Hidden Volcano
Village of Alliance: Land of Fire

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Jounin/ Special ops
Specialty: No hand seals for fire release techniques
Elements: Fire
Wind
Water
Your ninjutsu:
Fire style: Dragon Breath jutsu (A rank)
Fire style: Burning Ash jutsu (C rank)
Fire Style: Phoenix Fire jutsu (B rank)
Fire Style: Fire Bullet jutsu (B rank)
Fire Style: Fire Wall Jutsu (C Rank)
Fire Style: Fire Dragon Jutsu (A rank)
Fire Style: Flames of Hell (S rank)
Wind Style: Pressure Bomb jutsu (S rank)
Wind Style: Whirl wind jutsu (B rank)
Wind Style: Air Bullets jutsu (B rank)
Water Style: Water Wall jutsu (B rank)
Water Style: Water Gun jutsu (A rank)
Water Style: Hydro Canon jutsu (A rank)
Water Style: Water Imprisonment jutsu
Water Style: Whirlpool jutsu (A rank)
Summoning jutsu: Leo ( a fire breathing lion with titanium claws and teeth)
Genjutsu: Dark Abyss (S rank)

Background Info.
History:
Isamu Samuru, Son of Isamu Kotetsu, was referred to as the genius of the village. Having Finished the Ninja Academy at the age of 7, his teachers as well as the elders of the village had high hopes for him. He also lived up to their expectations becoming a chuunin at the age of 9 and the next year he became a Jounin. Three years later, he recieved an invitation requesting him to join the special ops where he carried out many S rank missions and earned fame throughout the Land of Fire as well as neighboring Countries.
Because of his white complexion the nickname " White Phantom" was given to him by fellow ninjas.
Growing up, Samuru had to face many hardships. His father was a Chuunin and died during the third great ninja war. His mother died giving birth to him.
Between the age of 4-6, he had nowhere to stay and mainly lived in the streets. One day he was being beaten by some drunk thugs, thankfully the academy teacher was passing by and managed to save him. He was admitted to the ninja academy and displayed natural talents when it came to chakra control and ninjutsu. From then on his life began to change and in no time he was one of the top ninja in the village.
While learning the Fire style, he found out that he could execute his techniques without any hand sigh- such an ability was still unheard of.
During a mission, one of his close teammates showed mercy to the opponent but was killed by the enemy. After that, Samuru decided to never show mercy to his opponents no matter who they were.
Although he is a very devout ninja, around girls he cannot control his urges and this lead him to be involved in many relationships, both traditional and non-traditional.
His ultimate dream is to be the leader of the village.

Theme Song and Background Music: Painkiller( Judas Priest)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=WS6-vI70oc0

Battles: 346

Won:326
Lost:20

Your battles, have you been in any yet if not change to N/A. and you can only have Genin rank until you've reached enough posts for chuunin, thus your jutsus try and use this setup for your jutsu max rank you can use for your posts is E i think. im not sure.

 

[Super Kami Guru]

unfortunately got alot of work... You dont have any specialtys or jutsus (you get them from training with sempais or senseis) you arent a jounin because it is done by your post count. You haven't fought anyone. Just do those things hopefully itll get approved and you can get training to start learning jutsus

 

[Klaus]

Umm well it looks good but Remove your clan cause it doesn't exisit and to make up a clan you have to be an Official Sage. 2 your rank is your posting rank which is Genin. 3 You can only have 1 element as a Genin and only up to C-Rank or D not sure. you also have to learn the jutsus you can't just say I know these. As for battles those are the actual battles you've one not just made up.

 

[AWSUM SID]

Your battles, have you been in any yet if not change to N/A. and you can only have Genin rank until you've reached enough posts for chuunin, thus your jutsus try and use this setup for your jutsu max rank you can use for your posts is E i think. im not sure.

Thanks didn't know that...

 

[CleverMonkey]

Remove the clan, you have to have alot of more posts to make a custom clan ^^
The villages you pick have to be in the series, or be a custom village, made by someone else on this forum.
Your ninja rank is genin.
Remove your specialities, you are not allowed to have any yet.
You are only able to have one element at your current rank. So pick one element and put ~need training~ behind it.
Under ninjutsu you should write:

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Any other jutsu you have to get through training with a senpai/sensei.

^^

 

[AWSUM SID]

Umm well it looks good but Remove your clan cause it doesn't exisit and to make up a clan you have to be an Official Sage. 2 your rank is your posting rank which is Genin. 3 You can only have 1 element as a Genin and only up to C-Rank or D not sure. you also have to learn the jutsus you can't just say I know these. As for battles those are the actual battles you've one not just made up.

Can u check if its okay now??:shrug::shrug::shrug:

 

[Beifong]

good bio

 

[Klaus]

looks better now although you can't have a specialty in a said element unless you've mastered it.

 

[xlilyx]

Lovely work, you've done very well. ^^ I hope it gets approved and enjoy your time in the RP arena.

 

[AWSUM SID]

looks better now although you can't have a specialty in a said element unless you've mastered it.

Thanks for pointing out the errors... can u pls have another look and point out the flaws???
ps... do i have to do anything else so that the moderators might accept it???

 

[AWSUM SID]

Lovely work, you've done very well. ^^ I hope it gets approved and enjoy your time in the RP arena.

Thanks alot!!! as u can see i m also excited!! xdxdxd

 

[JojocIaw]

Spoiler

Basic Information

Name: Isamu Samuru
Nickname: White Phantom
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Clan: N/A

You must be registered for see images

Personality: Samuru has white hair and skin( which is a characteristic of clan members) and wears a white collared coat. He is always seen walking around with a smile. Around girls he becomes flirtatious although he strikes out most of the time
Samuru is an avid fan of plays performed at the theater.When he is not in the theater, he is usually found at the local sweet shops indicating that he has a sweet tooth. Even while as a genin, Samuru is seen to eat Anpan( a type of Japanese sweet).

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Hidden Volcano
Village of Alliance: Land of Fire

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: N/A
Elements:N/A
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
History:
Isamu Samuru, Son of Isamu Kotetsu, was referred to as the genius of the village.
Because of his white complexion the nickname " White Phantom" was given to him by fellow ninjas.
Growing up, Samuru had to face many hardships. His father was a Chuunin and died during the third great ninja war. His mother died giving birth to him.
Between the age of 4-11, he had nowhere to stay and mainly lived in the streets. One day he was being beaten by some drunk thugs, thankfully the academy teacher was passing by and managed to save him. He was admitted to the ninja academy and displayed natural talents when it came to chakra control and ninjutsu.
His ultimate dream is to be the leader of the village.

Theme Song and Background Music: Painkiller( Judas Priest)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=WS6-vI70oc0

Battles: N/A

Won:N/A
Lost:N/A

Your battles, have you been in any yet if not change to N/A. and you can only have Genin rank until you've reached enough posts for chuunin, thus your jutsus try and use this setup for your jutsu max rank you can use for your posts is E i think. im not sure.

unfortunately got alot of work... You dont have any specialtys or jutsus (you get them from training with sempais or senseis) you arent a jounin because it is done by your post count. You haven't fought anyone. Just do those things hopefully itll get approved and you can get training to start learning jutsus

Umm well it looks good but Remove your clan cause it doesn't exisit and to make up a clan you have to be an Official Sage. 2 your rank is your posting rank which is Genin. 3 You can only have 1 element as a Genin and only up to C-Rank or D not sure. you also have to learn the jutsus you can't just say I know these. As for battles those are the actual battles you've one not just made up.

I was going to say this but you guys beat me to it.

Good luck in your RP career and if you ever need help don't be afraid to ask us. Try to stay out of trouble and be sure to follow the rules.

Also in the future please refrain from multiposting. Use this button to qoute several people like I did and you can answer those you want to.

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OH the NB FAQ link in my thread should have all the information you could ever need. Take a gander and enlighten yourself.

 

[AWSUM SID]

I was going to say this but you guys beat me to it.

Good luck in your RP career and if you ever need help don't be afraid to ask us. Try to stay out of trouble and be sure to follow the rules.

Also in the future please refrain from multiposting. Use this button to qoute several people like I did and you can answer those you want to.

You must be registered for see images

OH the NB FAQ link in my thread should have all the information you could ever need. Take a gander and enlighten yourself.

thanks!!! :ghehe::ghehe:

 

[Vision]

## Add a first element that you wished to learn. Then put "needs training" next to it. ##​