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genjutsu is a technique where ninja implant there own chakra into there opponents mind which cause them to see illusions a few genjutsu user are itachi and sasuke and the last one learned was intragation
 

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genjutsu is a technique where ninja implant there own chakra into there opponents mind which cause them to see illusions a few genjutsu user are itachi and sasuke and the last one learned was intragation
You mean you learned this last?

Genjutsu: Jinmon) - Illusion Technique: Interrogation
Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A illusion used to force the enemy to give out info by torturing them in there minds.
 

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yes Mr.Mugen im on PS3 so it really hard to copy and paste
I understand ^^

(Genjutsu: Jigoku Gouka) - Illusion Technique: Hell Fire
Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion were the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and enveloping its target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.

Well this is still basic genjutsu.So not much to explain here.Just focus mind into my head and try to make me see the illusion.
 

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I understand ^^

(Genjutsu: Jigoku Gouka) - Illusion Technique: Hell Fire
Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion were the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and enveloping its target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.

Well this is still basic genjutsu.So not much to explain here.Just focus mind into my head and try to make me see the illusion.
i start by focusing on my own chakra after focusing on my chakra for a bit i then focus my chakra into your mind making you see a giaint ball that decends down on you engolfing
 

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i start by focusing on channeling my own chakra,after focusing on channeling my chakra for a bit i then focus my chakra into your mind making you see a giaint fire ball that decends down on you engolfing

Red is what I added,and the strikes are on words that are mis-used.

I want you to re-do your descreption by my edits.Also explain in more detail on how you channel the chakra in my mind.
 

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Red is what I added,and the strikes are on words that are mis-used.

I want you to re-do your descreption by my edits.Also explain in more detail on how you channel the chakra in my mind.
i start by channeling my chakra after i am done channeling my chakra i then focus on the very hard and release it after it is released i the maniplate my chakra and force it into your mind once the chakra is implanted it causes you to see a giant fire ball that comes down from the sky on you and engulfs you
 

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i start by channeling my chakra after i am done channeling my chakrawtf i then focus on the very hard ?and release it after it is released makes no sense i the maniplate my chakra and force it into your mind once the chakra is implanted it causes you to see a giant fire ball that comes down from the sky on you and engulfs you
O_O...your paragraph has no sense at all...
 

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i begin channeling my chakra while i am channeling my chakra i start focusing my chakra into your mind as soon as enough chakra is implanted in your mind i make you see a giant fire ball that decends from the sky towards and engulfs you
 

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i begin channeling my chakra. While i am channeling my chakra, i start focusing my chakra into your mind; as soon as enough chakra is implanted in your mind i make you see a giant fire ball that decends from the sky towards and engulfs you.
Your grammar needs some serious help bro O_O

Now I am sorry to be picky on this,but trust me this will help you in the future.

Re-write the whole thing with the red edits I added.Now I cant make sure you will not copy-paste it off,but its for your benefit if you actually re-write it.
 

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i begin channeling my chakra.While i am channeling my chakra,i start focusing my chakra into your mind;as soon as enough chakra is implanted in your mind i make you see a giant fire ball that decends from the sky towards and engulfs you.


is that better sensei. I know my grammar suck but i am try to work on it
 
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i begin channeling my chakra.While i am channeling my chakra,i start focusing my chakra into your mind;as soon as enough chakra is implanted in your mind i make you see a giant fire ball that decends from the sky towards and engulfs you.


is that better sensei. I know my grammar suck but i am try to work on it
Its all good.

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(Konoha-Ryū: Yanagi) -Leaf Ninja Art: Willow
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 35
Description: The user waves their sword back and forth, which when seen by the target locks them in a genjutsu which causes them to hallucinate multiple waving arms. The movement resembles that of a willow tree blowing in the wind. With the enemy off guard, the user is free to cut them down.

Well there really isnt much to explain here. Just wave your sword back and forth while forcing chakra quickly into my clones mind.Make him fall in the genjutsu described,and than kill him while he is open.
 

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i pull my sword out and wave it back and forth focusing while i channel my chakra into your clones mind; When enough chakra is implanted in your clones mind i make him see a bunch of waving arm
 

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i pull my sword out and wave it back and forth focusing while i channel my chakra into your clones mind; When enough chakra is implanted in your clones mind i make him see a bunch of waving arm that resembles the movements of a willow tree in the wind then as your clones off guard i run up and stab him in throat with a kunia
 

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i pull my sword out and wave it back and forth focusing while i channel my chakra into your clones mind; When enough chakra is implanted in your clones mind i make him see a bunch of waving arm that resembles the movements of a willow tree in the wind then as your clones off guard i run up and stab him in throat with a kunia
wrong...well depends. Why did you use a kunai to kill my clone when you had a sword in your hands? o_O
 

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idk ill redo it

i pull my sword out and wave it back and forth focusing while i channel my chakra into your clones mind; When enough chakra is implanted in your clones mind i make him see a bunch of waving arm that resembles the movements of a willow tree in the wind then as your clones off guard i run up and stab him in throat with my sword
 

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idk ill redo it

i pull my sword out and wave it back and forth focusing while i channel my chakra into your clones mind; When enough chakra is implanted in your clones mind i make him see a bunch of waving arm that resembles the movements of a willow tree in the wind then as your clones off guard i run up and stab him in throat with my sword
Genjutsu: Ingemame Ketsugō sakkaku) - Illusion Technique String Bean Binding Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Similar to Illusion Technique: Tree Binding Death, where the user first disappears, while the target sees several bean vines growing from the ground. These vines bind the target body, lifting them into the air. Then a bean pod rises from the ground to reveal the user, ready to stike.

You've seen kurenai do this in naruto.Try it out,its nothing diffrent than other genjutsus :p
 
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