Mistake of misplace

[AlexUchina]

The time goes on
I am alone
standing the mistake

Knowing the pain
the hurt
of one's words

feeling the sorrow
the tears
of one's anger

hearing the hate
the reject
of one's broken trust

Seeing the one
the pain
of one's back stab

I know I stand
alone I face
is the work of misplace.

 

[Naruto Ninetails]

nice one...

 

[AlexUchina]

Thanks

 

[Mihaelz]

Nice o-o

Very deep, well I mean I took poetry so I hope I'm analyzing it correctly, if not im overthinking it.

Still though nice job.