[Approved] Meh, my attempt at a bio. (Needs re-approval)

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Name: Steven Kinha
Nickname: Electro
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Clan: None

Looks: He is 6-1 feet tall and is very skinny. He has dark brown, straight and short, hair. He is white, and has light blue eyes. He has a small sideways cut on his right cheek which is visible from mid range. He wears a black short sleeve trench-coat that has rips on the bottom and on the sleeves. Under this he wears a yellow shirt with blue electric designs on it, and black jeans and black shoes.

He wears a wrist-cuff, (OK I don’t know what there called but at least its something) That goes from the middle of his left forearm to the end of his fingers and a glove made of some sort of metal (I don’t know what I’ll just say its made up of metal.) that goes over this. He has a katana with a black sheath-(Thing that holds sword) on his left hip.

Personality: Steven is usually a very happy guy just walking around konohagure looking for something to do. he is usually always bored and trying to stay happy, but it seems that he has 2 personalities. He can be happy and nice one moment and be cold and angry the next. Even he does not know why this happens but most of the time he is in a happy state of manner. While hes happy he is usually just looking for something to do, which is look for a worthy opponent to spar with. While hes mad, which is not much of the time, Hes looking to fight and kill someone, possibly torture them to death, and almost doesn’t seem to have emotion.

Steven usually keeps to himself though, even while happy, and nobody really notices. He is very energetic, but never so much that he cant control himself, unless hes angry. Steven knows that one day hes going to die, even be killed by another person, but he doesn’t seem to care. He actually doesn’t really care about anything. Even pain. This can help in battle, yet it can be his downfall, he cares so little, he wouldnt even try to heal any kind of wound until he gets back to his home, so he wouldn’t know how to heal wounds during battle.

Even though Steven is happy most of the time, its as if his soul is slowly fading away. Because there isn’t anything worthwhile for him to do, he is slowly starting to believe he is not needed in konoha or anywhere else. But he still tries to find ways to be useful, but the only good thing hes found so far is to be a ninja, and that is why he is still in konoha.

Village of Birth: Konoha

Village of Alliance: Konoha

Ninja Rank: Genin

Specialty:

Elements:Lightning

Ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



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Raiton No Jutsu (Lightning Technique)
Type: Defence/Attack
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.


(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.


Raiton: Raijingu Sanda (Lightning Style: Raging Thunder)
Type: Attack
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.


Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu (Lightning Style: Thunder Saber)
Type: Attack
Rank: D
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.





(Sennen Goroshi) - 1000 Years Of Death

Rank:E
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:5(apply damage cost for kunai and exlopsives seprately if either or both are used with this jutsu)
Description:The user makes the sign of the tiger and forceable puches it into the enemys behind.


(Konoha Senpu) - Leaf Hurricane

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user makes a jumping spin kick up high and while opponent has ducked makes a mid-level kick that connects in the rib cage area.



(Konoha reppu) - Leaf Gale

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack that is a comprised of a leg sweep


(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponent.





(Fukumi Hari) - Hidden Needles

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: The user is able to call forth needles into their mouth and then spit them at their opponent with great accuracy.


(Kage Shuriken no Jutsu) - Shadow Shuriken Technique

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:20
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Windmill Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.


(Kanashibari no Jutsu) - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:15
Damge Points:N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.


(Ninpou: Gekka Bijin) - Ninja Arts: Beauty Under the Moonlight

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user will create a swarm of sakura(cherry blossoms)petals to surround there opponents and swirl around them causing confusion.The user can then attack there opponent from any angle they choose.Blinds opponents eyes for the turn this jutsu is used.



(Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu) - Cherry Blossom Snow Storm Technique

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The user will hurl kunai with pouches attached at their target. Upon impact, the pouches explode, releasing small explosive notes. Due to the large number of kunai thrown, a shower of notes will rain down on the target. The user will then throw one final kunai with an active explosive note at the target. It will begin to burn, and by igniting the falling smaller notes it will cause a gigantic explosion.


(Utsusemi no Jutsu) - Empty Cicada Shell Technique

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Forming the needed hand seals, a shinobi can project his voice to a different area to hide their location and the number of allies at their side. It is an excellent complement to stealth tactics.


(Muon Satsujin Jutsu) - Silent Homicide Technique

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: Muon Satsujin Jutsu, the ability to commit a silent homicide, is a technique to dispatch your foe with no warning. Your quick speed and skills will instantly kill them before they can provide a defense.
Tactic:Best used with Hidden Mist jutsu.






Genjutsu: Kai (Illusion Technique: Release)

Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15 (+3 for each rank above c)
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Dispells All genjutsu except Eye Techniques,Bringer Of Darkness, Demonic Flute Illusion:Binding Chains, Tree Binding Death, and Toad Duet.



Genjutsu: Kokohin (Illusion Technique: False surrounding)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10(+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user controls creates a false surrounding which can change the way an object or small area looks(if used double then its a layer of false surroundings not easy noticed by the enemy).



Genjutsu: Kahen Tonsou (Illusion Technique: Flower Petal Escape)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user vanishes in a whirlwind of sakura petals.



Genjutsu: Kasumi (Illusion Technique: Servant)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: An illusionary servant that is really a paper bomb that once in range of the opponent will explode.



Genjutsu: Kasumi Juusha (Illusion Technique: Mist Servant)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real,
the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear
the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.



Magen: Narakumi (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Causes the enemy to see a whirlwind of leaves and a spinning world that puts the enemy to sleep for one turn.






History: Steven was born in konoha, and has lived there for as long as he can remember. Until he was five he was living a normal life, with his mom- morikhu kinha. Of course he had a dad but his dad was a shinobi <-(I think that’s what its called, but correct me if I'm wrong) and was always out on missions. One day his father finally died out on a mission, murdered by the enemy he was fighting. Stevens mom had not told Steven until he was seven, surprisingly, but of course Steven had gotten smart enough to understand that his dad hadn’t come home in 2 years, and no mission could be that long and he demanded an explanation. His mom finally explained to him. Steven was so dumbstruck he stayed in his room for 2 weeks to figure out how to get over this. He was only 7 so death never really crossed his mind. about a year later his mom couldn’t seem to take it anymore. as her son ate breakfast at the table, Steven had no emotion. He was 8 but seemed like a teenager and almost nothing came out of his mouth, sometimes for days. She couldn’t take how her husband was dead and how her son seemed dead. That night she slit her neck and died, committing suicide, but left a note for Steven. It said to always be happy and don’t commit suicide, and to enjoy his life, as much and as long as possible. So he did.

Well, until he was about 11 anyways. He was an orphan but he was able to take care of himself most of the time. So when he was 11 he witnessed a fight going on between 3 people, 1 on 2. The 2 kept trying to hit him but he never got hit, yet he never threw a punch. The 2 guys got so worn out they stopped trying and walked away. Steven went up to the man and asked how this was possible and he said, "Lots and lots of training." Steven thought that he should be like that man and be able to be so fast and cool. He started training that day by figuring out how fast he already was, but he couldn’t move nearly as fast as the man. But then he figured that maybe it was because he had trained so much. He started his training with running as fast as he could everyday around his house.

About six months later Steven hadn’t gotten any faster or any stronger, so he tried different methods. He figured out the best way was not to power up his body, but maybe it was his senses he should power up, like sight. He started out by getting his friends, or any other orphans there where to throw rocks at him so he could dodge them. Eventually he mastered this and worked his way up to kunai and shuriken dodging.

When Steven was 15 he was known as one of the fastest people around, and one of the most qualified people to be jumping from building to building. Although he was fast, he was not very strong, so he decided he needed a good weapon. So he looked around konoha for anything that would work and found some kunai but that wasn’t enough. He needed something that would last. But he would needed money to get something like that. He found a weapons seller and asked for whatever he would give Steven for the amount of money he had, which was only enough to buy a couple kunai. But the seller rather made a mistake, or thought that the boy was desperate for a weapon, and gave Steven a new katana. Steven took it and started cutting stuff, like trees with it right away.

One day Steven had been playing with his sword, that he has had for about a month, and had decided to walk on the normal roads back home instead of the rooftops he usually ran on. He was attacked by another man with a sword that was bigger and double edged. They fought for a good 20 minutes but Steven finally gave up and had lost, but this guy wasn’t in it to spar, he wanted to kill, he sliced Steven several times on his hands and upper body, and took his money but before he was finished some shinobi finally came to stop the fight but the swordsman ran away.

Steven recovered in about 7 months and had many scars on his stomach and left hand. He decided to cover up all his injured body parts in clothing or armor. His training after this consisted of mostly just fighting other people.

Picture: None

Theme Song and Background Music: Theme- Make you feel better by: Red Hot Chili Peppers

Battles
Won: 0
Lost: 0

I guess I need re-approval. I updated my jutsus. If I did this re-approving thing wrong please correct me.
EDIT: Ok, I just figured out that I may have done this wrong, but I have been told 2 different things. I repost my bio on a new thread with the updates, and that I post my new stuff on the thread of my approved bio. Eh, im confused. I hope both ways work.

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(Karasuhebi-Ittou)-Black Snake-sword
Type: Weapon
Rank: B
Chakra cost: 25 for chakra wave
Damage: slash damage depends on the actual slash, 40 for chakra wave
Description: This swords blade is roughly 4 feet long, very thin, and black, with a lightning bolt design from the tip of the blade to the hilt on its left side. The hilt is circle shaped, and is blue, with a lightning bolt design going around it. The tsuba (Which would be the thing that holds the blade and the hilt together) is square, and thick with some sort of metal. This sword is not indestructible, but it is quite strong, and durable because of its thin blade. It has a black sheath.
The sword can be filled with lightning chakra to make the sword sharper, and gains 2 more blades appear to each side of it, 2 inches away. Meaning when lightning chakra goes into the blade, it gains 2 more, making it easier to slash somebody. The chakra blades do connect to the tsuba though.
The user may slash the blade in any direction to do a mid-range lightning chakra wave that is in the shape of a C. This wave is about 5 ft long, 2 ft wide.

*Can only be used by Electro
*When sword gains the 2 other blades the other blades gap between eachother can have things go through them
*The other 2 blades are as sharp as the original blade, but are thinner due to them being made up of chakra.
*Chakra wave can only be used 3 times.

Is now added as my weapon for this bio. Re-update, or something... I dont know...
 
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